Pirates: Twelve Talismans, the Whole Group Becomes Four Emperors

Man, to be honest, I don't say how detailed the writing is, but it is the best fanfic I have ever seen in 🍅. It did not take away the halo and position of the protagonist, but it also wrote the vividness of the protagonist and found his own position. The image of the character is very good, and the original character has no OOC at all, and the plot has improved. There is a degree of relaxation, and the understanding of One Piece is not out of the ordinary. I do not interfere with a complete God's perspective. Instead, as a party who knows the inside story, I use a more humane way or a more direct "I know, I know" and do not deceive my partners and say I don't know. To be honest, like it [Love]

The plot is very good, five stars, very similar to the One Piece anime, the protagonist is just a participant, no changes, almost no spoilers, the overlap rate with the theme is 0%, 0 stars negative review, the protagonist only participates in the explanation, no spoilers, no spoilers, no spoilers

At present, the rat talisman can increase the strength of the team, and what upgrades can be added depends on how the author sets it up. Anyway, what I think of is summoning character training partners, powerful scientists, etc., Otherworldly items, and gravity chambers or gravity abilities that can be quickly trained.

The characters in the original work are very relevant. I like to follow the boat and change the tragedy of the original work. The most important thing is that it is really fun to complain. Five-star praise! ! !

The writing is very consistent with the character's personality. It's the least OOC fanfic I've ever seen! Big five stars There are still some minor flaws (personal opinion) One Piece is for teenagers. The protagonist kills Bucky's partner and Wapol at the beginning. I don't know what the author wants to write later. Will Bucky help Luffy in the war? Also, Wapol's special metal won't appear in the later stages, and Franky won't be able to create General Franky in two years. Also, the character of the protagonist is a bit hard to understand, and I feel a little anxious to jump into the plot. Straw Hats should grow up in battles. After the protagonist finished commanding, he didn't have the light-heartedness and joy of watching One Piece, and a lot of other things were missing.

Author, who are you? Guinness record is knocked out every minute 807 letters, each Chinese character requires six letters, every minute The clock can strike approximately 134 words, since you are not a record keeper , so let's calculate it as 100 words per minute. Follow According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, and another 20 Minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, and one hour of exercise Body, take two hours to get inspired, and then peel off the hair for one hour Dumoyu, you should have nine hours to type, and you can almost type 435,780 words. Based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters. But why do you only post so much content every day? Honest Say, is it being deducted? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. The author quickly gets up and writes! Don't be a short and weak person

It has been on the bookshelf for more than 200 days. Every time I want to read it, I am dissuaded by the introduction. I only watched [Hang Fang] in the past few days. It is not bad. Of course, this is a relative term. Some plots have too many dialogues, which may be because they are too familiar. I don't really want to read it. It is average in the follow-up, but it is more or less poisonous [Eating Melon]

Come on is a good book [laughs]

It's really well written, with good details. After reading too many fan novels, it will give people a feeling of fatigue if there is nothing new to follow the boat flow. Wish it was a little more special. This way you won't look tired.

It's pretty good-looking. Except for some places where it's not very rigorous, it doesn't have any serious drawbacks. There's also the point where everyone is struggling with giving away spells. I think it's okay to give it away. Anyway, the protagonist can just get it back when he wants to use it, and he can't throw it away. And the role of spells in the article is indeed quite great, such as Franky's analytical eye to help him modify his equipment, Chopper's panacea, Nami's combination of animal pets and weather eggs, and Robin's unsolvable deformation of others. Aren't these abilities well combined with them? What's the poison? Do you think this kind of power should be exclusive to one person? Too selfish? After all, the protagonist is the deputy captain. If he wants to have it all to himself, why should he take the ship with him? Just don't eat beef.

I read too many cool articles and couldn't sit still. I read it slowly. I didn't have much interest in the plot. I skipped through it. The pressure in the battle was too strong. This spell setting made me invincible a long time ago.

Generally speaking, the plot is quite reasonable. The plot follows the original work. The protagonist's independent combat power is relatively reasonable. In the end, he becomes invincible a little faster. The final plot is logical. It can be said that it is much better than some fics where the combat power system is really broken.

I just really want the Rat Talisman. After all, my dream is to be a summoner.

When you get the monkey charm, try asking the protagonist to turn himself into a woman. I feel that Shan Ye will definitely join in and probably ask to be turned into a woman, and then the plot will be the same as that of Ice and Fire Island.

This is a great follow-the-ship flow book, but I still couldn't stand the gift of spells, so I returned it.

Can it be a single heroine Robin? Oh my god [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] If I really like Robin, it will be 5 stars. Oh my god [crying]

Come on, author, I've read a lot of books about twelve talismans. You're really good. Come on.

So far it's pretty good. The characteristics of the crew are pretty consistent with the original work.

It's beautiful [admiration], at least it's better than what I wrote.

This novel is so enjoyable to read!

It feels good, but is the heroine Robin?

Okay, give me five stars to encourage you.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

A very well written fanfic! ! ! Author, please update! ! ! I don't know when I can get the dog charm, I hope it doesn't get nerfed! ! Looking forward to it!!!

One Piece is very interesting

It looks good, right?

Very beautiful, five-star praise

There is almost no difference between the early stage and the original anime

So cool. Hope Whitebeard is rescued.

Very nice. They just didn't explain the name of their child with Robin.