Accidentally reborn on Hong Kong Island. In the late 1970s and early 1980s, Hong Kong Island was a mixed bag of good and bad, with collusion between politics and business, and numerous gangs. All kinds of ruthless people appeared, but few actually became tycoons in the end. And I, Lin Zui, vowed to become the man who unified Hong Kong Island. As a disciple of Hongxing's outer sect, Lin Zui started his social journey from a small boy.
Reader comments
I haven't read much, but I know the plot but don't know how to find ways to gain benefits. Not to mention, I want to be the boss and play with my brains, but I got drunk many times in Chapter 10! Keeping a clear mind is the most basic condition for playing with the mind. If it is absolutely safe, you have to drink more to celebrate and I won't say anything. But you, the protagonist, have nothing to do but drink!
It's written like a running account, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable [face covering]. The writing style needs to be improved.
It's a rubbish book. I read the first few chapters and was afraid of getting into trouble. They all went out to do this and didn't want to offend others. When they were bullied, they shrank like a tortoise and pretended nothing happened. It was just like copying homework without beginning or end.
Brother, don't just follow the hype, at least make some changes.
It feels like an assembly line operation, and the content of the story is skinny but not fleshy.
After reading more than ten chapters, I felt it was a bit confusing, and the plot was wrong, and it was a bit out of place. Many plots are in sequence, but the author actually wrote them all together, and Chen Haonan turned out to be the leader of the Red Stick Hall, while Liangkun was the straw sandal, and he actually had to compete for the top spot. I felt that the plots before and after did not match up. I just wrote whatever came to my mind.
The plot of this book is messy. It only gives people a third-person perspective, and the sense of storytelling is not specific. It is as if someone is telling you a story that he had a fight today, and then a month later, he recovered from the injury, and then he was hospitalized. After that, he beat someone to death. It feels like it is just telling a story, and there is no feeling at all.
So chaotic and inexplicable
The writing is very artistic~~
It's good to watch, the plot is exciting, and there are many storylines.
I don't understand. Are you strong or not? I don't understand.
Are you copying from the comics? Is this a novel? Storytelling!
This is not a novel, it is a movie introduction. It is an introduction in the form of a novel.
It feels so uncomfortable to watch, like a running narrative, and I can't get into the plot.
The flow of text throughout is the same regardless of whether there is a protagonist, so I might as well just read the comics.
It feels like a narrative, with no sense of immersion and basically everything is mentioned in one stroke.
If you don't know how to write, then don't write. Go into the factory. You are working on an assembly line and have no emotion at all.
It's like he's explaining it. Most unfinished eunuch books ask for the same way of writing, so I'll be done with the introduction.
If there is a negative score, I will never give one star. Is this just a novel? Not as good as an outline
I haven't read much, but I know the plot but don't know how to find ways to gain benefits. Not to mention, I want to be the boss and play with my brains, but I got drunk many times in Chapter 10! Keeping a clear mind is the most basic condition for playing with the mind. If it is absolutely safe, you have to drink more to celebrate and I won't say anything. But you, the protagonist, have nothing to do but drink!
It's written like a running account, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable [face covering]. The writing style needs to be improved.
It's a rubbish book. I read the first few chapters and was afraid of getting into trouble. They all went out to do this and didn't want to offend others. When they were bullied, they shrank like a tortoise and pretended nothing happened. It was just like copying homework without beginning or end.
Brother, don't just follow the hype, at least make some changes.
It feels like an assembly line operation, and the content of the story is skinny but not fleshy.
After reading more than ten chapters, I felt it was a bit confusing, and the plot was wrong, and it was a bit out of place. Many plots are in sequence, but the author actually wrote them all together, and Chen Haonan turned out to be the leader of the Red Stick Hall, while Liangkun was the straw sandal, and he actually had to compete for the top spot. I felt that the plots before and after did not match up. I just wrote whatever came to my mind.
The plot of this book is messy. It only gives people a third-person perspective, and the sense of storytelling is not specific. It is as if someone is telling you a story that he had a fight today, and then a month later, he recovered from the injury, and then he was hospitalized. After that, he beat someone to death. It feels like it is just telling a story, and there is no feeling at all.
So chaotic and inexplicable
The writing is very artistic~~
It's good to watch, the plot is exciting, and there are many storylines.
I don't understand. Are you strong or not? I don't understand.
Are you copying from the comics? Is this a novel? Storytelling!
This is not a novel, it is a movie introduction. It is an introduction in the form of a novel.
It feels so uncomfortable to watch, like a running narrative, and I can't get into the plot.
The flow of text throughout is the same regardless of whether there is a protagonist, so I might as well just read the comics.
It feels like a narrative, with no sense of immersion and basically everything is mentioned in one stroke.
If you don't know how to write, then don't write. Go into the factory. You are working on an assembly line and have no emotion at all.
It's like he's explaining it. Most unfinished eunuch books ask for the same way of writing, so I'll be done with the introduction.
If there is a negative score, I will never give one star. Is this just a novel? Not as good as an outline
Could you please be more careful?
The writing is too stiff,
Poor, a messy account
Always telling stories. Running account. . . .
I can only say that it's okay