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Family, he is really good-looking. Especially the part about Jiang Yue's collapse, I never expected it to be such a bloody plot. And the heroine has a really nice character [love] [love] Author, you only update one chapter a day, won't your heart hurt [almost crying] [almost crying]

2024.7.3.*23:23 Finished! Very nice, I like it very much, Jiang Qing, Shi Yanyu, Lin Chen (Xiao Lu), Huang Yazhong (weasel), Xiaobai (little paper man) Xiao Hei (little paper man), Bai Xian (little hedgehog), Xinsheng (assistant), Xuanzhen (master), Zhao Chenyuan (senior brother), Wen Zihuan (second senior brother), Qin Jin (third senior brother), Lin Qingyu (fourth senior brother), Qin Zhenzhen (Hu Xian), Zhao Jin, Qian Cangsheng, Lao Yu, Gu Qing. [Love][Blow kiss] Jiang Qing's employees (Lin Chen (little green), Huang Yazhong (weasel), Xiaobai (little paper man), Xiaohei (little paper man), Bai Xian (little hedgehog), Xin Sheng (little assistant)). [Love][Blow kiss] Master and Brother Jiang Qing (Xuanzhen, Zhao Chenyuan, Wen Zihuan, Qin Jin, Lin Qingyu) [Love] [Blowing Kisses] (Xiao Huang, Xiao Bai, Xiao Hei and Bai Xian are so cute, well-behaved and cute) [Love] [Blowing Kisses] I hope Jiang Qing and Shi Yanyu will be happily together forever! [Love][Blow kiss] Jiang Qing [love] Shi Yanyu, Lin Chen (little green) [love], Huang Yazhong (weasel) [love], Xiaobai (little paper man) [love], Xiao Hei (little paper man) [love], Bai Xian (little hedgehog) [love], Xinsheng (assistant) [love], Xuanzhen (master) [love], Zhao Chenyuan (elder brother) [love], Wen Zihuan (second brother) [love] Qin Jin (third senior brother) [love], Lin Qingyu (fourth senior brother) [love], Qin Zhenzhen (Hu Xian) [love] Zhao Jin, Qian Cangsheng [love], Lao Yu [love], Gu Qing [love]. [Love][Blow kiss] Ended at 2024.7.3.23:23! Looking forward to the new book! [Love][Blow kiss]

It's really good to watch. I especially like the scene where Qingqing and the immortals are having a good time. I like the interaction between Xiao Bai and Xiao Hei. Xiao Huang is arrogant and the socially fearful Bai Xian'er is the cutest. They all have cute and lovable characters. Unfortunately, I felt that the later chapters were a little rushed, and some plots were not developed, such as the Xuanmen Competition, the demise of the Su family, the fate of Xin Sheng, or evil magic. It would be better if I could find the author's articles earlier! Already following the author and looking forward to more works! Come on! [Love][love][love]

The plot is good, it would be perfect if it was more detailed. I want to see how Shi Yan goes crazy when he learns that Qingqing has passed away, how he bloodbaths Shi's family, and how he seeks to nourish Qingqing's soul fragments. I even want to see the sweet love between him and Qingqing... Unfortunately, these authors have just brushed it off.

It's so pretty, but it's just a little shy [shy]. I love Qingqing very much. Xiaobai and Xiaohuang are so cute. [Adoration][Admiration][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I like the content very much. Jiang Qing also has a very good personality. She looks the most innocent and speaks the craziest words. The characters of Huang Xian and Bai Xian are very cute😊ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉﾞ❀~

It's really good to watch [I'm about to cry], but it's a pity that Senior Brother appears so little. It would be nice if the live broadcast clips were reduced a bit to focus on Senior Brother or Xiao Hei, Xiao Bai, Xiao Huang and the others. The ending is a bit rushed, and the Su family is very teased. It feels like it's over after explaining the cause and effect in a hurry. It lacks the thrill of revenge. You can roughly guess the following plot after reading the plot, but overall it is not bad, and there are not too many surprises. The story of the Qian family and Yue Yue is a bit annoying. Although the later pleas for brothers are a bit unfavorable, but it enriches the characters and is good to watch. Come on

It is very beautiful, the writing is concise, and the main line is clear. If the plot is expanded, it can actually be written into a long novel, but this is also good, there are no more messy jealousy frames, jealousy, and various familiar plots. The rating is a bit too low, I don't understand

It's good-looking, I like the heroine, this is how a metaphysical novel should be, the short stories are exciting and don't drag on.

I love the character of the heroine the most. She is straightforward and decisive in doing things. I have grown fond of her. I look forward to more exciting sequels.

It's great to read, just like a book review, it's super exciting! I'm going to see if the author has any other works! I discovered a treasure author! Her writing suits my taste, short and concise! Come on! And looking forward to your new posts!

Overall, this book is pretty good. It's just a pity that because maybe no one read the low-rated book at the time, the author didn't write it long. Finally, he filled in the pit. If it had been longer, it would have been quite good. The heroine is not a virgin, so there's nothing unreasonable about it. Then I can only say that the characters he created are not surprising to me. For example, Lin Chen, I think the portrayal is quite good, he is sensible, but he will not design a stupid plot to slap someone in the face, so I am quite satisfied with the characters. This seems to be the author's first time writing a book. It seems that the first time he encounters a conceptual compatibility is better than those that have been written for a long time [crying]

I really like this book. Many people say that the ending is too rushed, which is true, but the ending that needs to be explained is basically explained, so it is still a very good and happy ending! And the reason why the male and female protagonists are together is also very good. I have read several metaphysical novels in which the male protagonist rarely appears, but he suddenly falls in love with the female protagonist later on, which gives me an inexplicable feeling. But in this book, the male and female protagonists redeemed each other and had feelings for each other when they were young. In addition, the male protagonist warmed and nourished the heroine's soul regardless of his body. Therefore, after the heroine regained her memory, they naturally got together. After all, they were two isolated islands, keeping each other warm! In addition, I really like the little yellow and little white hedgehogs, and I really like the two paper figures, little white and little black. They are really cute! [Sending Hearts]

"Oh, here you go, the title." "Okay, I'm yours." Shi Yanyu was startled, and his long eyelashes trembled. He chuckled and hugged her into his arms, his movements light and precious. He crossed countless days and nights, crossed the long river of death, and finally found his lost treasure and got what he wanted. Jiang Qing let Shi Yanyu hold her. She looked at the humans and non-humans in the Taoist temple and slowly closed her eyes. She was no longer alone. She had family, a lover, and friends. Very lively and lively. After all, she has always been a person who is afraid of loneliness and loves fun. It looks good [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [stare] [stare] [stare] [stare] [stare] [stare] [stare]

After reading the whole book, it is super interesting and gives me a different feeling. The characters are very clear and cute but not foolish and filial. They have been bullied for so long and suffered so much. Why should they let it go just because they know they are wrong? If it doesn't hurt themselves, they will never know what pain is. Like to watch

I like that the heroine is very capable and can cut through the mess quickly. She will never forgive those who are blind in the family. She is a cold boss to others, but the little green tea is pitiful in front of the heroine. The contrast is cute and I like it, but it feels a bit short and the ending is too hasty.

2023.8.24 It's pretty good. I really like the heroine's character of not being a virgin. I also like the characters Bai Xian, Huang Xian, Xiao Hei and Xiao Bai in it. They are really cute, but the male protagonist's role is too little. But I like the ending. Good deeds are rewarded with good deeds, and evil deeds are punished with evil deeds. It's so satisfying [laughing]

The length is very short, and the ending is hurried as the author said, and the emotional scenes are a bit stiff, but the two main parts about women are really good, whether it is a baby girl whose flesh is eaten by a man and his bones are sucked, or a lady with small feet in the romance of the Republic of China, they are all very good.

What a very good novel! It is short and concise, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters are vivid and interesting. It can be seen that the author did not receive sufficient recognition and encouragement during the creative process, which should have greatly affected the creation and led to the hasty ending of this work. What a pity. When reading Tomato, I often feel like I'm digging through a trash heap, but this book gave me the feeling of a treasure. I really like the author's stories, but it's a pity that I haven't seen any other works. I hope the author can come back and start a new chapter. Attention.

This is the best book I have ever read with less than 500,000 words. I just like to read this kind of unforgiveness drama. No matter how much I try to compensate for the damage I suffered before, it cannot disappear. This book is not like other metaphysical novels about catching ghosts or something. It feels like it is I would like to bring a little bit of metaphysics to the entertainment industry. The ending can be said to be very, very, very fast, but it is not very perfunctory. I also wanted to see the heroine get enlightened, and I wanted to see her and the male hero post~ and then go back together for revenge, but the author took it all in one stroke! ! Author, you have no heart! ! ! Harmful, recommended~

It's very good. I finished reading it in 2 days. I'm so happy. The heroine is very good. She has a clear distinction between love and hate. The author, cheers, cheers, cheers [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Very good, the writing is very good, the reversal of the story is my favorite part, that is, you can't stand it and you can't kill me [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

It's good to read, and the story is exciting. I also like Jiang Qing, but for some reasons, the author hastened the completion of the book. I feel that there can still be a story later [crying] [crying] [crying] It's a pity

It's very interesting. The male and female protagonists really have nothing to complain about, and there's nothing wrong with the three-dimensional view. Maybe it's because it's relatively short. The author's writing is not wordy or procrastinating at all. I like this very much, but I really hope that the content can be more and longer while maintaining this state, because it is really beautiful! It's very touching towards the end. The author must also be a lovely person, otherwise how could he write such lovely White Fairy, Xiao Huang, Xiao Bai and Xiao Hei? It is really too short. When I saw the end, the author said that it was because the popularity was low, so he ended it early. But the author is great. I am recommended to read unfinished novels because of their popularity. Most of them take more than 100 chapters to gain popularity. I hope your next novel will be equally exciting, and I hope you can persevere. Gold will always shine.

A very good book, which describes the good and evil aspects of human nature very well! It's a pity that the description of the male protagonist and the daughter of the Su family is too perfunctory! It's a pity, otherwise the score of this book could be higher! I really like the resurrected "Jiang Qing" and her contrasting cuteness! She is as clean as a mirror, which can clearly reflect the good and evil!

It's very interesting. I feel like the author has thought of many good storylines but hasn't written them yet. It's a pity. It can be seen that it was originally a long novel. The author's writing style is very good and the characters are well established. The heroine has a clear love and hate. The male protagonist has a dark side and prefers the heroine. There are also Fox and Zhao Jin, including Qian Cangsheng and Yue Yue. After cutting off the Jiang family, the ability should be returned to Shangjing to have a broader world. The author must have written these more. It's really a pity. See you in the next book. I hope the author can write a book in one way and I will support him in the future.

It's a good novel. The heroine is very capable. The most important thing is that she is not a virgin. I like the heroine very much. It's just that the Jingsu family's demise is a bit sloppy... There are a few typos. I hope the author's new work will be more rigorous... I look forward to the author's new work.

It's quite interesting. The eccentric logic of the real and fake daughter basically makes sense. The metaphysics is not particularly in-depth, but the non-human species in it are very cute. To be picky, the first part of the story is not particularly enjoyable. For some reason, the eccentric family members and the fake daughter have been left to play around. They have no lethality and are just annoying. But I think it makes sense logically. I really can't stand this kind of plot and I don't recommend watching it because it will continue to play until the end. Finally, I feel a little sad for the original owner, who is really the biggest victim and has not been able to get compensation. For this kind of novel, I have always felt sad for the original owner. The female protagonist feels very happy when she is slapped in the face. That is because she has abilities, but the original owner's survival background is destined to be unable to turn around in this kind of novel. She gives her sincerity, but no one really loves her.

A delightful metaphysics essay! The plots of most metaphysical novels are similar, but this one is quite enjoyable. I especially like the heroine's four little friends, the omnipotent little paper figures Xiao Bai and Xiao Hei, the weasel Xiao Huang who is worshiped by others and studying for the nine-year compulsory education, and the little hedgehog Xiao Baixian who is a little social-phobic and deliberately tries to get rich! One word I particularly like is "taking care of the whole family"! Except for the ending that made people cry a little because of the memories of their past lives, Wenwen really made people feel happy! I'm really looking forward to Wenwen having a spin-off or follow-up!

[Full] [Full] [Full] [Full] This book is well written, but the ending is a bit lacking. But overall it's great. It is the best among all the short novels I have read. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Top post] [Stay][Stay][Full]