Harry Potter: the Dark Lord

T meow, it's so good. Wouldn't it be interesting if the author didn't update it with hundreds of chapters? [Blow a kiss][Sneaky smile][Sneaky smile][Sneaky smile][Send heart][Understand] If there is no female protagonist, there will definitely be no female protagonist. I hope the male protagonist is career-oriented, not to be confused by love, and to develop his own power. [Cry][cry][cry][grievance][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Fortunately, the chapter about quitting is about Hermione traveling through time. The future is determined and she is unable to turn around. Most books do not recommend plots in which the future travels back to the past. This means that the future path is already determined.

As long as there is no heroine, we are good friends, but I have no right to interfere with the author's decision.

Not bad, but there are some problems. When Harry entered the school, Cedric was in the fourth year, Zhang Qiu was in the second year, and the Weasley twins were in the third year. How could they enroll together [what]

I originally thought there would be no heroine, but Hermione directly persuaded her to leave.

I like Hermione. I haven't read it yet. I'll add it to my bookshelf first. When writing about Hermione, I suggest you not write her as a vase. I suggest you write her as a strong woman and a good wife. A girl who works so hard deserves to be strengthened.

The heroine is most likely Hermione. . . Orz saw the foreshadowing and was heartbroken. The author's writing is pretty good. It's just that I can't accept it, and I feel so tired. See you next time.

The worldview and overall framework are really great! There are also many excellent sentences, but it's not easy to find the timeline interval when the heroine Hermione changes time. She may squat or jump, but the foreshadowing is very well written. I like it very much. Come on, fire tongs Liu Ming But I don't know how the overall time is set. The loopholes in character appearances and activities are confusing [face covering] [face covering] Also, the Eagle Academy of the four major colleges is Ravenclaw. This bug is not easy to catch. Remember to change it together when you have time.

After reading Chapter 20, at present, Hermione should be the heroine, but the author's introduction is not written, so I feel a bit different. At first, I thought it was the kind of leader, career story, without a heroine. Although it is not in line with my taste, if you don't mind the heroine, it is still ok [Sending Hearts]

The male protagonist's character is quite likable, his behavior is not annoying, he is eager to learn, and he has correct concepts. But this book has a heroine, and the heroine is Hermione. So at this point I only give it four points. HP fans who like to have female protagonists can check it out. (Also, why can't it be written in the introduction that there is a heroine? I'm crying)

Very good, but the heroine is Hermione, and the hero has a very good character. And it is also one of the few Harry Potter fanfics I have written. I hope it will be better without a female protagonist in the future.

It looks good, it looks good. Come on, author, write well. You have to control the story yourself instead of listening to others. Whether you want a heroine or not, whoever the heroine is, all depends on what you want to learn to write. Only when you write the story you want to write can you write well. What you write is not what you originally wanted to write. Can you think about it? Come on! !

It's quite good. The only two books with HP heroines are Hermione's. Although there are very few emotional descriptions now, and the two of them are still young compared to each other. The plots of the Age of Mythology and Jesus are also very interesting. I don't know where the other eye of the protagonist has gone and whether it can be recovered. Which timeline did the future Hermione who appeared earlier come from? Very curious

Very good, I hope it will be a single heroine

Not bad But there seems to be a female protagonist, probably Hermione

Pretty good book

Integrating mythology into the wizarding world is a novel idea At least I personally think it's pretty good. Maybe most people who come here for HP won't like it very much. The biggest problem with this book is actually the time turner (at least in my personal opinion) You can completely use the original plot to clear out Voldemort as a springboard to deal with the gods later. The author keeps up the good work

So far it looks pretty good, but I still want to ask if there is a female lead? If so, who is it? Multiple heroines or single heroine? I hope the author can answer this question [Blow kiss]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I love this book so much! ! ! ! ! ! ! The idea is very novel and to my liking ଘ(੭ ᐛ )♡ଘ(੭ ᐛ )♡ଘ(੭ ᐛ )♡

I read the updated chapters from the beginning in one go, it's really great. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's a good fanfic, the male protagonist is very handsome, and Hermione loves it [blowing kiss]

Come on, I'm optimistic about you∽

Not bad, just read it straight away

Come on, come on, come on

Will Charles' eyes ever recover?

The original Hermione was a little black girl! (It's just that the actor is Emma) There are really a group of readers with heavy tastes

Come on, the author is great

Very good, very good-looking [laughing evilly]

Not bad, but I can't understand it

I recommend it, do you recommend it or not? !