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It feels a bit like mythology and cultivation.

The imagination is fine, but don't expand on the main storyline too much.

I have just found one poisonous point in the author's book. It is the protagonist who tells the heroine his origin. Also, I hope it will always be a single female protagonist. Li Mochou is still okay

Does this book have multiple heroines or a single heroine?

The fantasy writing is interspersed with many meaningless short stories about gods and monsters, which are basically divorced from the original novel. It is smooth sailing and there is no decent plot. When I first met Li Mochou at the beginning, it was a bit too bloody. But the author still has some writing skills and wrote a lot of poems in it, which is worthy of the protagonist's time traveling to the Song Dynasty. I suggest that you try writing novels like Gulong Martial Arts in the future, give full play to your strengths, and turn it into a series, so that it won't end directly because of the development of the plot.

The emotional description is very delicate, but it has little to do with the main plot. The author's writing style is not bad, and the character characteristics are well described. If you like it, you can read it.

Good job, come on, the author [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript]

Come on, it's well written.

Overall it's okay, keep watching

It's a pity that I won't write it anymore. It's not easy to read a novel with pure characters. It's interesting to write, but it's too short. Just like the chivalrous man Gou Ge has just achieved great success, but Uncle Jin no longer serves him.