Divine Realm? It's a Candy Shop

It's a very interesting theme and setting, but the protagonist's character sometimes feels fragmented, but I don't think anyone minds it too much. The protagonist is a gentle and principled person, but he also chose to show a calm image in order to open a store. He is a strong man who likes to watch others eat the food he cooks, and he is known as a believer in the gods. However, some detailed descriptions, such as the protagonist often using "oh", "la" and "~" as the end of his speech during dialogue, coupled with an overly proactive service attitude, will definitely weaken this strong temperament and make him too down-to-earth. But when it comes to portraying the protagonist as a gentle and kind store owner, it is not always the case, because the protagonist is often described as pretending to be indifferent and unafraid of a strong person. He does not smile (when he is a store manager), but speaks with a service tone of "Oh!" This fragmentation is especially evident during times of conflict. When someone comes to cause trouble, the protagonist says, "Okay kid, I don't want to talk nonsense with you. Let's bring in someone who can talk to you.", And then throws the person out directly. After the teacher came in, the first exchange between the two groups was ["Let's take a look. What do you want to eat? If you have anything to do, let's talk about it after eating." Shi An stood up, just when the teacher opened his mouth to say something. The teacher had no choice but to hold back the words that came to his lips. It seemed that the atmosphere was good now and he was ready to explain. No matter what the protagonist's personality is, at least at this time, the protagonist's appearance is a principled and strong image. The second exchange was after the food was served. When the teacher was communicating with his students, the protagonist interrupted [Shi An said helplessly: "Teacher, no blood is used in this pudding. The ingredients are very simple eggs, milk and sugar."] At this time, his tone softened instantly, and he suddenly took the initiative to explain patiently. The third time was the teacher's misfortune. The protagonist did not speak and showed indifference. Only after the teacher showed weakness did he describe it. The teacher was slightly relieved. At least he was temporarily stable. Alas, he was destined to offend the family behind Pede. This entire confrontation shows some fragmentation in character performance. The protagonist is in a subtle confrontation with the teacher here, so as the provocative shopkeeper, the protagonist does not need to actively use a downwardly compatible soothing tone to communicate. If he wants to communicate gently, he should not be silent to the teacher's words later. As a long-time teacher at the school, I should be able to get a glimpse of the protagonist's personality. However, the article does not describe the protagonist's personality that the teacher detects from the language, and the author may not think there is a problem. Personally, I feel that if we want to strengthen the feeling that this indifference cannot conceal the gentle nature, we can better reflect it by describing the protagonist's demeanor and having customers take the initiative to ask questions before explaining. Reduce the use of words that soften the tone and limit the protagonist's service attitude to ordinary communication rather than pleasing customers. In this way, the protagonist's external performance and inner world will have a stronger sense of unity. The above are just some personal feelings. Apart from that, the orcs and the protagonist are quite cute. It doesn't matter if you don't care about their personalities. I hope the author can write better and better.

Forgive me for not being able to describe this novel with my poor words, but the whole novel gave me a warm and warm feeling. I really like this rhythm. The description of the food is really superb. The soufflés described really feel soft across the screen... And this article is not as mindless and refreshing as some of the Mary Sue novels of Red Persimmon. It gives people a sense of gradual progress. The interaction with the orcs is super cute, from not being on the same channel at the beginning to the family-like interaction at the end () Who knows how to interact with Xiaobai (that one) The interaction between cats and cats is really super cute and surreal. I will also take the opportunity to sneak into my own cat owner haha, and the world view is well established. The orcs' inferiority, cowardice and fear and anger towards humans are due to the continuous attitude of humans towards orcs in this world. This perfectly makes up for the reason why the orcs had a stressful attitude when they first met Shi An and those orcs who refused to go to the human (Shi'an) shop. Shi'an's candy shop made everyone better and better. I was healed repeatedly, and I directly followed the latest chapter. Every character is vivid. For example, Shi An doesn't like live meat from the market and likes to buy frozen meat in cold storages. If he posts it online, he will definitely be attacked by fake netizens and say, "666, why are you pretending to be a virgin when you already eat meat?" But I think this is exactly the characteristic of our protagonist. Being different does not mean being different, but a line that belongs to the page of one's life. There are also people who like to buy frozen meat. Also, when it describes Shi An alone and doesn't want to cook, I really resonated with him! I just eat it casually by myself, but when my friends are with me, I will cook it carefully, which is really a sense of accomplishment! Only when you love a character can you describe each of his characteristics in such detail. Finally, I wish Shi'an's candy store will expand! The author is getting more and more five-stars!

It's great. It gives me a feeling of Wind in the Willows, that warm feeling of rowing on a river in the summer to go to an unknown place for a picnic, painting your new home, and then running out to meet new friends and go on adventures with friends. Just like this book, it's really well written! ! I like food, and I also like animals. I think of freshly baked bread, even the holes in the bread are brushed with honey, golden and golden, and should be paired with a cup of strong tea. This is a good dinner, and can let the captured toad tell a story. I think of friends going out after a quarrel, and then I met a kind person who had another big meal, special food? Brought back a lot of memories Catch up on the latest in one go, super nice

It's very good. It's non-toxic and doesn't have the kind of idiots who go around provoking people (it's very fun to dance with one finger but there's a lot of plot). The relationship with humans and animals is very warm, plain and interesting. In short, this is a book that animals like you.

A very good book that combines Western fantasy, fantasy world, orcs, and the Golden Finger system. It goes to a different world to open a store. The rules of the world there are that orcs are inferior to humans. Orcs must rely on humans to exist because the gods prefer humans. Otherwise, the orcs will become irrational monsters and attack their companions. An orc who has a master will not lose his mind.

Daily life, no CP, western fantasy, food, magic, gods, orcs, these elements, I really like it at the beginning. As the plot unfolds, the narrative of the story shifts to the perspective of other beasts/humans, and I like the protagonist's gradual upgrade process more. The story follows the protagonist, and I don't want the protagonist to take on too many things and take care of too many things. Many new characters appeared one after another, and I was a little confused. The plot setting is okay, the protagonist is biased toward the savior (especially kind-hearted), and the next step should be a hot-blooded episode. The descriptions of food make me crave it [laughs].

Yum, yum, yum! ! ! ! All kinds of delicious food, the beasts are plush, the food is fragrant, the beasts and the store manager are also very warm, and occasionally there are some small dark side feelings that are very knife-like, just like fairy tale books, very dreamy and beautiful~casual goods~easy to heal~

This book can relax my mind and body for me. When reading this book, it feels like the whole person is in a relaxed and warm environment, and one can unconsciously involve oneself in it. I particularly like the relationship between the store manager and the furries, and the store manager also has a very good personality. There is no other situation where he is condescending and seems to be equal but is actually too arrogant. The store manager is not like this. We watched him grow up little by little, from being alone to having his first customer to having many partners accompanying him. Moreover, the store manager's gentleness is always consistent, and he cares for every kind soul equally. This kind of character who is very gentle both on the outside and on the inside is so popular. Reading this novel, it feels like my whole body and mind have been purified. Immerse yourself in it. I really, really, really hope that the author can write more articles like this. Of course, the main reason is because the author's writing style makes people feel relaxed. No matter what the plot is, it can make readers feel physically and mentally happy. And every character in this book is so cute and lovable. I read and update this book every day. When I open this book after school, I feel as if the fatigue from a long day of school has been washed away.

Super pretty! As a person from a world where everyone is equal, the protagonist's instinct to treat every intelligent creature that can communicate is engraved in his bones, and it is this gentle treatment that becomes the key to saving the orcs and the world. Although the story of this book is slightly lacking, the plain and warm feeling is a great style in itself. The various orcs in the main character's shop really irritated me. In fact, the last online extra is a true portrayal of me. There are so many cute and human furries in front of me, how can I resist being ruthless?

It's super good-looking, and the interaction with the orcs is also very warm. The orcs are also very knowledgeable, and there is no kind of repayment. The orcs regard the shopkeeper as a savior, and in the eyes of humans, the shopkeeper is very awesome. In short, it is very refreshing to watch. Although this feeling is not very outstanding, it is just the right feeling, which is better than those cool articles. It's more suitable for me. I read refreshing articles just for the feeling of being refreshed. This one is also there, and by the way, it also has some feelings that I can't explain. All in all, it is very beautiful, and it is very rare to have no cp. Because it is so beautiful, I immediately finished it. I wanted to find a replacement, but I just couldn't find the feeling that I was missing this book.

Overall, it's good, but my expectations for the protagonist were too high at the beginning, because at the beginning there were some descriptions of the protagonist pretending to be cold, pretending to be a worldly expert, and acting more cautiously. I would think that the protagonist would stay calm when there are guests, and would also think more and plan. I discovered my own problems from some small things, and said that I should be more careful next time, but there will still be small problems that shouldn't happen, and I will occasionally be careless, but basically at critical moments, I know that if I say too much, I will be wrong, and there will be no problems that expose my ignorance of the world. In this strange world, it is better to be cautious. After all, this is not the kind of cool story where the store manager is completely invincible. The protective shield can only distinguish good intentions from bad intentions in the early stage.

It's very beautiful... People who watch it will feel warm in their hearts. The protagonist is a very gentle and good boy, like a mother. Overall, it's very comfortable. I hope it's free of cp...! , The place that can be considered a poisonous point should be the one who forgives the troublemaker, but there will also be revenge later!

Hmm... It's pretty good-looking, but the ending feels a bit hasty. Maybe it's because I'm catching up on updates, and I think it's a bit short, but it's good-looking. I really like this kind of warm story + characters, different world + some systems, and many plush and inhuman settings. In fact, I feel that many of the settings are not explained very clearly, but it is enough to just make a sweet story and read it. It is very good. It is not suitable for serious people, but it is good for people who just like to watch simple stories. You can read the whole article very comfortably (Except for always feeling that the ending is hasty and the pacing is a bit pity, I feel like I could have written a lot more stories, so I only gave it 4 stars)

(๑´ㅂ`๑) Very beautiful! It's super heartwarming, because my wife hasn't finished the update yet, and I don't know if there is CP. I like every character that appears. No CP is the best! ! !

It's a good book, no cp, the whole text is very sweet and has no knack. There are no pretentious plots in the novel. It can be said that it is relatively low-key but not wronged. Some people fight back hard and then become famous in a daze, helping the God of Creation to successfully elbow the evil god and save the world (?) The relationship between the male protagonist and the orcs (furry little animals) is very cute, the values ​​are very positive, and the food descriptions are very detailed. The only shortcoming is that it is too short. I feel like I could have written a lot more. In the end, the villain had a lot of space in front of him, and his B-level was quite high. As a result, he faced the male protagonist and the God of Creation, and was elbowed to death within one chapter.

Very good, I want to blow it up! ! ! It's a special cookie, not mindlessly sweet. I think the background of this story is a bit heavy. The class gap is indeed obvious. And from the self-reports of some orcs' own experiences later, it can be seen that the oppression of orcs in this world has almost made these orcs Get used to it, habit is such a terrible word () But when the protagonist comes, everything is different. Oh, it's so sweet, so sweet, so refreshing, especially the extras, it's even more interesting. What does it mean that a gravekeeper who has been sweeping tombs for many years suddenly discovers that the dead have been resurrected? It's so interesting, and he ranks among the immortals.

It's so gentle. I finally have a book that warms my heart. After reading it, I feel an epic feeling. Life is beautiful but also short. It's so beautiful. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I really can't stand it anymore. I have to praise it again. This book is the second one that made me feel this way after reading so many novels. There is not much interaction with people, only the praise of focused things, which makes me feel the epic of life. This book is so beautiful. What I want is this kind of gentle protagonist [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

I have relatively high standards for novels, and I have eaten fine chaff, so I don't like many articles. I rarely give five stars, but this one hit me. It's very warm. It's not the usual mindless coolness, but the warmth revealed in daily life. I hope it doesn't collapse later

Like a fairy tale for adults The store manager's persistence is really impressive. Power is a terrible thing. Once you let it go, you can never go back. I thought it would take a long time to defeat the evil god, but it was just like countless fairy tales Evil is as fragile as a bubble when it encounters justice In the world other than the store manager, every race behaves as a matter of course and talks about terrible realities. Ridiculous and scary It is a book that can be read carefully

It's good-looking. The four-word description of the protagonist's character is gentle and moist. It's been a long time since I've seen a Dihua protagonist who is gentle enough and doesn't show off. The world view is very novel. Although it's not grand, it's very sophisticated. It's a theme that won't break down easily. Judging from the author's skill, you can tell that this book is not easy to write and should be able to be written well. (˘ ³˘)❤

A very good book. I feel like my whole person has been healed. In the eyes of those abandoned orcs who have low self-esteem and no self, Shi An is a gentle and powerful god. It is a good book worth reading.

It is a relatively short book for me, and the whole article is very healing. There is no evil villain, but the background of the story is also tragic, but fortunately, it will gradually get better later. And a warm reminder, the protagonist of this article is a male, but in fact, I don't pay too much attention to it, and I can't tell the gender at all. There is no special emphasis on gender description in the article. It ended at the most beautiful time. If the story continues, there will inevitably be issues with longevity. The protagonist has said that he does not want to see the orcs he is close to die, especially knowing that the lifespan of the first adopted little hedgehog "White" is very short among orcs. As a reader who has seen the process of their acquaintance and encounter, of course he does not want to see any of the orcs separated [crying], but also wants to know their subsequent stories. It is a very confusing point, haha.

I finished reading Mi Yangren two days ago. In the past two days, I finished reading this book. They are all very warm and loving short stories, but why are they so short? I feel that there is still a lot to write. It would be great if I could write a longer story, or write more extras. If you want to see Big Lion, go to the store

I really like watching the simple orcs interact with the protagonist, and I also like the protagonist's internal complaints. There is no deliberate feeling at all, it is very natural and I like it. Although the background setting of the orcs is very pitiful, the protagonist is very good and the orcs are also very good. I like to watch this kind of warm daily life.

It's beautiful and the subject matter is very novel. There is no poisonous point, and every plot point is just right. It's been a long time since I felt so comfortable reading a novel. [Like] The only drawback is that the introduction is a bit abstract, and the recommendation column appeared several times without clicking in. I really didn't have any books to read today, so I clicked in to take a look. It turned out to be very beautiful

This book is definitely worthy of this score. The characters are flesh and blood and not brainless. The protagonist is unpredictable and not broken. It is a book that is simply wonderful to read. The main reason is that the author's writing is mature and the visuals are strong. The scenes are not obtrusive. It is very comfortable to read. Highly recommended! Big cheers for the author! Wish I could see the end! [Blowing kiss]

Yes, it is a good-looking daily business life. Although there is no amazing plot, it is not easy to write about life in another world without ups and downs in an enduring way. It is very good to give a score of 9.2 Or above.

The strictest mother in the dessert shop. The store manager's kindness is not over yet✋🏼😭✋🏼Sir manager, we love you so much🥰🥰🥰This store manager is so nice and like a kitten😋😋😋Everyone immediately praised the store manager😡😡😡

It is a comfortable and warm food article, as sweet as the name ~ As the comment section said, it is like an adult version of a fairy tale. The logic is normal, the world story is also perfect, the plot is a bit bitter and joyful, but the whole process makes people relax. You can read it over and over again to relax~

A very nice and heartwarming novel. I looked soft from the front. Everyone in it, whether they are humans or orcs, are very memorable and will not be confused at all. Even the cry of the orcs that only appeared once is very distinct.