Four Cardinal Vices? but I'm a Good Navy

I'm not bragging. Everyone who reads this book has a majestic talent, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, a jade tree facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient in one's work, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stones, miraculous craftsmanship, and deafening. He is enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, he can see thousands of miles clearly, the rain and dew are all over the world, and the trees are covered with all directions, the eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger strides, he is heroic and majestic, he is in a commanding position, he is benevolent and moral, he is suave and selfless. You have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtues, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful view of the mountains, you have high sentiments, you have great virtues, you have immeasurable merits, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you have bright virtues, you have gold in your hand, you have a good heart, you have a pure heart, you have a lot of good qualities, you have a lot of merits. , A man of lofty ideals and a benevolent man, a white crane in the cloud, a man of great splendor, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix, unparalleled in the world, a peerless hero, unrivaled, a leader in Guilin, a man of cranes, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, a piece of jade from Kunshan, unparalleled and transcendent

It is obvious that the author's writing skills have improved significantly compared to the previous work, and after breaking away from Ron's more majestic naval image, he can write more interesting things. It also avoided a lot of things, including some righteous views that some people commented on the previous game as being too righteous, or that they didn't agree with. In terms of characters, it is more suitable for the "realistic version" of the pirate world in online novels that puts aside the passion of youthful adventure. It is easier for people to get involved in this children's bed work, because to be honest, I am really indifferent to what Oda is painting now. (Oda is a comic artist, he knows nothing about One Piece. Jpg)

I switched to this book from the previous book. Thank you to the author. Your two pirate novels can be said to be the pinnacle of Tomato Pirates. But I have a small suggestion. I hope this book can also have a Darren sword. Like Ron's adjutant in the previous book, it would be really cool to have a subordinate who can fight to share the pressure. My favorite chapter in the previous book is the G5 defense battle. The protagonist and his subordinates resisted the pirates. They are very passionate. Well, the author will kick off Tomato's high-quality pirate novels. Come on! ! Author, I hope you will update quickly so that I can see the end in my lifetime.

As expected of Lao Ma, I think this book is also very interesting [Like][Like] After reading it, I personally feel that there are huge shortcomings, so Lao Ma, show me your saved manuscript and I will correct it for you [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The plot is very detailed. The most amazing thing is that the author has vividly portrayed the characters. Whether it is the justice of the navy or the freedom of the pirates, the depictions are very good. From the background of the characters' stories, the characters' actions, expressions, etc., The characters' personalities are highlighted. From these aspects, readers I am even more fascinated by this book. Although I don't have the feeling of being in it, it is 70% similar. I have also read the author's previous book. The only regret, the final ending, and the only shortcoming of the previous book is that the final ending feels a bit like a blur. I hope this book does not have the same regrets as the previous book. Support the author. Come on, author. @Mario eats chicken breast

Yes, One Piece is a good book, but it only took me four hours to read it seriously. The details are pretty good in every aspect. And it can be said that it is not systematic. The protagonist achieved this achievement entirely based on his own strength and hard work.

It's very interesting and passionate. Although I've only read it for a short time, the writing is really awesome. I just read the second volume and I still don't know who the protagonist's woman is, so I want to ask the author if he has a harem @Mario eats chicken breasts The characters are rich and the storyline is exciting. It is neither intellectual nor poisonous. It is very inspirational. Each story is well-written and well-founded. This is the best and most enjoyable anime fanfic I have ever read. However, every time I see it, I can't bear to read it. I only continue reading after ten or twenty chapters because the updates are so slow [crying]

It's really a very interesting story. The main character is smooth and spicy. He leaves no omissions and leaves plenty of room for himself while also being able to calculate more. He climbs up step by step and goes up bit by bit. It's really fun. Holy shit, it's really cool! That sentence "Welcome to Beihai, my godson" is so handsome and elegant! This is a truly ambitious person! Be ambitious! Bloody! Have strength! It's so cool, so elegant, and so handsome! !

The author's writing style is quite good and his writing skills are quite solid. Take one example as an example—— [As if due to physical weakness, his hands continued to tremble, and the coins slipped from his hands and scattered all over the place with a clanking sound. The coin spun on the ground, with mud and blood on its surface, and finally fell. The smooth surface reflects the light and shadow of the world. Relying on One Piece, describing your own point of view and your own views on the world of Pirates is already a new Pirates work that transcends the work of One Piece. Quite good book

This book is pretty good. Ron has a different personality than the previous one. Ron is elegant, domineering and handsome. The most important thing is that pua Ming brother is something I didn't expect [laughing], that is, the character of Qiyuan is the most romantic and a bit nosy, and the dialogue with Qiyuan is also relatively long-winded. You can write Qiyuan pua Qiyuan and what makes her collapse, use one thing to arouse her emotions, impact her three views, and then brainwash her to implement the Godfather concept to the end!

Your pirate novels have never let me down. Compared to Ron, the protagonist of this book is more realistic. However, there are still some small flaws in the front, and the updates are a bit slow. If you can update seven or eight chapters in a day, I will open an account and give you points [smile]

Very good. The original work and other fan works are too idealistic. This one is very good.

The overall style is funny, interspersed with some life philosophy. The protagonist has a good personality, but I feel that the score is not very good and the value increases a bit fast. I haven't even learned domineering yet. The value is a bit high. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) But overall it's still pretty good.

There is a main line and no nonsense, the language is fluent, and the plot advances with rhythmic ups and downs. The protagonist is a ruthless person with feelings and bottom line. This kind of person may be the fastest-acting medicine for the chaotic and disorderly world of pirates.

This, this, this... The logic is clear, the writing is also very good, there are some minor flaws, the awakening of the overlord color is more in line with the heart, and it is very consistent. At least I haven't found anything wrong after reading Chapter 36. If it were other books, I guess there is no book that I haven't complained about within 20 chapters. If there is any poison later, I will deduct stars.

It is the best book I have ever read in One Piece. The focus is not brainless and realistic. The combat power is gradually increased by oneself. The protagonist has principles and bottom lines and a clear brain circuit. He is decisive and decisive in killing. He also has his own justice. It is a rare good book in One Piece. The writing is also great.

Come on, Lao Ma's book is really good. The style of this book is completely different from the previous one. The battle scenes in it are really hot-blooded. It's rare to see such fan fiction that doesn't involve systematic punches and passionate fights. It is truly a classic.

How can I put it... It's just good-looking. I haven't read One Piece, but I think his fan fiction is really good! (Although the protagonist has some shortcomings, he is a good navy! Hehe~) I don't know what to say about this, but it's good-looking and well worth watching! (The above are personal comments without any emotion, thank you (bow. Jpg))

It's very interesting. It's the pirate book I've been following for the longest time. It's also very good in terms of the most evil navy (the fake is fake), accepting Doflamingo as his godson, and even the emotional drama. I also want to put forward a hypothesis. If Joeyboy, also known as Nika, is the standard protagonist of the hot-blooded king, is it possible that Luffy's bloodline is too outrageous, (his grandfather is an old naughty boy and his father is a revolutionary army, which reflects the family lineage). It is not a normal D family, but a mutated bloodline, which leads to the invasion of Nika Fruit, turning the "normal Nika form of the Human Fruit Fantasy Beast" into "Luffy's form of the Human Fruit Fantasy Beast"

As for this book, I know the quality of Lao Ma after reading his previous books, so I won't go into details here. In this book, the characters are more realistic than in Ron's book, and the protagonist's words and fights are also very exciting! Is a good book

The author's last book was my favorite Pirates fanfic I've ever read. After reading about a hundred chapters in this one, I realized it was the same author. The level is as high as ever. The protagonist is also very different from the previous book. Keep up the good work, author. But I beg the author to stop burning the mountain with swords [grieved] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's really great. The rigid characters in One Piece are vividly portrayed, and the plot is not mediocre. It can be said that Lao Ma is now writing his own original story completely within the world view of One Piece.

It's so good, it's no exaggeration to call it the second best Pirates fan, because the first one was also written by him 😂😂😂😂

I like this Pirates fanfic very much. It's really exciting [heartfelt]. The characters are also deep. I think the justice of the protagonist is very good and very realistic. I haven't seen any poisonous points. It's refreshing and not brainless. In short, it's super good-looking. [Sending Hearts]

It's definitely the pinnacle of fandom. To be honest, if this is made into an anime, it can even compare to the original work. Every character is vividly written. Thank you for such a good work [Like][Like][Like]

It's so great that I want to keep it, but the main character is the author's original work. It's really rare to write such a good book. I still remember the one I read last time was called Wen Hu. This one really made my blood boil. It's a real man's book. I hope it doesn't end well. Come on, author.

A successful book must have its own plot, and this one has it I haven't read much, less than a hundred chapters but i saw a lot plastic buttons for roger's pants Garp who is always ahead of Zefa and Warring States And the pushy Jiaji The characters are very real and flesh-and-blood, allowing me to see a different navy

This is my favorite pirate fan novel. It's detailed and logical, and the characters are well established. But it would be nice if the other characters could be more fleshed out. They have bones, flesh, and skin, but they're just a little dry. Overall, I like it very much. Come on [making faces]

It's good-looking, really good-looking. It has a different feeling from the previous book. The character of the protagonist is also very interesting. In fact, this kind of setting feels more difficult to write, but the author writes it very well. It is also the only one on Tomato. The writing is very good. It is really amazing. The update is OK. It is really a good article that cannot be missed by Pirates 😍❤️❤️❤️❤️

It's very beautiful and very real. Kudos to the author.