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I have read Chapter 70 so far. My personal summary is that the protagonist is too weak and the enemies are too strong, and there are too many enemies. According to various factors, almost all organizations except for a very few will become the protagonist's enemies. Needless to say, Sky Garden is already an absolute enemy, so I hope to strengthen the protagonist. If it is not possible, add some things or abilities from other worlds, such as the ability of 13 spells, or the Gourd Little King Kong in Calabash Baby, which has no side effects. An enhanced version of the weakness, or a superhuman ability. After all, the protagonist has neither an organization nor a team. Only when he is strong enough to destroy the world can he think about it or not. Only in this way can he develop. Looking at the whole process, he is basically either beaten or abused. In the end, the protagonist is too weak. He is too weak to change anything and has no ability to change. Therefore, it is strengthened. Recently, there are too many enemies. Basically, except for a few, all planets are enemies. Sky Garden is also an enemy, and there are other things. Forget it, I will change it back if it is strengthened. I have read several fanfics of Zhanshuang where he is basically tortured and beaten like this. Anyone with a name can beat him. It feels like he is not as good as a supporting character. In addition, there are many enemies and they are all powerful and powerful. Those few books basically reach the finale if the heroine has died long ago and has not been resurrected. It means that the male protagonist died, or the male protagonist tried his best to destroy the world but found that he was powerless. There was even a female protagonist who was caught and experimented. The experimental process was even more Japanese than a Japanese beast, and the humiliation and humiliation, but the male protagonist had no ability and could only watch. Forget it, I didn't want to say anything. If it was changed and strengthened, I would delete it and change it to 5 stars.

I want to see the scene where Guren, Crow Feather, Bai Mao, and these three Lucia meet, it must be very interesting [laughing evilly]

The protagonist still does not have the ability to compete with the upgraded ones, and it is impossible to completely trust the Sky Garden. As the only human being who can absorb infected bodies without being infected, the protagonist has no ability to protect himself, and cannot have both sides in a multi-party game. He can only be passive. With the protagonist's current strength, do you still want to change the tragedy? It's good if people don't waste time to save you. Like Guren, the protagonist can't even defeat Guren. What if the three-headed dog is sent to catch Guren in the sky garden at the back? Vera will not be easily persuaded by others, and the title of the book is called Defeating, right? It doesn't mean that the final BOSS is defeated at once. Shouldn't it be based on the development of defeating the low-level infected on the first day, the intermediate on the second day, the advanced on the third day, the promoted on the fourth day, and the conferring on the fifth day?

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It's really good. There are very few novels about Zhan Shuang. Some are mentioned and some are not.

It's rare that you two are the same person, but they're a little short Author, you should learn from others who update seven or eight times a day (point and point) It was already very good, the ending was a little rushed, but it was perfect. The conversation between me and me is plain and homely, which is the best Judging from a short story, it passes the test

I think it's a good short story about two people fighting each other. Unfortunately, the ending is too hasty, but it's still an interesting blank space. It can be said that the portrayal of each Zhanshuang character is consistent with the game, especially the emotions of Lucia Guren's machine are touching. The game Zhanshuang gave me comfort during a special period in my life. I hope Clow can get better and better. Rationally speaking, I think it should be four stars, but five stars is my respect for the author and this game.

Not bad, keep going, I'm looking forward to the plot of Konghua

Although the ending is rushed, it does feel like making up for the past Guren. My Guren is dead, but this fanfic gave me a feeling of Guren coming back. Guren is my heart, and I can never regard Crow Feather as Guren. In my eyes, Alpha, Guren, and Crow Feather are all different people. Although the Guren in the book is not my original Guren, I do have an indescribable feeling in my heart, as if she is my Guren.

Although I have never played Zhan Shuang, I can clearly tell that this book is very good. By the way, let me ask, which plot of Zhan Shuang should you watch first? I also plan to write a Zhanshuang fanfic, but I haven't figured out the plot yet (I'm ready to spend two months chewing on the plot)

Author! ! Author! ! ! Ah! ! ! ! ! ! Hum! ! ! Ah! ! ! ! (Power generation) Come and continue the chapter! ! ! Ahhhh! ! ! What about the second part? ! !

It's well written, but could it be faster? This is completely inadequate.

Highly recommended. Although the author said that he will wait until the writing becomes better before continuing, I really hope that the author can publish a second book.

Author, the new main storyline Cradle Parade should give you new ideas. He mentioned commanders and clones, so can you just write it? In fact, our protagonist is another conscious copy of the commander. I think this would be much better.

It's pretty good, with a good idea. In fact, at the end, you can arrange for him to get a real breaking network, but it ends hastily. Although there is a gap left to give readers room to imagine, but... I won't say more. I hope there will be a sequel to fill in the previous holes. Four stars.

Speaking of guarantees, I have never guaranteed a guarantee. Every time I hit half of the draw, I will be S-level, and the same goes for the weapons [laughter]

I like it very much, I hope the author can make a sequel

It's a pity that I was born at the wrong time. Alas, it's not the right time for society. It's a typo, but no one will see it.

It's beautiful, but I can't be the only one who feels uncomfortable

This is one of the few remaining cards in the Tomato Wars fanfic! [Cry][cry][cry]

(｡･ˇ_ˇ･｡:) I don't have enough time to watch Di work, so please update it quickly. There is an old saying in China, which is called "Those who seek things from the West", Wei Junjie, I hope you will cooperate with me well, and I will definitely not treat you badly.

It's rare to find a book about dual combat. I hope you can fill the gaps in players' hearts.

I don't expect anything extra. It may be a little uncomfortable in the early stage, but the author's writing is really good from the middle to the later stage, and it finally feels good (and the early stage is not a completely uncomfortable plot, the protagonist will bring an inexplicable comfortable feeling [Love]

Personally, I think it's quite good-looking, better than most Tomatoes. The characters are fleshed out and yet grounded, but there are too few, and I lost it halfway through. Some of the holes haven't been filled in yet, but it's relatively good-looking, and the writing is mature.

To be honest, it's okay because loving it will make you feel better I'm not an old man, but that doesn't stop me from loving him Battle Double Pamish starts! ! !

Can we play Breakers 2 as a duo?

One of the few Zhanshuang novels in Tomato

What a shame, it just disappeared at the critical moment.

When will the author come back?

When will the second book be released?