As an Ordinary Person, I Was Captured by the System

I have read Chapter 81 so far. The heroine has some cheats, but not many. The first three worlds are too short and there is no sense of immersion. This may be to pave the way for the skills and cheats in the later worlds. In some places, the description feels like the number of words is too low, and it is long-winded. , It's a bit like a high school senior writing a narrative, but it's pretty good since True and False Qianjinwen, but when I feel CP, I suddenly don't. The plot of CP described earlier becomes very abrupt, and at the same time, the endings of the current worlds are a bit rushed. But generally speaking, it is gradually improving and seems to be growing slowly. I will continue to look back and comment later. I read more than 100 times later, and it's a bit difficult to explain in one sentence. Typos are minor problems. The most important thing is the number of characters for water. This time I used the number of characters for water in the name of a person. The heroine was careful at first, but later she directly reduced her intelligence. 80% Of the tasks depended on the system. All the information was completed with the talisman obtained in the second world, and the routine was exactly the same, invisibility and then speaking the truth. , The punishment is still a talisman. The most terrible thing is that I don't know if it was influenced by the world of educated youth (ps: there are flaws in various aspects of prices, and the content is inconsistent, but fortunately the plot is okay, I can tolerate it). Starting from that world, the heroine has a low IQ and solves problems violently. I don't ask how powerful the heroine is, and please don't rub the reader's IQ on the ground! ! The first few worlds feel like the heroine has grown up, while the next few worlds just rely on talisman paper to destroy her. Yes, and the more you go on, the more outrageous it becomes. It feels like the world is being pierced through a sieve. The plot is bloody + outrageous. It would be better for the heroine to live an ordinary life than to feel suffocated now and then forcefully enjoy herself in the later stages. The heroine loses her studies as she travels back and forth, never learns any skills in any world, and then uses her halo to casually succeed in her career.

After watching about ten worlds, I like the heroine very much. The plot and characters are very interesting. She is a bit of a loser, and she also has a sadistic revenge. The heroine is decisive in killing, not soft-hearted or a saint, and her character is still a bit of a top quality. 😂😂😂 The heroine will not suffer, and she has a caring and caring person. The quality system, and the semi-top female protagonist, there is space, every world can eat melons, watch movies and clean up the scum, there is no fixed cp, it is very good, the heroine is just don't mess with me, there will be no good results [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] The time point of time travel is relatively early, it looks super cool, We're almost at the end, so I'm deducting one star because there are too many men in the world who have cleared their lives for various reasons. Although the plot is more confusing and exciting this way, why aren't the women in it clearing themselves? On the contrary, it's all men who have cleared themselves, and most of them have hurt the original owner. I watched this recently. The original protagonist of this story was miserably tricked to death by the villain. As a result, both the villain and the male protagonist were exonerated. It was all the fault of the original female protagonist. Although the plot was interesting, I felt very unhappy. One or two worlds were exonerated and there was nothing to say, but many worlds were exonerated. It felt uncomfortable to watch, and cumulatively, I felt unhappy. I feel a little resentful, and the original owners of many worlds are not good people, so forget it. Anyway, good people do not live long, and the harm will last for thousands of years. However, I feel that those who have hurt the original owner should not be washed away no matter what the reason is. Maybe I am petty-minded. If someone hurts me, I will not do it no matter what the reason. Forgiveness and letting go, (some men don't need to clean up their innocence, it's just because the original owner is unwilling to take revenge, and the reasons are all weird. Even domestic violence men can be forgiven and let go, and they can live a prosperous life, and all the firepower is directed at women.) This one ends in a deep sleep. Is there any next book?

Looks good (♥∀♥) looks good (♥∀♥), come on! ! I hope the male leads won't be the same person. Love you! Compare your heart! [Blow a kiss][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart]

Every small world does not drag on It's basically a cool novel, but I personally like it to have a beginning and an end. It feels like each world ends in a hurry, which is my personal preference. Overall, the novel is quite well written, so please give it a try

Personally, I think it's great. If you say people eat melons, you will eat melons. It's not like some novels where you wear the skin of a passerby and become the protagonist (it's particularly uncomfortable, or you can just be the protagonist, don't talk about the skin of a passerby). The heroine is likeable. She is not a big heroine, but she is very individual in her actions. The whole worldview does not completely revolve around the protagonist or the former protagonist. There is no need to create too many other people's images in the world of fast travel. The author has made the heroine's character very eye-catching, and even influenced the perception of some people around her (even a thin paper character, no matter how nonsensical, will still find it interesting). You can really break out of the book shortage. This book is very suitable for getting through the bottleneck period. The length of Small World is not too long and makes people feel boring, but the pace is not too fast. Occasionally, the author will add some weird background settings (personally I think it is harmless) Well, one more thing is that the heroine is a bit shady (even narcissistic and crazy). If you like to read those serious and realistic stories, don't join [Chigua]

The writing is good and picturesque. The story is not bad, the heroine has a good character, and she is not bad as a naughty child. Even if she has no memory, she lives a good life, and she never abuses the heroine. The heroine is awesome in every world. At first, the heroine looked like a passer-by, but gradually she became involved with the supporting characters. She occasionally dressed up as the heroine, or the heroine's daughter. She basically had a love brain. In some worlds, the heroine still hasn't remembered it, and she even had a love brain aura and a stingy halo on her head. Turns out the heroine is awesome. When I saw a beautiful man, I fell in love with him. He was handsome and good-looking. Then I ran over to him and told him that I wanted to become a Taoist couple with him. Then I ran to the man and told him to take him on a date and go shopping. As a result, you chase beautiful men and ask them to pay. You think to yourself that I love you so much that I can't spend any more money. Sometimes you tell men that you are so good-looking. If someone chases you and gives you something, you must accept it, otherwise it will be in vain. I can't do a loss-making business, but later on my beautiful relationship fell through, and I don't want to talk to the heroine, who has an abnormal brain circuit, what should I do? The masters all told the heroine to tell fortunes for the heroine and the handsome man, and they would make a fortune together. The heroine doesn't want it. . . . [Face covering] I remember this most clearly. Moreover, the heroine had not recovered her memory at that time, and her inner drama was still like that of a domineering president. Quite funny. Other worlds are good too.

I gave up on this novel when I first read the story about educated youths sent to the countryside. Now I picked it up and found that the author's introduction is very improved. There are fewer typos and enough punctuation. In addition, the story idea is clear and interesting.

I have been reading this book since last year and have been following it every day. I have become accustomed to updating two chapters at 9:00 every morning. The sudden ending is really sad [I almost cry] I remember that it was really super funny from the moment I lost my memory while doing the mission. I could make my stomach hurt even after watching it ten times, hahahahaha. It was also impressive. I gradually fell in love with Xia Mu and Xiao Tong, the way they get along with each other and their feelings for each other. I love them so much when they support each other unconditionally! There is also Mu Mu's favorite silly and sweet handsome guy, hahaha. I want to say that I also like [Adoration]. The author will not get tired of reading it if he writes a thousand chapters. I really like it so much, wow! With a new favorite, I abandoned Mu Bao woo woo [grieved] But the book is over and Mu Mu's journey is not. I wish Mu Mu a bright future and a happy journey. We will see you soon [love] Bye~ Leave some random thoughts~ A five-star review must be a five-star review [blowing kiss]

Except for the last few chapters of the short story about dressing up as an educated youth going to the countryside, which is a bit incompetent, the rest of the writing is pretty good, and the further it goes, the better. Especially in the later chapters, there are several small worlds where the memory is lost, and the heroine's true nature is exposed. The writing is very fun and interesting. The heroine's brain circuit is too cute. I don't like the setting of losing memory, but the heroine's nature is too cute [laughing and crying]

Wow, I really love Xiaomuzi and Tongzi so much, they are really stingy and narcissistic! Hahahahahahahaha [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] You never have to worry about Mumu's love brain, because the only one who will be miserable is her partner! Hahahahahahahahaha [like][like][like][like]

The protagonist's personality is quite casual... To be honest, the early stage was average, but in the middle and later stages, I felt a little bit like I was addicted to the CPU. The more I watched, the more I became attracted to the protagonist and the system... I finished reading it without realizing it, and the ending is also very distinctive and abrupt. There are relatively few worlds with CP, and most of them are without CP. Looking at the whole story, although there is abuse, the violence is not very strong, the theme is not abuse, and the pace is fast. In the middle and late stages, it is almost an outline and a world. Overall it's okay, just a good place to pass the time.

The plot is fast and not procrastinating, and the heroine's character is casual and not like a virgin. Although the plots are mostly similar to those in novels of various themes, the splicing is very good, but it does not affect the reading experience. It is very enjoyable to read!

Very very nice looking. Some people say that some stories are too good to be true, but I never thought that they might have a strange mind! The only drawback is that the story is too short and updates are too slow! Some stories are blurred in the middle and end in a sharp turn. Even though this is the case, it still looks good, so keep up the good work! [Love][Love][Love][Adore][Admiration][Admiration][Blowing kiss][Flying kiss][Flowing kiss][Shy][Shy][Shy][Like][Like][Like][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

It wears really fast, and the story is quite complicated. The heroine has a great reputation, and the tasks are unremarkable. Due to the heroine's attributes such as being stingy and never losing money, even if the memory is closed to complete the task, it is still fun. Thanks to the author! The rhythm and plot are to my liking, but there are indeed a lot of wrong words and some parts are not very logical. In addition, the female protagonist's outlook on life is not particularly positive, but it's still pretty good-looking without going into too much detail. Thanks to the author!

Each story is very short, not all of them are about the protagonist traveling through time, having great love, and being a very direct host. The relationship between the host and Xiaotong is very good. They both thought the other was silly and sweet, they both thought about each other, and the feelings that went both ways were very touching.

It's good to read. I've been short of books for a long time and finally found such a good book. I almost missed it. I actually hoped that the heroine would use props to become beautiful and have good luck. But after thinking about it, she just went to various small worlds to be a crowd-pleaser. The heroine's behavior was very consistent with the setting. At first, I thought The reason is to become stronger and defeat the dark forces that put golden fingers on the plane. However, I was very angry when I was separated early while collecting the soul fragments of that blue thing. Especially when I was punished later, I was even more angry. I hope to take revenge in the future (´ε｀；)

It feels pretty good. The heroine is quite likable. At first, I thought the heroine's personality was rather bland but she was good at tasks. Later, I felt that the heroine's system was really weird and she also messed up the systems of several other people. The system is really capable and can always invent things. There are a lot of things and things that are really weird. I didn't expect that when the heroine has no memory when doing special tasks, her views are even weirder, weirder than the system, and she still manages to complete the task through all kinds of crazy operations. Hahahahahahaha, it's so funny. I think the heroine looks better after she loses her memory [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs][face-covering][face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

This book is really good! The character design is very stable, the plot and story are all logical, and the central point of this book is to protect sanity rather than mindless abuse. It is very gentle. The author's writing is smooth and his language is humorous and concise. I like one thing very much: he does not describe a long list of psychological activities such as jealousy or resentment.

It ended quite suddenly. Personally, I think it looks pretty good starting from the special mission. And don't dwell on the typos, omissions, generalizations, beginning and end, be patient and read, the story itself is quite interesting. I used to hate the story about fast travel with amnesia caused by sealing the memory, but what I like most about this article is that the heroine goes to the small world and loses her memory [laughing and crying] Xia Mu, who has no memory, is so beautiful. His weird brain circuits let him go. That is an attribute that even the Virgin's halo cannot suppress. This is the best time to reflect which pot goes with which lid. The essence of the heroine and her character are a perfect match! ! !

It's good to read, very good to read, every story is exciting, the heroine is not a love-minded, she is very capable, and the system is also very powerful. You can learn skills on your own and earn points based on your skills. I finished reading it in one go. Please give the author more updates [Like] [Like] [Like]

It's really beautiful. The author's descriptions are very delicate. The heroine is the kind of person who can reflect on herself. Tongzi is so cute! I like this Tongzi so much. Please update it quickly. It's a bit unreadable [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's good to read, and you won't feel tired. Every story is very interesting. The author has unique ideas and is not long. It's a very good novel [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post ][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

The main word is fast and refreshing. This rhythm is quite good. You won't have to keep returning to the system for tasks. However, this also has disadvantages. After the fast-traveling task is completed, the host will come back. After all, the vision of fast-traveling in the subsequent follow-up is incomparable to that of the natives.

The author writes very well, and each storyline is well designed. It's just that there are too few, and the ending is very abrupt. I feel like I haven't finished it. Most of them are just general. The story is very short, which is a pity. I read it from another book of DaDa. I like the summary and plot design of the story. If DaDa has time, can you write a medium-length article? I will definitely follow it. I really like DaDa's articles. Come on.

In fact, the character of the heroine is quite good, she is the kind of character with a strange brain circuit and a bit of mental illness. Although the plot of each chapter is very short, it is explained very clearly. I personally prefer the small world in the later stage where the heroine has strength but loses her memory, because they are all epileptic, and the author is very good at setting up each small world. There won't be repeated routines, so it looks quite exciting. The heroine's most important job in the small world is to use her own system to recycle other systems and fulfill the original owner's wishes. What I didn't expect the most was that the ending was too decisive and the heroine went into hibernation. I didn't even finish watching enough.

Personally, I quite like it. The plot progresses very quickly. It's not so annoying.

Author, you write really well. I have the urge to read every story for a long time, but it is too short, which makes me really uncomfortable. Every time it ends suddenly, I feel like I have been castrated. Obviously every story is very good. I really want to read it for a long time. I hope the author Or you can write a medium-length story in the same way. You can put it in a book, and then write each plot a little longer, because I want to see a sense of ending when the heroine reaches old age and dies in each story. The first part is very good, but the further it goes, the shorter it becomes, which is a bit uncomfortable.

It's quite good-looking. The heroine is not perfect and she is decisive in her actions. The amnesiac heroine has a very interesting brain circuit, and she completes world tasks with her very strange and powerful understanding ability. It's just that the mission story is too short and can be expanded upon.

Details, such as prices, etc. Are a bit awkward. The general direction is very interesting. The plot progresses very quickly, and the result is very well completed. There is no talk of the heroine being arrogant and trampling on everything. The plot progress is more humane. I feel like it's not enough after watching it, I still want to watch it

The plot is okay, but the author probably wrote it too quickly and posted it without much review! Some sentences are not fluent and some are repetitive, but it does not affect reading! I give up on some novels like this one after reading them, but this one is pretty good! [Laughing][laughing][laughing] I think the author Zhang Guan and Li Dai must have done it on purpose, because most of the words have the same sound, and the name was deliberately wrong by him. Basically, the beginning of the story was wrong, and there was nothing behind it! Just to stir up topics, there was a book written by elementary school students before that also had a lot of typos, but the plot was very good, and the typos also stirred up a lot of topics!