Star Railroad: a Star God and a Mortal

Personally, I think the writing is very good. So far, the only four Star Iron fanfics that I think are good are "Confusion", "Desire", "Game" and Chu Mu. Come on, the author [laughs][laughs][please update]

Strange, this book is very well written, why doesn't anyone read it? [What]

Thank you all book friends for watching. I have read the book several times myself. There are many typos and the plot is also somewhat fragmented. These are all my problems. I am really sorry. When the first show is over in the past few days, I will correct the typos immediately. I am really sorry [crying]

It's really good, it's not the kind of harem story where you give someone something for nothing. It's a shame that it's not very popular…

The protagonist and Xing are so sweet, and the key is that the protagonist and Aha are also so sweet! Who knows the gold content of a thousand Amber Epochs! Childhood sweethearts + beloved relatives and friends + have been husband and wife + "maybe I will accompany you", are they still an ordinary brotherly relationship? Anyway, I don't think Guan Yu and Zhang Fei will be like this [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] The protagonist also takes the initiative to be Aha's entertainment. I think you two are also very fond of each other [Love] When I feel that the protagonist is gone, whether it is Xing or Aha, they always go crazy [cover face][cover face][cover face]

I'm curious, no one has read such a good book.

The following is just my opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it: I haven't read many of them, but when I read the sentence that no matter where the Lost Star God is, Aha will always follow behind, I always feel why Aha and Lost are so easy to fight, criticizing the yandere and attacking the lazy beauty.

The chapters that the protagonist just passed through may be confusing if you don't understand them because they feel they can't be connected to the previous chapters [face covering], but after reading the later chapters you can basically understand the meaning [note], so I still think it's worth reading [learned]

The setting can be said to be much better than other Star God books, but I suggest that if there are many women (after all, I like all the characters in it), they can take their time.

Does this book have multiple female protagonists or a single female protagonist? [Thinking]

The only thing I feel when I see it now is that my head feels so itchy that I feel like I'm about to grow a brain.

I was very confused when I saw it. I read it but didn't fully understand it.

There is Lily. I don't have any objection to the older one, but I have the younger one. The protagonist's daughter... This... Is what I personally consider to be a poisonous point. Also, the author stopped updating and couldn't see the ending of the story, but I probably saw the ending in my heart. Chu Cuo did not die in the end, but escaped from the shackles of fate with the help of Aha and Xing. [Confused] Finally no longer confused. This is what I hope and it is unlikely to succeed. Secondly, the ending is because of the end. Chu Cuo fell into reincarnation after saying goodbye to Xing, repeating his own experience again and again. The final ending is what Aha once said in the book: "confusion" plus "joy" is "truth". The story is no longer determined by the creator, but by the characters themselves. Write a little more. Your friend Joy will never give up on you, never be depressed, never abandon you, never cry, never say goodbye to you, and never cheat on you. Confusion will always forget memories, confusion will always lose direction, confusion will always bring self-destruction, confusion will always have regrets, but confusion will never forget the desire for love If someone can see it, please remember that although you are confused about your life, happiness can bring you direction, but the direction may not be correct, so you must learn to love, and you must love yourself first and then love others. There must be someone in your life who needs you, and you have to believe this, even if that person is yourself. Finally... I'm sorry I lied to you. But I still hope you survive.

Hmm... How should I put it? Let's say it's good. This book is relatively slow and I don't like it very much. But let's say it's not good. This is the first book in Tomato that I didn't skip any plot and didn't feel boring. I feel that the author has buried a lot of foreshadowing, but I don't feel that there is any. I hope the author can refine the direct description of the protagonist a little bit and don't give it a brushstroke. I also really hope that the author can write at a faster pace. After all, after reading fast-paced articles for so long, he suddenly slowed down and couldn't adapt [I almost cried]

It's very creative. The subject matter of this book is very novel and the core is good. Except for a few typos, overall I personally feel that it can crush most of the Star Iron texts in Tomato.

Where is the author's home? I want to send him razor blade (cross out) specialties! [Sinister smile]

@ Waste Green [you savor] [you savor] [you savor] [confusion] pursues because of [confusion], [exploitation] explores because of [exploitation]. [Confused] Walking in the fog, [Pioneering] opening a way in the unknown. In a sense, [Confusion] is very similar to [Pioneering], but it is difficult to judge whether its purpose is clear. [Confusion] is because it is true in falsehood; [Pioneering] is because it is sought in truth. Aren't these two a perfect match?

Zuowangdao... Very good, very awesome, very bold. This update volume is really too short. Author, can you do it? The storyline is very good and innovative. The writing style is also good, the character descriptions are more delicate, and the process of going crazy is also well written. Mom! I can't tell the difference! I really can't tell the difference! I am Li Huowang, and I am also Ji Calamity. Who am I? @Wasted youth lying flat in a mess, look at me [laughing evilly][please update]

A true book with Star as the heroine.

Let's put it this way [I understand] This book is the first one that I am willing to spend money to reward so far. It's really outstanding [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Also, the author should not attack anyone~ [Punch out]

It's a pity, I still want to see how sweet the protagonist and Xing Neng will be.

It's really good to watch. I hope the protagonist can have a good ending. That is to say, is it possible that after embarking on the journey, he will be redeemed step by step and find his goal, and then his life will be upgraded or changed? @Posed and lying flat on the waste green

I really like this kind of slow-paced narrative. The character creation of the protagonist is very close to the life of an ordinary person. This is also something that poked me. The author's writing style is also good. The emotional line between the protagonist and the star is also an interesting point of this book. There are very few slow-paced narratives of this kind. I hope you can stick to it and let me see this book. The moment it ends.

After reading it, it is quite to our liking. Each plot is intertwined, and you can connect the future, present, and past time points by looking at the middle stage, and the plot will be clear at once. It's very interesting, but it tests the reader's patience. Good luck to the author.

It's not enough to watch at all

Great, Xing is the heroine

It feels okay! Among so many fans, this book is quite well written, but sometimes you have to spend some time thinking about it.

The plot is very interesting, mistakes and the past become gods, and back to the future. The bad thing is that it has been discontinued for a long time.

The author's writing is so wonderful, but I'm curious, what will happen after the reincarnation is over?

I find it quite comfortable, but can the author make it faster? Why is Mao's rating so low? Only 6.8