Star Dome Railroad: Kevin's Pioneering Journey

I have been reading Tomato for four or five years, but every time I read a novel, I feel bored after reading it for less than a day, but this book is different. As a seven-year-old captain, this book satisfies the scene of Kevin coming to Honkai. To me, Kevin is a special character. Maybe it is because I have the same name as him, or maybe it is the fifty thousand years of perseverance to live up to the expectations of my comrades and fight against Honkai, right? In short, this book is generally good, and I recommend it to veteran captains who have never read it. Finally, whether you are an old captain or a new pioneer, I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars. (This is my first time writing a book review, so please forgive me for the bad writing.)

Very good, there is no character breakdown, Kevin is Kevin, no matter how he changes, he will never be too different. The author's appropriate use of jokes is also very good, and in my opinion it doesn't affect the viewing experience very much. Give me five stars for support and hope it won't be discontinued.

The author wrote this book out of the realization of his dream and his love for the characters. 🍅Honkai novels are a very prominent type of novel. Does everyone know it? Honkai Impact IP is a game with a lot of beautiful girls. Normally when I write novels, in order to cater to the market and fans, the interaction with the characters is very light, and the relationship becomes closer. The story of the novel is greatly reduced. The author is not a full-time person. After work, he insists on coding. Today is my birthday, happy birthday.

The plot is well written and very close to the original work, but Kevin's character is a bit different. What should I say? I'm quite happy. I've let go of the burden of saving the world, which can be regarded as giving ancestor Kevin some rest.

So pretty! ! This is the best Star Vault novel I have ever read! ! No objections will be accepted! ! ! !

It's so good. It's the best one about Kevin that I've ever seen. The whole story is humorous and slow-paced. It also has a lot of pitfalls in daily life, but my sister-in-law is a bit miserable.

Approved, the best Kevin I have ever seen, good luck to the author It's also the best Bengtie fanfic I've ever seen.

It is in line with my imagination of space comedy. Kevin's gradually melting "coldness" can be regarded as fulfilling a dream of Bengsan players - a person who no longer bears the name of "savior". The plot has a moderate pace and looks comfortable and coherent. Big cheers for the author!

The writing is quite good, and I have roughly guessed some of the subsequent plot. The author will send out the manuscript as soon as possible, so that I can see if I guessed it correctly [laughter]

It's a good fanfic, but the author seems to have raised Kevin too high at once, or he didn't fully understand the position of the Star God.

I like this book very much. It's great without cp. Keep up the good work, the author.

Big cheers for the author! I really like this kind of subject matter, especially the one without a female protagonist. Good reviews! Love you!

Many places have not changed, and the transitions in the plot are relatively blunt. For example, in the Swaro episode, Clara feels more like a robot than Swaro. Forget it, just treat it as the end of the world exerting pressure. Overall, it's okay. Kevin's reaction is pretty good. Although Kevin doesn't behave like Kevin after Skyfire becomes conscious, he can still be treated as such. It's because I regained my childhood after losing my memory. It doesn't matter. As for other things, there are no problems. Overall it's very good. I said these are just nitpicks. I picked out a few paragraphs that obviously don't have big problems but I picked them out. So there's really nothing to say. This novel is excellent, but there are some simple problems.

The characters are not obviously OOC, so I'm looking forward to it! !

Update to the new plot quickly! ! ! ! I want to see Ye and Liuying Tie Tie! ! I want to see Liuying! ! [Cry][cry] I just came back from the plot, and the roast chicken teacher stabbed me until I was in a trance. Now I don't ask Traveler and Liu Ying to stick to each other. I just want Liu Ying to have a good ending. I don't want to be knifed again [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's a very good book. Well, I actually can't understand many parts (I know it's my own fault). From the current perspective, it's a long story with a lot of foreshadowing, but there are too few chapters so far. I can't see anything. Plus, when I read the book, I tend to ignore the names of the self-created characters that appear in the book, which makes it even worse for me who already couldn't understand it.

It's getting better and better, and the character of the ancestor is really well grasped. Although it was a bit funny at first, it gets better and better later on, and it's either the same as other Star Iron novels or follows the development of the train, and there will be original plots in the future! I've been looking forward to it. Come on, although the plot of the riddle made me a little confused, but I really felt that the author put a lot of thought into it. I enjoyed watching it and it was just [admiration]

I really like what the author wrote about Kevin. The more I know Kevin, the more I like him. Of course, the word "like" may not be appropriate. The more accurate word is "admiration and admiration". He is the mature, steady, silent and calm savior, but he is also the carefree Prince Qianyu. Regarding Kevin and Walter, the relationship between Kevin and Su is also handled very well. There is the depression of Honkai Impact III here, but you can also see the fun and escape of Beng Tie.

It was funny and happy in the early stage, but then it became more serious. It can be said that it is one of the best books in Tomato. The character design is not OOC. Books written about Kevin will have a somewhat broken character design. There are many jokes, but this one does not have them. It is just a moderate joke. Overall, it looks very good. The cook can read it with confidence. It's just that the updates are too slow. It's been almost a month since there was an update...

There are one of the few well-written Kevin books. If I talk too much about the content, it will be easy to spoil it, but... I specifically prefer Shuangwen (?) And Invincible (?) Qwqs. The only shortcoming is that the updates are very slow [crying] Well, I can't say it's slow, I can only say it's just fate [laughing] Due to the update speed, my buddy has been reading other novels recently, so I have almost forgotten the content. I originally wanted to comment on it after reading half of the book, but I forgot [face covering] I'm going to re-read it now and make additional comments later.

I have never played Beng Er and Beng San, but I have played other Mijiatongs, and I know some of the plots or storylines of Beng San. I personally feel that Kevin's character in this book is quite good, a bit like Bai E (Reverse Tiangang. Jpg) and I have read so many Beng Tie Er creation novels, although this one The book also follows the plot, but the details are still different. It does not follow the dialogues of the characters rigidly. It has its own innovations. I just don't know why it stopped updating in December 2024. The author should not cheat. I have already reached Omphalos and there is a lot to write about [crying] [crying]

There are few novels that suit my taste. I have never played Beng San, but I feel that the Kevin here is quite consistent with my impression of him. I hope the author can continue writing and update soon ╰(‵□′)╯. It's too short! ! [Sending Hearts][Almost Crying]

The writing is very good. The character of Kevin written by the author is very similar to Kevin. He also wrote the kind of Kevin who throws away the burden in my mind. He also has a clear understanding of the setting. He does not praise Beng San too much like the people in the comment area. Finally, he avoids a problem that Beng Tie writers are likely to make: because he has a better impression of Beng San, he exaggerates Beng San's three-dimensional combat power to Beng Tie's cosmic level. It's rare to see such good writing, it's worth reading.

I love this book, I really like Lao Zu, and the plot is not bad. Maybe it is a bit funny at first, but it will get better after that. I will always support the author! (Actually, I wanted to give up when I was reading the previous part, and I did so, but I came back and looked back before continuing)

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that I suffered the loss of having no information and was stabbed in the back by MiHoYo.

The author's writing is very good. Very much looking forward to the author's next book. When it comes out, I still very much hope that the author will continue to write excellent books. -------༺࿈Saint Star࿈༻

So far, I think it's okay. The author has also read the opinions in the comment area to change the content. I personally don't feel that the plot has any bad points. I can also accept the explanation given by the ancestor's character change.

Negative review, the book group was too noisy and could not allow me to enjoy this masterpiece [laughing] (due to study reasons, I did not read Chapter 83 for the time being, so I will judge based on the chapters before the last 83 chapters. Kevin's character is maintained very well and has not been broken, and the author's words are also very humorous. Overall, I have added some of my own ideas to make the world view bigger. Kevin is still the same Kevin, strong and calm. The author writes at a slow pace. As for the crazy people in the comment area, haha, I don't have as much reading time as the book, so you just know who it is)

Nice! ! The logic is clear, the concept is consistent with the original game, and I have my own ideas and settings here. It's not brainless, but it looks great! ! The joy and plot are well balanced, and the control is just right, neither suppressing nor jumping out of control. From the middle stage, the characters' personalities are also better controlled! ! It doesn't favor any one character, and doesn't include any personal information (this is really rare among fandoms)! It's worth reading, a rare masterpiece among fan fiction! [Cry]

Not bad, keep it up. In addition, I brought some private goods. I am Kevin's chef. I really beg my wife to take a serious and beautiful picture! [Crying] (As long as it's serious, it's okay) [Sending heartfelt messages]