Star Dome************

Emmmmm... Generally speaking, it's not bad! It's that Zhongli played by the protagonist is too close to women. As long as they meet the female characters in the plot, the author will try every means to make them fall in love with the protagonist. Just like the shutdown, they are not familiar with Zhongli and have never met, but they fall in love with Zhongli just because they see the appearance of Zhongli played by the protagonist. And Fu Xuan, the protagonist has been a human being who has lived for 700 years and must have strong fighting experience. Even though he knows that Fu Xuan cannot beat him, he still To let her fight, the protagonist could have put up a shield for Fu Xuan, but he didn't. He just watched Fu Xuan encounter danger and then "hero rescued the beauty". In this case, the author seemed too deliberate. There are many such plots later. Although I know that the protagonist's Zhongli cannot be too similar, but the protagonist's behavior will really cause misunderstanding or disgust... However, the setting of this novel by the author is indeed quite novel, but the novelty will probably not be popular once it wears off. Summary: It's a good book, don't read it with your brain in mind [You can make suggestions at any time. If this comment affects the author's mood, the author can tell me or delete it himself]

What's the promise of a large amount of food?

If you think this book is as good as me, then I think this thing... Is really hot! (I like it)

The writing is good, but the word count is a bit short. Come on, author

It is a rare author who has considered the deviation of the energy system. In short, I like it very much, but it is better to give it a try and then read it. I hope it will not enter the palace.

It's okay, but when you observe the planet Teyvat, it's not too weird😅

I remember Jing Yuan had a wise brother named Jing Fang [laughing evilly]

Is there a heroine [what][what][what] The author is great

I don't have any comments except that the number of words is a bit short.

Good looking, comfortable rhythm, emperor cowhide

All I can say is, Thai cool spicy

First of all, you must lose your mind before reading a book The reason why I gave it 4 stars is very simple. The quantity is small and I need to keep the book.

Why are the ratings so low? I give you five stars.

Did you peek at the script? Star Rail, which has only been updated in the past few days, matches the content almost perfectly.

Zhongli's Tao Ziwen, it's okay to read it to relieve your boredom.

Come on! ! ! ! Great author! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting, good luck to the author!

Very beautiful, well written

Well written, cheers.

Ok ok ok ok ok

How can I put it, it's pretty good, but I still like Kafka the most [shy]

It's pretty cool, but I feel like I'm going to get stabbed in the back if I don't write a sequel.

The author has a good idea and his writing style is also good.

Very good, but too short

It's well written, you can read it

Not bad, keep up the hard work

Very nice, come on author

My Genshin, you... Wrote 35 chapters, and then the book disappeared? Ah?

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

The author deserves five stars for his courage.