The Days When I Was Working in the Battle Development Zone

There are too many political overtones. Pokémon is a utopian world and a world where strength is paramount, so there is no need for so much intrigue. (Personal opinion, please feel free to comment if you don't like it. I still hope that the author will write according to his original intention.) Another issue is the attitude of others towards the protagonist (after all, he has the strength of a champion, so he should have more respect) , the excellence of this book lies in the perfect portrayal of characters, the psychological description of the characters is consistent with the characters' status and environment, and the truth is more suitable for urban writing. However, in this article, this situation not only does not sensationalize, but echoes the title and plays a finishing touch. Overall, this article is good, please accept the five-star review.

This protagonist is obviously a tool man

Except for a lot of typos, everything else is pretty good [face covering]

By the way, I've buried a lot of jokes in the article, let's see how many you can find. [Shy]

Be careful, you're right, the elf battle is quite exciting, I personally think that as for the background, it should be either simpler or taller. Writing about elves, if you write it so complicated, is purely a surprise. As for the system, as long as you write well about elf battles and write about elf daily life well, then there will definitely be many people watching it.

If possible, I really hope to see the end

The plot is well written.