After Gaining a Lot of Favor, They All Turned into Yanderes.

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Really good, fulfilled my fantasy. I just wish the dreams could be longer. For example, Pei's dreams are obviously too short, and it's a bit difficult to convince myself that she will stay with the male protagonist for so long. My suggestion is that there are more opportunities for trial and error in dreams, and that the heroines can remember each save. As for how to achieve this seemingly illogical thing, I think dreams can also be used. The second suggestion is that one's dreams can be interspersed without having to clear the level at one time. Controlling the balance between dreams and reality is actually a balance between the past and the present. Including these women, they currently have no impressive qualities, especially some detailed preferences and personalities. Now that there are three women on the stage, they are already somewhat homogeneous. Instead of adding more, it is better to consolidate the characteristics of a few women.

Come on, this author's book is really good.

It's okay. I'm giving it a high score because I hope it won't get too cold. The dream missions should be shorter at first, just a few chapters, for the sake of popularity. But for the new characters later, the mission should be as long as possible, maybe a dozen chapters or twenty or thirty chapters, so that the emotions can be better reflected, but this is unlikely. After all, this kind of novel is basically completed in two hundred chapters on Tomato. This novel can be written, and it feels good to read. I hope it can be as long as possible, but judging from the current style, I won't be able to write much before I get ahead of myself, with a cap of 300 chapters. The author can read Ergen's novels, such as I Want to Seal the Sky and Seek Demons, and learn from them. The battles, daily life, and general artistic conception of Xianxia novels. At least now these dozens of chapters can be written into hundreds of chapters. This does not mean to slow down the progress and turn it into a hydrology, but to make the description more delicate. Ergen's novels only require a few chapters to fight at a time, but it is indeed interesting. Magic Things like learning, fighting, and practicing elixirs, talismans, and seals can all be done in dreams. Because this kind of novel does not have a female supporting character, it is meaningless. The only long-term exposure to female supporting characters is in dreams, so dreams account for a large part, and reality accounts for a small part. Otherwise, reality alone becomes pure romance, and it seems a bit too much, and too much is not enough. These are all empty words, after all, there must be traffic

I don't care what other people think, I just like being a loser in novels, I'm showing off my cards

The book is quite good, good luck to the author. [Laughing evilly][like]

It's okay. The author writes boldly and can write well.

In fact, I have been following this book for a long time, but I just finished reading the chapters for a while and put it on the bookshelf and forgot to read it. There are a lot of previous plots that I have probably forgotten. In fact, this book is pretty good overall. When I finished reading this, I probably still had more than 30 pictures to go. Now that I have finished reading it, I feel a sense of unfulfillment. All he could do was talk, and suddenly the book was over. I can only say that this book could be better, and the overall outline is still very good. It's just like the writing style at the beginning... Overall, this book is pretty good.

Wanshu two or three years ago made me watch it carefully this year despite my impatience. The dream trial story was good, and the rest can only be said to be average, but it is better than the average AI studio. At least it proves that it was written by a human being. The ending is only conceptually good, and there is no substantive writing in the ending, so this conceptually good ending is all based on my own thoughts. How sad is the author of Tianzao who wrote it? I have to say, one is more miserable than the other, the story is probably a heroic sacrifice to each other.

This book is really good. Although some of the plots in the front are a bit awkward, overall there is nothing sinister about it. It is worth reading.

Author, you don't want your book to be unavailable, right? [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly], please update it quickly

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The subject matter is very novel, the author's writing style is also very good, and the emotional descriptions are also very delicate. It can be said that it is a rare good book in Tomato, but there are too few and it is not enough to read. 1000 Chapters of such a good book is not an exaggeration.

This book is very interesting and full of ideas. Although it is finished, the number of words is a bit short and not enough to read. I hope people who have read this book will give the author a full five-star review. After all, I want to read more good books and don't want Tomato to lose such a good author [Blow kiss]

I feel this is a very good article, please give it a thumbs up to the author.

Suddenly I remembered a book, and it was almost the same. However, the dream was the memory of the male protagonist's previous life, and it was the golden finger left by the past life to this life.

I don't know what to do, so I'll give you a good review.

If you give it five stars, it will be considered invalid, so you can only give it four stars.

How to say it? Well, I think, well, this book should be pretty good.

Not bad, but Knife Man is too much, no injustice, no hatred, Knife Reader

It's very interesting. It's better to change the dream to the main character leaving and then leaving the dream.

It's beautiful, but the dream is too short. Hope it's longer

This book is suitable for gentlemen to read! !

It's too short, the writing style needs to be improved, and the following words are messy, but considering that you are a novice, I give you five stars as an encouragement. I believe that in the future, you can write a book comparable to the perfect world. The writing style is very novel. Thank you for saving me from a day of book drought.

It's great that a newcomer can write a novel with good story development and plotting. I always thought that the novels written by newcomers from Tomato were all enjoyable. Come on

Watching this is better than watching "Help, they ran out of the dream"

Author, I advise you to hurry up and write [eating melon] [eating melon]

I can only say that I finished the book a bit quickly [star]

Fortunately, I put my mind on the first page and didn't click

I asked why the cover looks so familiar. It turns out that the author also plays Three Kingdoms. Isn't this Wang Yuanji?