Original Western Fantasy
In order to end the endless fate of witches, the Miracle Witch embarks on the path of slaying witches.
Witches are considered alien beings in the world, who feed on the magic of the world and can play with the rules at will. They use magic that violates the rules and are wanted by the Vatican.
One body has two souls, equal and opposite, working hard to live (and die), falling into the witch's chess game and becoming a variable. What he and she expect is nothing more than life and death. They are destined to follow their fate and reach the end. What is waiting for them at the end is not an answer, only a choice.
Those who seek life die, and those who seek death survive, but miracles no longer occur.
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Reader comments
Supplementary comments.
Overall, the writing is pretty good. There is no problem with the description. In terms of setting, compared with a lot of similar settings on the Tomato platform, it cannot be said that it is not new. The story line is not bad, at least I haven't seen anything that is too abrupt so far.
But to be honest, first of all, this novel was not very attractive to me at first. I also skipped two chapters before I felt like I could continue reading. I don't know if it was my personal illusion in terms of writing. I always felt it was a little immature, and some parts of the description were a bit redundant and seemed a bit deliberate. The writing is not bad, but it felt very bland when I read it. At least I personally felt that I lacked the desire to read on.
However, although I really want to give you some advice, I am just a reader (scratching my head). If you ask me to write about it, I will feel better after reading it. If you ask me to write it myself, I may not be able to write it at all, so I can only say to work on it.
This reader is very good and secretly gave the author a five-star rating. Jpg
This unknown creature passed by quietly and left a five-star review
This reader was very kind, so he gave the author a five-star review. Jpg (laughs
I was attracted by the beginning, a rare western fantasy witch story, I like it
It's not brainless, it's comfortable to watch no matter how you read it, the content is also very substantial, coherent and fluent, so many reviews for the time being.
Supplementary comments. Overall, the writing is pretty good. There is no problem with the description. In terms of setting, compared with a lot of similar settings on the Tomato platform, it cannot be said that it is not new. The story line is not bad, at least I haven't seen anything that is too abrupt so far. But to be honest, first of all, this novel was not very attractive to me at first. I also skipped two chapters before I felt like I could continue reading. I don't know if it was my personal illusion in terms of writing. I always felt it was a little immature, and some parts of the description were a bit redundant and seemed a bit deliberate. The writing is not bad, but it felt very bland when I read it. At least I personally felt that I lacked the desire to read on. However, although I really want to give you some advice, I am just a reader (scratching my head). If you ask me to write about it, I will feel better after reading it. If you ask me to write it myself, I may not be able to write it at all, so I can only say to work on it.
This reader is very good and secretly gave the author a five-star rating. Jpg
This unknown creature passed by quietly and left a five-star review
This reader was very kind, so he gave the author a five-star review. Jpg (laughs
I was attracted by the beginning, a rare western fantasy witch story, I like it
It's not brainless, it's comfortable to watch no matter how you read it, the content is also very substantial, coherent and fluent, so many reviews for the time being.
Looks good, the setting is interesting
It's good-looking, but it's not good enough.
Come back and see if it's okay