Evans Daughter

The author's writing style is quite good, but the protagonist doesn't seem to have too many roles? Finally, I suggest you add a male protagonist, I recommend Sirius (personal opinion) (don't curse) (dog head) [Note] This book is really good-looking, the portrayal of the protagonist is very natural, and it can really fit into the HP (personal opinion) [Thinking] [Thinking] Can you consider adding a male protagonist? [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Adding a male protagonist may be a good way to describe the protagonist [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Actually, this fanfic may just be a retelling of the original plot, except that Harry's childhood was cured by his aunt. I feel that the author should write more about his aunt later on. Otherwise, this fanfic will be useless. After all, Tomato also has the full text of Harry Potter.

It's very interesting, but the author doesn't like Draco. He wants to see the friendship between the savior and Malfoy, and doesn't want to be prejudiced by the academy.

Come on (ง•̀_•́)งThe author's writing is very good. Don't care about other people's comments. This is the author's book. The author can write whatever he wants. Why does it have to be Ha Jin? He insists on the author writing. Maybe the writing will be worse by then. After reading the author's book, I actually had a lot of emotion in my heart. I feel that the author has presented us with a new Harry who was well taken care of and raised. This Harry will be sensitive but will not have low self-esteem. He will not say derogatory words about himself such as being indecisive or worthless like in the original book. Ron's character is also very realistic. At least so far, I don't feel that the character has been broken. He will be embarrassed for his family but will not look down on his family. He is carefree but very sensitive and has a bit of low self-esteem (?) Hermione didn't have a bad character either. At least in my opinion, when I saw Hermione praising Lorna, I didn't know why it was so funny (◇) Congratulations to Lorna, Du Yuikai (o^^o) When I saw the part where Harry invited Hermione to his house, I can only say that it was too real. First of all, the story is set in England. Secondly, Hermione is precocious. Finally, Harry's emotional intelligence is only as much as a teaspoon. Finally, I would like to praise the author (?) I really like the warm daily life. Let me die in all wars. ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ I sincerely hope that the author will become better and better (?) To add, I hope the heroine can appear more often, but it suddenly feels like there are too few scenes.

Can you write Sirius as cp? [Crying][Crying][Crying] I really want to see the combination of my aunt and my godfather!

First come and give me five stars to encourage you~[Like][Like][Like] This is the first time I've seen an HP fanfic where the protagonist is an ordinary person, a very novel setting! ! ! Many readers and I feel that the author, Baozi, can be more bold! ! ! The heroine is a Chinese with a sound soul, and she can definitely join in Chinese metaphysics~~~ And now that I think the protagonist has less roles, she can vigorously develop her career! ! Build your own network! ! There is no need to give all the shots to the three little ones~ Another point that I think is very important is that I saw that some readers suggested matching the protagonist with Snape and Sirius, but some readers and I expressed strong rejection. Reject! Reject! Reject! Not to mention that their wizards look down on ordinary people from the bottom of their hearts (except for Wesley). More importantly, they are obviously people from two worlds, and there is no need to merge together (except for Jacob and Queenie) (Actually, I really don't want to read about the protagonists and their love stories. I searched a lot on the platform. I'm really tired of it. I'm tired of it. I'm tired of it. I'm even a little bored. I want to see how ordinary people wander around the two worlds and what solutions they have to solve problems. I don't want to read about falling in love. Why can't the protagonist concentrate on his career and be beautiful~~~~Of course it's just my idea, don't worry~) After all, the biggest highlight of this article compared to other fanfics is that the main character is not a wizard. The heroine should have a lot of room to operate in the world of ordinary people~ Finally, I really suggest that the author should be more imaginative, otherwise the protagonist will feel like a tool~ (It's not cool enough~) [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's a great book. The subject matter is very good. There are very few books where the heroine is a Muggle (´▽｀)/

I don't quite understand. The original version of Harry and the others is too long, and they haven't changed much.

I hope to see the protagonist radiate his own light. Giving Harry Potter a complete childhood is not the only role of the protagonist. I thought that Harry Potter, who was taught by the heroine, would do a better job in dealing with others, but I was a bit disappointed. PS: I just want to say that the author doesn't need to pay attention to my words. Writing is not easy, so just be happy.

He's obviously a time traveler, but he doesn't have any golden fingers. In addition to Chinese, can't he add some spells and the like? For example, is it a Taoist magic, or a Buddhist treasure?

It's still good, but there is too little description on the heroine's side and too much on Harry's side. I like the subject matter very much, and I haven't seen a few books after looking for it for a long time.

It is recommended that the author asks for copyright fees from the original work

Very interesting, this book has a very fresh perspective for me

It would be great if the word "sister" could be removed. Don't foreign brothers and sisters all call each other by their first names? It's very sad to see.

It looks good, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Which... Author, are you planning to dismantle the official version? Is Kuo Kuo enough to give an accurate answer?

It's very interesting. I hope the author will work hard.

It's very beautiful, keep it up

Well, the author needs to work hard!

I really like this setting

Only when I saw it at the end did I realize that there is no cp

Come on! Love this book very much!

Okay, pretty good

Very beautiful, highly recommended

So funny, hahaha

Is the author really not planning to write it? It's really beautiful.