You Can Evolve by Surviving in the Ark

Currently one of the best Ark stories written by Tomato (better ones are basically eunuchs). As a newbie who has played PC games for 1,200 hours and mobile games for three years, I would like to give some suggestions to the author (only my personal opinion) 1. The first few chapters have created the images of Tuotuo and Li Hongying well, but the protagonists feel not three-dimensional enough. We can write a larger chapter about the growth of the protagonists. 2. The rhythm bar feels that some places are a bit slow and some are too fast, such as artifacts. Chapter 40 or 50 should still be the novice protection period and go directly to the mine. Personally, I think it should be mainly developed, but I am speaking based on the game and the urine of Ark players. This should be very boring. 3. You can add more conflicts, such as conflicts between the protagonists, interference from wild dragons or tribes, or encountering some heavy blows. You can combine it with the first point. After all, only through suffering can you grow better. 4. It's a bit too old-school. The author's description of fighting scenes may not be very good. After all, he doesn't write much about it. The battle scenes could be more shocking and igniting. 5. I hope this is a big book with a thousand chapters. After all, Tomato doesn't have many Ark stories. This book is really good. I hope it can stay with me for a while longer. 6. Come on, author, the baton of the Ark novel has been passed to your hands, please take the Ark world with you, make it bigger and stronger, and create greater glory [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Well, after more than half a year, the author's writing has improved a lot. But, why is it that the battle scenes are described so vividly and realistically, and all kinds of words are piled up, but it just can't ignite? [Thinking]

God among Gods, Ark's current pinnacle work, the plot flow is not delayed, the human relationships are real, the characters are all flesh and blood, and the plot is explosive. It's really amazing that Ark, a semi-original novel, can be written so well. I even stayed up all night to read it.

It's very interesting. I've been a bookworm for nearly 2,000 hours here. It's really interesting and very real. Some comments say that the man in the mangrove tribe, the green turtle, is just an ordinary person, not the protagonist. Go ahead and kill him directly. This is from God's perspective. The author writes very well. Everyone has their own character. Come on, I support you. That city-traveling book can't compare with this one. It's the pinnacle of the Ark novel.

The writing is good, but sometimes it is prone to high blood pressure, but it is reasonable. I have read some books about the Ark, but the writing is really not to my taste. After reading this book by the author, I was instantly satisfied. It may be a bit exaggerated, but I really like it very much. [Sending my heart] I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future. [Please update] PS: I prefer the process of growing up. I hope the author will stop writing too much and turning it into a brainless and cool article [face covering]. By the way, Tuotuo is really cute [licking screen]. He is responsible for my laughter.

Come on, author, this book is really the best Ark fanfic I have ever seen in Tomato. I don't really like the invincible style, so this book just suits my taste, and the setting is also very close to reality. It's not a game, it's about survival, so it's nice to not have a space backpack and instant release of things, just like the real Ark story. I hope the author can persevere. The writing is very good. Although the updates are slow, I think it's worth the time for quality!

The writing is so great that I can't help but comment again. The characteristics and personalities of each character in the protagonist group are well described, and the plot development is also ups and downs, which makes people more and more like it. The only thing is that when the author names the characters, can they be more realistic? Every time I see Luo Li and Shota's names, I just want to laugh every now and then, and the sense of empathy that I finally accumulated is gone in an instant [laughing and crying]. Putting aside these things, the protagonist is constantly growing and becoming stronger. I love you so much, author. This is the best book I have read in the past few years. If you stop reading, I don't dare to think what I will become [crying] I haven't read this novel for a while. It's not that I don't like it, but I'm very interested in Ark. I got a computer and bought Ark. I just finished King Kong now. After all, it's a game for beginners. The author's writing is great.

I have read a lot of Ark books, and this one is considered to be at the fairy grass level among Ark books. In the early days, the golden finger was based on the understanding of the game and creating a prophetic advantage. After a period of development, I felt that I was far behind the people around me. Later, the daily writing was a bit boring. The author also gave a climax to the heroine's plot, which gradually fleshed out the two heroines who were slightly abrupt and dull in the early stage. Several small plot transitions increased the surprise value a lot, which is why I kept watching. At first, I thought it was just a pure Ark story, and then I pushed it without thinking all the way. As a result, some of the plots unexpectedly made me feel nervous for the protagonist. The author smoothly used the main theme of the dinosaurs in the early stage to shift the main plot to the confrontation between people and tribes. Although it is normal for most fantasy novels, there are still few who can change the style of writing so quickly in a novel like Ark. Most authors will be immersed in the main melody in the early stage, thus forming a routine, which makes old readers miserable. The author's ability to flexibly end the melody and introduce new foreshadowing is still very good. This is also the difference between this book and others. Advantages: Not brainless, the plot is rich and novel, the characters are carefully drawn, although it is a bit cliche but it is very acceptable. It can be seen that the author wrote very carefully.

It is not written in a game-like manner like other Ark novels. Instead, it is written very realistically and is full of details. It is not a verbal novel. The plot is very interesting and full of connotations. It does not seem to require a lot of brainpower, and it is very easy to read. It is recommended that everyone watch it. As of the latest chapter, there is no poisonous point. The only shortcoming is - the author of Xiba, are you writing too slowly? [Angry]

It's awesome, the world view is amazing, and the description is very delicate. It has changed the Ark in my mind. I hope it will not stop at the official DLC. After the plot is completed, other mods can be opened.

I read part of it in 2023 and felt that the writing was not good and there were many poisonous points, so I gave up the book. However, more than a year later, I read this book again. The poisonous points have been modified or deleted, and the overall plot has been polished. The protagonist is not absolutely righteous or evil. I still like this kind of gray painting style. Not everything can be diode. There are always some things in the world that cannot be perfect, but we can choose a better one. Overall, this is the best Ark novel I have ever seen.

To sum up the chapters before Scorched Earth that I have now read, this book is very good. One of the few shortcomings is that the protagonist has obvious modern petty bourgeois thinking (this may have something to do with the author himself), and such a protagonist is destined to have many poisonous points in a world view like Ark. Of course, this does not prevent the author's writing style from being really good.

There are a few awesome Ark novels, but the character creation is even better, and the description techniques are exquisite, but the length is a bit short, but there is an idiom that says "short and concise" "doge"

The author's first book is very good. The logic and emotional lines of the writing are all online. The protagonist is not obvious in the early stage but the story is very strong; the climax of the scorched earth chapter and the distortion chapter in the middle period are impressive; the extinction chapter in the later period may be due to life reasons and deviates from the main outline and is too anxious. It is obviously for the survival of the two heroines. In the end, they are all doing small tasks and unfolding on two lines. The emotional line is given to Lily to portray. Sweat~ I basically skipped a lot in the later stages. To sum up: Personally speaking, it's a good Ark novel, but it fell off a bit in the later stages, but it's the author's debut, so I'm looking forward to it [sneaky laugh]

The writing is good, but the plot is too slow. After so many words, it is still on an island. There is still a lot to write later. Can the author finish it in his lifetime? Is it better to advance the plot faster? [Praise]

It's pretty good to watch, but it's a little depressing in some places. The protagonist has no ability to cheat, so he can only resist constantly. Everyone else has subordinates, but he doesn't. Taming and collecting resources are slow, and the number of dinosaurs under his subordinates is still small. It takes several chapters to tame a dinosaur. Being chased everywhere, and then using some knowledge to fight back. I think the plot is quite good, the writing is good, and all the knowledge available is used, but maybe I would prefer a less depressing plot to be better. I finished it. It's good to read. I like this kind of book written by a new author, who is very thoughtful.

Come on, author, the writing is very good. I like this the most among so many Ark novels. Personally, I think the biggest highlight of this book is that dinosaurs have feelings and the degree of interaction is also very good. I have only seen the early stage, so I only see that the protagonist still doesn't care about the feelings of dinosaurs. I hope that the attitude will change in the later period, even if it is Ark It is impossible for a black slave to travel to Ark World and still have the mentality in the game. After all, many players will be a little bit reluctant to see those dinosaurs die when they play the game, let alone your comrades who live and die with you in reality. Many dinosaurs in Ark are just tools. Suddenly seeing a dragon as a living thing will be quite amazing.

The writing is brilliant, the writing is super good, and the scenery, action and battle scenes are all described very well. The plot is touching and ups and downs, which is very consistent with the original setting of Ark. The enhanced description of powerful creatures and the epic enhancement of various auxiliary abilities highlight the capabilities of the powerful dinosaur king.

It's so wonderful. I never thought I would see such a wonderful Ark novel in my lifetime. I feel that the most exciting thing about this book is not the various dinosaurs in Ark, nor the survival slaves' efforts to climb the technological tree, but the emotions and relationships between the characters. It is the first time I saw such a wonderful book on Rotten Tomatoes and it turned out to be an Ark fanfiction. It is incredible.

The plot is very attractive! Like, like!

After reading more than 40 chapters, I am already looking forward to the following plot. This book is very interesting in terms of plot and setting. There is not much to say, but there is one heroine I want to comment on. Yes, it is Tuotuo. The author may really think that she is Tuotuo when she gave her this name, and it is true. It was actually written according to this original intention. Why do I want to comment on her? Because it made me want to give up the book 5 times. The idea is simply a piece of cake. This character contains all the shortcomings of female fans in the early stage. She is a virgin and loves to play. If she has something to do with the protagonist, she will be angry with the protagonist if nothing happens. She is a bunch of stupid people, but It can be said to be the most useless vase, but after seeing the slow growth story and the battle that turned the tide, it fully proved that this character is not just a piece of cake. He can only go through the process from a novice to a newbie. Isn't it the same for us who just started playing Ark? And The author's setting is that she was just a student but had to live in a cruel place. She suddenly understood and saw her growth. Just like me at the time, I didn't understand this game. She was so happy that she died for a long time and was still very sad. She grew up step by step and lost again and again. Finally, she got it, but her happiness was gone. But it is absolutely impossible for me to experience happiness back when I was a novice, because I would really get scolded [almost crying] [almost crying]

The author's writing is really good. The writing style is much better than most. The main reason is that there are not many people in Ark Survival Evolved. But the author, I hope you can stick to it. I really like this book. I hope it can be published in Genesis 2. Come on, author!

It's beautiful, I hope the author can keep writing until extinction. Genesis, I hope it won't be boring. Each world in Ark has characteristics for each creature.

I am looking forward to the next update. The narrative is very strong and the scenes are very rich. As a newcomer to Ark, I really like to read it, but I can't update it every day. It's not enough. I don't dare to keep it, for fear that it will disappear if I keep it.

It's a very good Ark story, more of a realistic Ark. The character's personality is okay, but it's a bit convoluted, but it's acceptable. Really invincible. Why isn't it popular? Very nice, for those who have played Ark. If you have never played Ark, it may be normal (you will not understand some of the fun if you have never played Ark) and you cannot understand some parts of the article. The characterization is good.

Although there is a harem, the writing is very good and the various settings are good. Others write three chapters a day, but you write one chapter every three days [angry]

This book is the best among the survival novels I have read so far [Adoration] Please update it quickly, it's not enough to read [Crying]

Except for the two heroines at the beginning who are a bit dissatisfied, the rest can be regarded as Tomato's best Ark novel. Top! ! Peak! !

It's very well written, come on, there are too few Ark books, let's make the protagonist more powerful, he was beaten so badly in the mangrove, it's uncomfortable [I'm about to cry]

For Ark-like books, those who have played the game are likely to be spoiled in advance, while those who have not played the game have difficulty understanding the rules and mechanisms that are not common knowledge. In short, it's difficult! Although this is the author's first book, he wrote it very well. As a final aside, I guess it's because I've read too many online novels that have affected my perception of rhythm. When I see certain plots, I feel bored and blocked. In fact, it doesn't matter whether it's bad food or fine chaff. The author has great potential but just lacks some routines.

Invincible and wonderful, it is the Ark survival novel I wanted. The grand world view unfolds step by step, the characters are delicately and vividly drawn, and the theme is clear. It is a good book.