Super Star God: The Star God War

Give your book a five-star review! Hello! Hello, dear readers, I am a seasoned author. First of all, I would like to thank you all for your company over the past five months! Because of your reading! Only then will this work of Super Star God: Star God War be more perfect. Thank you again for your support! Well, I myself have re-read this book, and now I have concluded that the following points are where I feel dissatisfied! 1. Too many plot characters The details of the plot are too messy and there is no backbone. It was agreed that the snake driver is the protagonist, but later on, new races and new people are added crazily, which makes the overall rhythm particularly difficult to control! It's so uncomfortable! 2. Chapter dialogue is too blunt I roughly took a look and I modified Chapters 1-12, and the effect seems to be relatively good. As for Chapters 13-23, I forgot to modify it because I was too busy 🤦 Now the work is finished and cannot be modified, so I can only ask everyone to make do with it! Feel sorry! So the above two points are the bigger problems that I have summarized! If you have any questions or suggestions, please comment! OK, I am a professional! Thanks for having you!