After I Transmigrated Into a Book, I Took Down the Heroine, Big Sister

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Not bad, not bad, but not enough.

To be honest, the story is quite novel and interesting! Just can't watch it with my brain. The book is called Qian Fan Sister, but the thing is: in addition to quietly contracting the mustard space left by his biological mother to the original owner, Squirrel🐿 also made a contract with Ling'er first with the help of Ling'er; when he joined the sect, in order to avoid the fate of cannon fodder, he stayed away from his sister and chose a large sect farthest from her sister's sect; and contracted with Red Phoenix and Bingfeng. But all these actions are just to avoid being cannon fodder. Other times, as long as it is useful to my sister, I will take the initiative to give opportunities and good things to my sister. Where did you come from to fuck your sister? I only see sisters 👭 They support each other and move forward bravely! Caring for all the people in the world, love has no boundaries! The merits are immeasurable and he returns to the throne of God! There has always been a question, the Suyuan secret realm named after Leng Suyuan, the white-robed man who gave Xiao Leng an opportunity in it, is Xiao Leng's Taoist companion Mo Hanzhi the reincarnation of him?

I don't know why this book has such a low rating, but it is still very interesting. There is no Kurohara heroine, and the heroine is not a holy mother. She has the bottom line of being a human being. She knows how to be grateful and knows that her mother is not her biological child. Although she often curses her, she is so poor and does not treat her husband's child too much, so she is grateful. Unlike some articles that say that the aunt mother is not good to her. If you want the aunt mother to treat you as her own child, it is impossible, right? If I can raise you without treating you too much, then I am being generous.

Traditional immortality writing-travel-space-spiritual pet-with cp The heroine Han Leng, the author travels through the book, has room for upgrading, joins the Sword Sect to become a disciple of the Lord Transformation God, acquires ice spirit roots, learns sword formations, has great fortune and good luck, has constant opportunities, has a harmonious family and sect, is the favorite of four senior brothers and sisters, is an invisible rich man, kills evil spirits and overcomes the calamity of death, collects the small world of Leng's family and the small world of secret land, and cultivates Yuan through experience. Power, a 30-day tour of the spiritual world of Babel Tower, blessings from heaven on the ancient battlefield, the small world of the Leng family settled in Xi Cangmang, all members ascended in Chapter 170, 12 members of the two sects reunited in the spiritual world, Mo Hanzhi, the heroine's destined man, appeared, became a Taoist couple, returned to the Leng family to recognize their ancestors and return to their clan... There are many more to come, including more than 120 chapters in the fairy world... Spiritual Pets and Contracts: Treasure Hunting Rat/Fire Phoenix/Ice Phoenix/Ice Shark Transformed into Dragon/Willow Tree Demon/Little White Dragon/White Fox/Ice Flame/Red Lotus Fire... Cangmang Continent-Gaoteng Continent-West Cangmang-Spirit World-Fairy World… The hidden identity is the direct line of the Leng family, the largest force in the Nine Heavens of the Immortal Realm ten thousand years ago. The Leng Family and the Mo Family of the spiritual world are also descended from the Immortal Realm. The direct lines have been married for generations. The strange man cannot contact women other than the destined one. There is gravity between the two parties... [About the original heroine: When I entered the original sect, I had no ill intentions and feelings for the heroine. When I was a child, I was jealous of my sister's good looks (thinking about it in my heart). Later I apologized and gave away things when we met. The original male and female protagonists got married after unexpectedly achieving good things in Chapter 136. After being rescued several times in trouble, the original male protagonist only had a soft impression on the female protagonist. He had no feelings for the original female protagonist but did not hate it either. He knew that the female protagonist only regarded him as her brother. After the accident, they stopped thinking about it. The original female protagonist accepted it happily and got married. From then on, there were more brothers and sisters, and we worked together to make progress together. Female majors have always been in the lead. In the spiritual world, four pairs of people get married and have children, and they give birth to twins, a dragon and a phoenix. The heroine and her sister were sisters in previous lives. The plot of the Fairyland chapter is great!

Good. The length is not particularly long, the plot is smooth, there is not too much hatred, and there is no unreasonable hatred entangled for no reason. Especially the relationship between sisters is very realistic, with interdependence, mutual support and mutual fear. It's easy to accept without getting bored, let alone getting stuck in a tangled and depressed mood. Satisfying! Come to think of it, it's still full of stars.

The rhythm is very flat, and I can feel that the author wants to write well, but there are always some gaps, especially the dialogue, which is very dull and feels a bit like pampering for the sake of pampering.

It's pretty good, with big jumps in space and time, spanning from the human world to the spiritual world and the fairy world, and thousands of years of time. There are many stories and characters, and it's relaxing and not overwhelming. The only bad thing is that the plot has no ups and downs, and it gets a bit boring after watching too much [laughing] Recommended [Like] [Like] [Like]