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Wc, I suddenly realized that the protagonist has a dull hair, an external brain, and is called Paramecium. Kiana did not run away. Noi should be Mei. She's already full of CP. I don't know if there will be a mecha-playing duck in the future. Also, author, let me give you a suggestion. You turn Phoenix's hair into red when he fights, and then give him a big sword. Then the protagonist is controlled and the two of them fight. Finally, Jizi... Ah no, the Phoenix dies in front of the protagonist, and the sword also breaks. Wake up the protagonist and tell her "This is the last lesson I teach you." The effect is absolutely great. Our readers love it most, hope to adopt [Blowing Kiss]

Xiaolinzi! Take the decree! It's written! I have many rewards! The rewards are huge! [Sending Hearts]

The characterization of the secondary characters is too flat and stereotyped, making it look like online comments or barrage streams. In fact, most people will choose to avoid judging others in face-to-face situations. Maybe it's because the author didn't change his writing style after writing the previous book. I hope it can be refined in the future. In addition, the plot is quite interesting, and Tomato belongs to the upper class

Let's share adversities together, enjoy joys and sorrows, stay with each other, never leave, and use our time to protect a true love and perseverance together! Get to know you! It's my luck!

Loli Lin's books never let me down, but... Why did Loli Lin become as short as a short deer? It's not enough, not enough at all!

It's not enough. It's so good. I hope the protagonist can remain 0

"There are no colorful phoenixes flying in the body, but there is a clear understanding in the heart. I send Gouchun wine to warm the next seat, and the cao is covered with red wax lamps. I sigh when I listen to the drum and answer the official's call, and walk around Malantai like a tent." You and I meet here hostage

It's so beautiful. It's a masterpiece in Baihewen. So cool!

Suddenly I realized it was Luo Tianyi and Le Zhengling [blowing kiss] The writing style is very similar to "I'm Really Not Luo Tianyi" that I watched a few years ago. The protagonist did something and then used the perspective of a supporting actor to write about it and caused a sensation.

Is this book a regular lily or a harem lily? [Eat melon][eat melon]

First of all, the setting of sexual transformation is ok [learned]dddd, and the heroine's character is well created. The plot is daily life but humorous, but there is a flaw in it. It is difficult to distinguish this type of fairy tales from traditional urban cool novels, that is, there are low-intelligence plots that are unlikely to occur in the world of immortality. For example - the Nine Spirits Hokage at the beginning of the book posted "cyber violence", "slander", "slap in the face" and other plots, but personally I believe that as a top academic pioneer with real talent, he would not do such a thing for the sake of face. If so, it is most likely done by people who cling to the powerful. However, this plot setting also has merits. Of course, this is also a common problem in many novels. I don't want to be too harsh here. Just like I gave 5 stars, I like this novel very much. I just hope that the author can pay more attention to these aspects in future online writing.

Okay, girls post, I like [shy][shy][shy] But how do you say it? What kind of sentence pattern is this "... Get up"? I see it is used a lot in it, which feels weird. For example, "exploded" and "went furious" [eating melon] emm, the author's description is very problematic. I can't understand many parts [face covering] If you only look at the plot, it's really good, but the middle part is very uncomfortable to watch [crying]

This is not bad, meow~ It looks good, very good-looking, meow. It is reasonable to doubt the author's mental state when writing. There were many places in the article that burned my CPU. There were a lot of dialogues from passers-by, which easily burned my CPU. The most important thing is that there is a certain elixir throughout the whole article, which provides a lot of fun. If it were real, I would also like to give it to one of my friends (hehehe~). There are jokes and jokes~ (On why Aha is a god!) The plot has both joy and sadness (not much sadness, just a little bit in the later stages), and also has a lot of (?) Sugar. Well, it feels like the sugar is all behind meow (if you keep grinding like this, the avenue will be wiped out! Meow!). Fighting can be described in one word: fun! ... Knife... It can be said that there is... But in fact there is no meow (the key to the extra story is meow). Before or during the fight, there are a lot of classic plots that are first criticized and then praised, but once you get used to it, it becomes normal. (This is also one of the fun of watching.) There may be a repetitive sense of déjà vu (in short, water) in some parts of the plot, and there are also a few typos, but it does not hinder reading. In addition: Lily is really a treasure that evolved from human civilization~ 2025.01.13~ So far, I've finished reading~ Thanks for reading and accompanying me these days~ (If you forget most of the plot, come back and watch it later)

2024.6.24 23:49 Sister Lin Qingyao, thank you for accompanying me all the way. If there really is such a different world, I wish you and I could meet each other A beautiful dream, an unseen friend written by others I had a long dream, in which there were friends I have never met I had a long dream, dreaming about all my beautiful things I had a long dream, dreaming about you and my dream link I really want to never wake up from my dream until the end To a very long dream have a good night's sleep good night ——A book lover who loves stories and beauty Thank you to the author, good night

It's also a new book "ψ(｀∇´)ψ The protagonist is still invincible (laughs) (I always feel that the slap in the face method is very similar to the previous book)

I can't accept ordinary immortality and fantasy, but this is Lily and I still read the latest chapter offline (). Although this book is really short of sweets, and after going to Fuyuki City, it feels like the writing style has changed. The pace has become very fast, and it has not changed from the daily relaxed style. It is all fighting scenes. The interstellar wind in the back feels a bit strange. (Maybe I haven't read the articles on cultivating immortals, and I don't know if the articles on cultivating immortals are like this) (If I want to read daily life, I need to eat sweets, woo woo woo) I feel like the starry sky chapters are getting more and more boring as I write them. . . . . It feels like it's back to the feeling of a male channel's urban supernatural power novel. . .

It's quite good-looking and continues the style of the previous book.

Overall, it's okay, but I feel like it would have been better if there were more posts. One star is missing because I don't like the protagonist's mother very much. If I were the protagonist, I would give her a beating for the original owner. In my opinion, this mother failed. If the protagonist hadn't traveled through time, I'm afraid the original owner would have gone crazy or been beaten to death somewhere. She doesn't know how important it is to have a daughter after talking about being busy all day long. The original owner's life is not as good as that of Bai Xi, who he picked up. He has never even met or made a few phone calls. If the original owner's cheap dad is really unable to get married, this cheap mom will be too unruly and doesn't even have anything to save her life. Of course, it may be because of this reason that the author has less portrayal of the protagonist's parents. Anyway, I hope the author will update the new book more diligently. [Please update] [Love] I was wrong, it should be Su Xi

How can I say that it not only satisfies me watching aluminum and copper, but also satisfies me watching cultivating immortals?

There are too many slap-in-the-face plots, but overall I can accept it, but can there be more stickers? It's totally not enough [I'm about to cry]

Very good, give you five stars! [Sending Hearts]

Well, it's a good article. I picked it up from the previous one. It was pretty good in the early stages and quite enjoyable, but in the later stages it became more and more cool. . . I've read a lot of traditional cool articles, so I give it four stars. Others are really okay. Give another five stars, this five stars is for Lily, Lily is eternal [Adoration]

There are a lot of poisonous points, but I like to play jokes, and the writing is not too bad. The most important thing is that I also like to read it in Baihewen. I feel like it. I don't know why I feel this way. I read more than 700 chapters in three days. It's so addictive.

Author, I will be the 50th comment. The book is so beautiful😍, I love you😘.

I just said why it is so familiar, and this writing technique, I have not discovered it before, but now I know it is the author of Loli Sword Fairy [smile][smile][smile][smile]

The last book was well written and satisfied my desires. But what happened to the book? But for the sake of the last book, I still give you five stars.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking So the cp is 0 Qingyao and Qin Nuo 1 or Peacock and 0 Qingyao?

It's a good-looking book, but 50 chapters is too short. It turns out that many books of this type end halfway through. I hope this book can last until the end.

Come on, author, five stars ----From the Great God of Glory [smile][smile]

I read a little bit and stocked up a little bit, and suddenly I looked back and finished it. Time flies so fast. This book is very interesting. The only thing that made me complain is that the emotional line is not very good. I only kissed after 700 chapters [face-palm] and then after 20 or 30 years, it felt like I hadn't seen each other for a week. There is nothing special about the touching atmosphere. It needs to be strengthened. Everything else is pretty good. Funny fights, especially the fights, have a Dragon Ball vibe [face-palm]