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I like the story "Fights Break the Sphere". I liked Xiao Yan very much when I read the original work, so I have a good impression of it. And I quite like Nalan Yanran. After all, she didn't become one of Xiao Yan's harem, but she just fell in love with her silently. And I like the character of this arrogant young lady. The content is rich and the subject matter is novel, which won my heart.

I just want to say that you, the author, have logged out of Huaben. Do you have a Tomato account? I want to continue watching Yan Ran

For Nalan Yanran Lei! Well enough

I don't know why this book has such a low rating. Anyway, I finished reading Battle of the Sky first, and then I couldn't wait to comment. I have always liked the book "Dou Po Cang Qiong", but there are not many Dou Po fans who write well, which is really sad. And this one is really good. I really hate that kind of article that takes advantage of Xiao Yan's opportunity while belittling Xiao Yan and accepting the harem. And the "Fights Break the Sphere" aspect of this book is really exciting. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

After reading the first article, I immediately jumped over and gave it five stars! Be! Ouch, my heart hurts so much! ! ! But I like it very much! Well written!

It's very in line with my wishes. As long as you can, can Xiao Yan's one be a happy ending? I can't bear the abuse anymore. This time I lost 20 pounds. Xiao Yan only has Yanran and his master now, so don't torture him.

It's very beautiful, especially the one about Nalan Yanran, which made me laugh out loud. And I really like Xiao Yan in it. He regards Yanran as an existence like the bright moon. He will try his best to get close to the bright moon instead of letting the moon abandon its glory and come to him. He has been working hard. Although it may not be so in the early stage, it can be really seen in the middle and late stages. He likes Yanran very much. When he gets something good, he will give it to Yanran as soon as possible, like a cute Saye

Five stars five stars! ! ! ! I hope my wife can read my comment! I have a few small suggestions that I hope my wife will adopt. The question is whether the dialogue between the system and the heroine can be reduced as much as possible. Because I looked around and found that the system appears very frequently! Even the male protagonist doesn't have as much screen time as the system. If possible, I hope the male protagonist can be given more scenes! ! ! ! Also, my wife, what you wrote is really great. I hope that the world after Xiao Yan can write the perfect world No. 10. I really like No. 10 Ua! ! ! ! Anyway, I vote for Perfect and Number 10! ! ! ! !

Author, did you forget to update it? Do you remember that you had this book? Please update!

It's very interesting, and the plot is well written. It's good to have no cp, Bai Yueguang just loves but can't get it, and the heroine's heartlessness is good. Although there are people chasing Bai Yueguang in the final ending, whether they can catch up or not is another matter. It is because of regrets in this world that the past becomes more beautiful.

The author, please complete the story of Dou Po. I want to see the ending of Yan Ran and Xiao Yan [Adoration][Adoration]

The writing style is just right and I like it very much. There are articles by San Shao among them, but who hasn't read these great authors when they were young? Many people will have some fantasies before something happens. If you don't like watching it, you can skip it. Highly recommended.

It's very interesting. I like the plot written by the author very much, especially the plot between Xiao Yan and Nalan Yanran.

Why did you run away? Dou Po is really beautiful, but why did you run away? I really like the emotional scene between Yan Ran and Xiao Yan. Why did you run away! You are missing a heart just because you ran away! !

I kind of want Xiao Yan and Yan Ran to be together. It feels quite sweet.

Author, come on I really like Nalan Yanran Who will the author write next? (♡˙˙♡)

You can think about supporting roles, for example, in Fighting to Break the Sky, right? Then I can write about Lin Xiuya and Gu Qingyang, two of my favorite characters, but I can hardly find any books about them. I don't know why, it's just that I personally like supporting characters more than the protagonist. It's amazing that the whole movie is written from the protagonist's perspective, but I don't know why, I just like those supporting characters more (this is based on my personal feelings, it doesn't mean that the writing is not good, it's just that I prefer the supporting characters to the protagonist)

I really like the two stories about Douluo Dalu Xiaowu!

I believe that the characters I identified with as a child will always have their shining points, regardless of whether they are the protagonist or not. I have read a lot of comprehensive novels recently. This one is one that I can read from beginning to end. It is very interesting. I hope the author will keep up the good work. Come on.

In fact, the theme of the first story is quite good, but maybe the author didn't write the ending well. It feels like the ending is a bit like Be. I quite like the second story. The author's writing of this story is okay, at least the ending is not Be.

Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡! Come on, Da Da! Xiao Yan in this world feels good *▽*

How could you not finish it? I finally found a good article [crying]

It's so beautiful, especially the fight to break the world

Can the author please stop updating? Please! Please! Can it be updated? Please! Please! [Cry][cry][cry]

Hello, author. I don't know what happened to the author. Why hasn't it been updated for so long? But I didn't have the chance to read it. Well, that's all I have to say. The author is great. We readers will always be with the author. Come on, author. Goodbye, author! ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з[Send heart] i hate you i love you

Especially cute, the cute complaining girl Yanran and Xiao Yan, who is still a teenager after all the vicissitudes of life.

It looks good, I hope the author can extend the plot of Nalan Yanran more, and I want to see more interactions between Nalan Yanran and Xiao Yan [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart].

The story of Xiao Yan and Nalan Yanran is so exciting. The author will come back soon.

Like Nalan Yanran

I'm numb, half of what I saw is gone