(Psychological distortion warning!!!)
This is the story of a man who wants everything but can't do anything.
Ayanokouji: What do people live for?
Yata Inu: To be Miss Ichinose's dog.
Ayanokouji: You misunderstood me, man. I'm talking about our ultimate goal in life. After all, what is the meaning of life?
Yata Inu: To be Miss Ichinose's dog!
(Practical fans, mostly original stories, you can watch them without any barriers if you haven't read the original work)
Reader comments
There are so many love lines, it's no problem to open a galgame alone. To be honest, the word gentleness should be used throughout the whole play. It is a bit difficult to write around gentleness. But who will this male protagonist's deformed love be able to wrap up in the end, or who will redeem him, or who will punish him. Personally, I want them all to become wings, and it's best if none of them doge. But it seems that the author's intention is to plant a seed first and wait until it grows into a towering tree.
Niupi Niupi, one of the top fics I've ever read.
Let's have a harem, otherwise I'm sorry for Suzune
This book is very good, but I want to ask, is this book suitable for both men and women? Not talking about girls, why does it feel like Brother Lu is the real heroine? Is there really a gay relationship? Also, Nagumo Ya and Ryuuen feel that they are already a bit fanatical. Could it be that their sexual orientation is a little bit...
I have seen practical lessons, but did not read them in detail. I think the most important thing is to see how the author grasps the growth of the protagonist and the advancement of the plot, and how to deal with the endings of various female characters, especially Kikyo, who once had a close relationship with the protagonist, and Ichinose in the back. There is another thing that is really not enough [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
I think it's just right for the female protagonist to be a yandere. The male protagonist's love has reached the point of pathological love. It just so happens that the yandere has
The writing is very good. I originally wanted to give it five stars, but it was too depressing. I couldn't stand it anymore as I went to the end. Maybe it wasn't suitable for me. There was no progress in my relationship. Moreover, according to the author's previous words, it was a single female protagonist, but he also wrote about many girls' feelings for the protagonist. . . . . I'd better read the back part and see how it goes before I comment.
The writing is beautiful, but I can't feel sorry for Xiaoqiao Yume! ! ! I like this character so much.
The writing is really good. I really don't know who did what until the end. But I read it with a little pessimism (emo) at the end. Also, the author didn't update for 11 days because he was thinking about the plot [Chigua]
Practical teaching: Everyone has something to do with me [laughing]
The writing is okay, but there is no main plot or confrontation.
Very good book! In the middle and later stages, I read it with a frown on my face. I kept thinking about who was the one who ruined Brother Dog five years ago. But after the mystery was laid out and the answer was not revealed, the author stopped updating. Isn't this inappropriate? If it is determined that there will be no reboot in the future, can you send out the outline?
Personally, I feel that the person who destroyed Class B's super standard proposed by Dog Brother and the author five years ago was one person, and it was most likely Asako Aizura (everything is based on the fact that Asako's psychological activities are narrative tricks. If the psychological activities are true, everything will be overturned):
1. Mazi has been in unrequited love for 5 years but the goal is unknown. Brother Dog said that he has never seen Mazi, but later he clearly pointed out that his memory was damaged 5 years ago.
2. I also like sweet taste and it's sweeter than what my dog likes. I feel like it may be the pockmarked dog's taste.
3. The inexplicable insertion of divination is suspicious.
4. I actually don't understand the logic of Mazi giving Xiao Qiaomeng a hair accessory, as well as all the subsequent awkward psychological activities, so I suspect it is a narrative trick. If I hadn't put p
This book is considered a high-quality novel among practical teaching fans. It's just that the character of the protagonist is very selective for readers. If nothing else, at least it will be good if it survives the stomachache period. I hope it can be completed normally until it reaches 600,000 words [Thoughts][Thoughts]
The emotional description is excellent. Even though I hate Kikyo, I can still understand the twisted relationship between the male protagonist and her, and I sincerely hope that someone can redeem the male protagonist. There are also many interactive projects by the author that won't be a loss if you invest in them. Ps: Xiaoqiao is the most youthful girl! Xiaoqiao is the best in the world! (Although I probably can't win)
Good. It's well written, but it's not very adaptable to this love-in-the-past relationship. Most of the male protagonist's surroundings are girls. I've never seen such a complicated scene, so I can't bring it in. It's not very similar to the original work, and the straight man looks too awkward. A feeling that although I couldn't understand, I was greatly shocked
Sure enough, I still can't see the exchange of interpersonal relationships. It's so lonely. I prefer to watch the revenge drama of fighting and killing.
It feels like playing a text game, which is really wonderful. It's a pity that the key chapters were cut off and entered the sub-plot. Although it was interesting, the interest eventually dropped.
Twisted people long for normalcy and to be demanded by those who care. But I originally thought Ayanokouji Kiyotaka would be the true ending. The result is that there is a gap in what I thought. But it's wonderful, looking forward to the follow-up and ending.
The character's design fits the original work very well, and the addition of the protagonist doesn't feel too inconsistent.
Not bad, I suspect the author has personal experience. [Make faces]
Which is better, carelessness or a broken heart? [Think]
Objectively and rationally, the novel is really good, both in terms of writing and characters.
In terms of subjective feelings, it's probably because I always like to take on the role of the protagonist when reading books. I don't particularly approve of what the protagonist does, and I don't like the protagonist. And the characters like Xiaoqiao feel a bit... Contrived? Well... After all, we came here for Ichinose in the first place, haha.
So I owe one star out of five stars~☆
Not good at words, but great. Come on, author [working on draft]
He is good-looking and has different values but is not disgusting. He will not let others bully him (unless he does not want to resist), nor will he let others touch his bottom line. Like Lu Ge, a person who only wants his own final victory, he just wants to free himself and move forward (because I have different values, I can't understand what this means at the moment)
It's good-looking, super good-looking, and it gives me the feeling of reading a practical teaching. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch or a lousy writer.
The article is a bit too depressing and a bit uncomfortable to read. Can broken things really be repaired?
It's very interesting, but I can't understand what the main character is like.
I've given it five-star reviews, but the author still hasn't expressed it [upvote] [please update] [send heartfelt thanks]
Distortion! It's indeed twisted, but it's not the kind of twist I like. What I like is the twist of s. This is the twist of M. Although my s looks a little uncomfortable, it's really interesting.
Very well written, other than that I have nothing to say
I'm really looking forward to the confrontation between Dog and Lu Ge.
There are so many love lines, it's no problem to open a galgame alone. To be honest, the word gentleness should be used throughout the whole play. It is a bit difficult to write around gentleness. But who will this male protagonist's deformed love be able to wrap up in the end, or who will redeem him, or who will punish him. Personally, I want them all to become wings, and it's best if none of them doge. But it seems that the author's intention is to plant a seed first and wait until it grows into a towering tree.
Niupi Niupi, one of the top fics I've ever read.
Let's have a harem, otherwise I'm sorry for Suzune
This book is very good, but I want to ask, is this book suitable for both men and women? Not talking about girls, why does it feel like Brother Lu is the real heroine? Is there really a gay relationship? Also, Nagumo Ya and Ryuuen feel that they are already a bit fanatical. Could it be that their sexual orientation is a little bit...
I have seen practical lessons, but did not read them in detail. I think the most important thing is to see how the author grasps the growth of the protagonist and the advancement of the plot, and how to deal with the endings of various female characters, especially Kikyo, who once had a close relationship with the protagonist, and Ichinose in the back. There is another thing that is really not enough [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
I think it's just right for the female protagonist to be a yandere. The male protagonist's love has reached the point of pathological love. It just so happens that the yandere has
The writing is very good. I originally wanted to give it five stars, but it was too depressing. I couldn't stand it anymore as I went to the end. Maybe it wasn't suitable for me. There was no progress in my relationship. Moreover, according to the author's previous words, it was a single female protagonist, but he also wrote about many girls' feelings for the protagonist. . . . . I'd better read the back part and see how it goes before I comment.
The writing is beautiful, but I can't feel sorry for Xiaoqiao Yume! ! ! I like this character so much.
The writing is really good. I really don't know who did what until the end. But I read it with a little pessimism (emo) at the end. Also, the author didn't update for 11 days because he was thinking about the plot [Chigua]
Practical teaching: Everyone has something to do with me [laughing]
The writing is okay, but there is no main plot or confrontation.
Very good book! In the middle and later stages, I read it with a frown on my face. I kept thinking about who was the one who ruined Brother Dog five years ago. But after the mystery was laid out and the answer was not revealed, the author stopped updating. Isn't this inappropriate? If it is determined that there will be no reboot in the future, can you send out the outline? Personally, I feel that the person who destroyed Class B's super standard proposed by Dog Brother and the author five years ago was one person, and it was most likely Asako Aizura (everything is based on the fact that Asako's psychological activities are narrative tricks. If the psychological activities are true, everything will be overturned): 1. Mazi has been in unrequited love for 5 years but the goal is unknown. Brother Dog said that he has never seen Mazi, but later he clearly pointed out that his memory was damaged 5 years ago. 2. I also like sweet taste and it's sweeter than what my dog likes. I feel like it may be the pockmarked dog's taste. 3. The inexplicable insertion of divination is suspicious. 4. I actually don't understand the logic of Mazi giving Xiao Qiaomeng a hair accessory, as well as all the subsequent awkward psychological activities, so I suspect it is a narrative trick. If I hadn't put p
This book is considered a high-quality novel among practical teaching fans. It's just that the character of the protagonist is very selective for readers. If nothing else, at least it will be good if it survives the stomachache period. I hope it can be completed normally until it reaches 600,000 words [Thoughts][Thoughts]
The emotional description is excellent. Even though I hate Kikyo, I can still understand the twisted relationship between the male protagonist and her, and I sincerely hope that someone can redeem the male protagonist. There are also many interactive projects by the author that won't be a loss if you invest in them. Ps: Xiaoqiao is the most youthful girl! Xiaoqiao is the best in the world! (Although I probably can't win)
Good. It's well written, but it's not very adaptable to this love-in-the-past relationship. Most of the male protagonist's surroundings are girls. I've never seen such a complicated scene, so I can't bring it in. It's not very similar to the original work, and the straight man looks too awkward. A feeling that although I couldn't understand, I was greatly shocked
Sure enough, I still can't see the exchange of interpersonal relationships. It's so lonely. I prefer to watch the revenge drama of fighting and killing.
It feels like playing a text game, which is really wonderful. It's a pity that the key chapters were cut off and entered the sub-plot. Although it was interesting, the interest eventually dropped. Twisted people long for normalcy and to be demanded by those who care. But I originally thought Ayanokouji Kiyotaka would be the true ending. The result is that there is a gap in what I thought. But it's wonderful, looking forward to the follow-up and ending.
The character's design fits the original work very well, and the addition of the protagonist doesn't feel too inconsistent.
Not bad, I suspect the author has personal experience. [Make faces]
Which is better, carelessness or a broken heart? [Think]
Objectively and rationally, the novel is really good, both in terms of writing and characters. In terms of subjective feelings, it's probably because I always like to take on the role of the protagonist when reading books. I don't particularly approve of what the protagonist does, and I don't like the protagonist. And the characters like Xiaoqiao feel a bit... Contrived? Well... After all, we came here for Ichinose in the first place, haha. So I owe one star out of five stars~☆
Not good at words, but great. Come on, author [working on draft]
He is good-looking and has different values but is not disgusting. He will not let others bully him (unless he does not want to resist), nor will he let others touch his bottom line. Like Lu Ge, a person who only wants his own final victory, he just wants to free himself and move forward (because I have different values, I can't understand what this means at the moment)
It's good-looking, super good-looking, and it gives me the feeling of reading a practical teaching. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch or a lousy writer.
The article is a bit too depressing and a bit uncomfortable to read. Can broken things really be repaired?
It's very interesting, but I can't understand what the main character is like.
I've given it five-star reviews, but the author still hasn't expressed it [upvote] [please update] [send heartfelt thanks]
Distortion! It's indeed twisted, but it's not the kind of twist I like. What I like is the twist of s. This is the twist of M. Although my s looks a little uncomfortable, it's really interesting.
Very well written, other than that I have nothing to say
I'm really looking forward to the confrontation between Dog and Lu Ge.