Beast Control**********

The writing is quite good, but there are too many typos and omissions.

The writing is okay. Keep up the good work.

The plot is exciting and interesting, and it's great to watch! ! !

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad, I hope there are fewer typos

I've just read two chapters, and it's okay for now. If I can continue reading, I'll give it five stars first, and then I'll talk about it later. The world setting is very large, but not very clear. Maybe it's a writing problem. It's a bit white and has the feel of a running account, which gives people a very superficial reading feeling and cannot be taken into it.

For the sake of good writing, five stars

It's very interesting and the plot is not boring or lagging. Come on.