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Overall, it's pretty good, but there are too many female characters around the protagonist. The female supporting characters appear at least several times more than the male supporting characters. What we want to see is the plot, not the women in the text. If we want to see the women, we might as well watch the video directly without reading the text. I feel that most of the supporting characters in Tomato's novels are women. To be honest, it would be better to have a more balanced look. In this way, isn't the novel originally designed to attract attention through the plot? When did it become the creation of female characters to attract traffic? This is my idea after reading the novel for eight years. This novel is quite good, but too many female characters can cause disgust.

The daily life of Pig's Feet is very rich. The main plot is hidden in the daily life. When encountering problems, you will kill decisively. There will be no villains appearing one after another. The plot of the young man calling the old man is not very interesting. I like the direction of the plot the most. The daily routine is very exciting. Once you get tired of watching the daily routine, the main plot will advance immediately.

1. Shuangwen 2. It is not a pure invincible story. The male protagonist has a weak performance, and it is not a true invincible story. 3. It's more everyday, the plot is humorous and relaxing If you only look at the above three points, this book is worth 9.2, And there is nothing wrong with it as a five-star masterpiece. Next, let's talk about deduction points. 1. Bad ending. This ending is really bad. This kind of thing is very demeaning. 2. Connect with the prehistoric system. Nowadays, fantasy novels on the Internet are a big poisonous point. If you just draw on classical mythology and develop a new writing method, it will be very good! Examples include: covering the sky, the realm of immortality, the supreme being of one life, and the supreme emperor. They all borrowed mythological allusions and wrote their own things. Didn't take the old road. 3. At the end of the period, the knife was fired too fiercely, causing death, madness, and sealing. The living were happy on the surface and sad on the inside. It does not fit the happy tone set in the early and middle stages of the book, which is a serious penalty point. Judging from the latter three points, this book is not worth a 9.2, Or even a 9. The rating should be around 8.6 If there are follow-up extras to complete, the rating of this book will increase further. It's a pity that there won't be any anymore, and the author will write a new book to fill the gap. Books of the same type are highly recommended 1. "The Counterattack System Awakens Only in the Mahayana Stage" is really invincible, the plot is humorous, the male protagonist is not exhausted or injured at all, and the ending is not bad. 2. "What to Do If You Suddenly Become an Immortal", the whole book is humorous, but the finishing stage is rushed and has many flaws.

The protagonist is completely invincible, unlike other novels where he is a piece of trash who just swallows his humiliation and is stepped on by others. All the protagonists and supporting characters are vividly written, and their daily life is very warm. You can't help but smile at the corners of your mouth. If you have a good imagination, you can fill in the pictures with your mind, and it feels like you are watching an anime [please update]

A good book, more to my liking. I recommend everyone to read it.

An interesting invincible novel.

It's so funny. A different urban fairy king article. I also wrote a book. Can anyone give me some advice?

It's very interesting, the character control is very good, the plot is simple and easy to understand, and the writing style is humorous. I personally think it's fine for a score of 9.5 Or above.

A good invincible article, the content and characters are well connected. I hope there will be no harem later, otherwise I can just declare lazy tail.

To sum up, I have finished reading it now. Generally speaking, there is nothing to say about the poisonous points in the early stage. All the turning points are after Li Mingyue found her biological parents. This is a big turning point. From here on, Li Mingyue basically disappears and is replaced by Li Mingyue's sister Li Xinyue. From this turning point on, it is the sublimation point of the book. After that, there are the remaining three immortal kings in the lower realm and the family composed of four immortal kings. It is a more heartwarming novel and is worth reading.

Experience the Immortal King's Transformation into Mortal Earth, it's easy and there are no old routines, you can check it out

The Daily Life of the Immortal King is perfect, fun and funny, and worth following. Xiao Fan, who liked TV series at first, was quite interesting, but later he became an online banking boy hahaha. Is the author considering turning the protagonist into a two-dimensional middle school boy? I really want to see the plot of the protagonist taking Coco's cosplay character to the comic exhibition.

Very good looking, funny and invincible writing

It's very fun, the characters are clear, and the details are well described. I also urge you to update more, ಥ_ಥ

Although it seems to have the harem tendency that I hate the most, the character plot is a bit mindless or awkward, and there are many small flaws, but! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! [Smile][Top post][Top post][Top post] 10.0! Nice!

Fresh categories and novel themes What you like and what you don't like exist in different ways in this world. You deliberately find words but fail to express your meaning, and your casual words become written. This mountain is not seen in other mountains.

It's so interesting. It's not like some Immortal Emperors and Immortal Kings novels. It's easy and funny all in one. I hope the author can serialize it into a thousand or two thousand chapters instead of finishing it in two or three hundred chapters. I'll be sad [crying]

I have never seen such a happy Immortal King novel. The characters are flesh-and-blood, and the plot is warm and interesting. It breaks through the traditional plot framework of the Invincible Immortal King coming to earth. The values ​​​​are in line with our modern requirements. It is a rare good book. I am so lucky to find this book suddenly. I deserve the high rating. The only drawback is that, author, please update quickly! ! !

Xiao Fan, the pig's foot, and other protagonists include Little Loli, Beast Ear Girl, Long Ye, Yang Zhan, etc. The plot is a little crazy, but the content is relatively light-hearted and pleasant, with family, friendship, fun, and pain. Xiao Fan was the master of his master in his previous life. In order to break through the realm and live a new life, he finally succeeded in breaking through the imperial realm, defeated the ancient emperor of the Pure Land, and saved the world. Many plots are very touching. Although they are relatively ordinary little things, they also reveal a lot of emotions. In the end, the pig's feet took the people who died in the war and were reincarnated into reincarnation.

I've seen Chapter 339. It's not that I don't want to read on, but it's gone. Overall, it's quite interesting. 30% Color and perversion, 40% funny, 15% touching, 15% normal. It's been pushed all the way and is unpredictable, and the characters have distinct personalities. Overall, it's 4.5 Stars. It's a bit slow to update, maybe because I'm used to seeing the whole thing at once. The plot contains criticisms and complaints about the current situation, and also has some perversion and color. Overall, it is worth killing time to watch, but there are many pitfalls in the early stage, and it can be completed in one step in the middle. If it is not only anime, comics and the like, it will be much better. It would be better to read without some realistic framework. After all, it is not appropriate to discuss political issues in a fantasy novel about immortality.

It belongs to the daily, group portrait, and comedy genre. I don't like the beginning and the end, but the middle part is pretty good. Xiao Fan (male protagonist, one of the four immortal kings in the immortal world, the strongest immortal king, reincarnated in the ending) Ji Wuyue (Xiao Fan's Taoist companion, Xiao Fan's first adopted sister and granddaughter, broke through to become an immortal king in the ending) Xiao Keke (little Lolita, Xiao Fan's second adopted sister, one of the four immortal kings in the immortal world, in the ending broke through to become an immortal emperor and grew taller with the help of Xiao Fan ) Bai Lili (beast mother, Xiaobai, one of the four immortal kings in the fairy world, the demon fairy king, nine-tailed fox, likes Xiao Fan, ends up looking for a way to break through the immortal emperor) Long Aotian (Long Ye, one of the four fairy kings in the fairy world, ends up going crazy after the death of the dragon next to him) Li Mingyue (the first woman Xiao Fan met after coming down to earth, after Li Xingyue appeared and then exited) Li Xingyue (Li Mingyue's twin sister, wet nurse Li, Xiao Keke's exclusive bald number one, active in the protagonist group, unexpectedly extended his life span by 30,000 years) Yang Zhan (Yang Shuaishuai, the reincarnation of Yang Jian, the first person under the Immortal King, the ending breaks through the Immortal King and fights alongside Xiao Fan) , and finally reincarnated together) Zhao Ling (Li Mingyue's best friend, Yang Zhan's Taoist companion, Xiao Fan's second apprentice, ended up having a daughter with Yang Zhan) Han Linglong (Xiao Fan's first female apprentice) Han Lingqiao (Han Linglong's sister) Qian Ziwen (Xiao Fan's younger brother, partially became an immortal, ended up having a son and a daughter) Qianye Xun (original Unknown name, ancient protoss, whose soul entered Qianye Xun's body due to an accident and rebuilt his divine body with the help of Xiao Fan. Qian Ziwen's eldest wife, who gave birth to a son with Qian Ziwen) Nangong Yuan (the saint of Yaochi in the fairy world, Qian Ziwen's little wife, who gave birth to a daughter with Qian Ziwen) Wang Xiaofei (little fat man, Xiao One of Ke Ke's little brothers, Qian Ziwen's sworn brother, the reincarnation of the Taoist ancestor of the human race) Guan Guan (a female ghost, died at the age of 18, although she is a female ghost, she can cry and blush, she seems to like Wang Xiaofei) Wang Mingming (Xiao Fan's neighbor and cook) Wang Zhenzhen (Wang Mingming's sister, Xiao Fan's neighbor and cook, Xiao Keke's exclusive Bald No. 3) Jiang Jiang (a female zombie, living in the home of the Wang brothers and sisters) Qingwen (a monk, born from a lotus without a father or mother, once died and became a Buddha, reincarnated again in the final battle) Lu Shuang (the owner of the Phoenix Valley in the fairy world, the immortal king in the final breakthrough) Sun Mengmeng (the ancient gods, One of Xiao Keke's younger brothers) Pei Feng (the grandson of Emperor Dongyue in the mortal world, Long Ye's apprentice, who ended up practicing in the world of immortality) Qilin (the captain of a certain national organization, Xiao Keke's exclusive bald number two) Wen Xiaoxiao (Qian Ziwen's cousin, who can understand dragon language for some reason, one of Xiao Keke's younger brothers)

Marry me well (although this sentence is only two short words, it reveals a hint of coldness and casual calmness, which complements my bohemian figure. The polite and yet alienated period at the end appropriately shows my noble and elegant temperament. Handsome man, you are as bright as a jade tree in front of the wind. Lang Yan is unique and unique in the world. He is as gentle as jade and messes with my mood. He is beautiful in the prosperous age and commits crimes based on his beauty. Textbook-level beauty, a face kissed by an angel. Really handsome and graceful. His face is like a crown of jade. Yushu Linfeng has clear outlines and an angular cold handsomeness; deep black eyes with a charming color; thick eyebrows and beautiful lip shape, all showing nobility and elegance. This, how is this person? This is simply Prince Charming in the fairy tale)

It's very, very good. I finished reading it with another account. Specifically, it should be a single female protagonist, and there aren't too many scenes. It's more about daily life, and plainness is the truth. It's very comfortable to watch, and I won't get tired of it. Anyway, it's an excellent book. (Personally, I can't influence other people's opinions. Anyway, my evaluation is quite high)

It's good to read, it's really good to read. This is the best book I've read among all the invincible books. Other invincible books are basically about fighting and killing. And the plot is coherent, the story is funny, it's really good to watch [laughs][likes][laughs][l likes][laughs][likes][laughs][likes][laughs][l likes]

It's quite good. The whole book is leisurely and leisurely, but it also has the majesty of the Immortal King. It's majestic but also has a funny element. The first part is like an ordinary daily novel, but at the end it starts to lay down the foreshadowing. It is estimated that the general plot line will be interspersed with the daily life.

This book is very interesting and interesting. It has a lot of funny content. I can't stop reading this book. It's funny that Xiao Keke can't beat Xiao Fan. Xiao Keke is suppressed by Xiao Fan every time. There is a very funny chapter called Qing Wen (I don't know if the name is a big mistake) He is a Buddhist, but there is a chapter where he dances in a bar and performs a DJ version of the Great Compassion Mantra.

There are funny content, it was a bit boring at first, but after a few pictures I slowly got into it, and it turned out to be good-looking, with a bit of humor, the pig's feet are invincible, and the Loli Fairy King Saigao [Stare][Stare]

This book is really interesting, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The protagonist has no defeat in terms of combat power, and the character description is also very good!

Generally speaking, this is a special cool novel in this era where cool novels are dominated by cookie-cutter novels. It was very comfortable to read and very close to life. Normally, I only remember one or two protagonists in a good novel. The protagonist and supporting characters in this book gave me a much better feeling than before. Of course, I prefer this kind of harmonious ending. Some people who like sad endings just pretend I didn't say it. As long as you refute it, you are right. The ending was indeed a bit rushed, but the author doesn't know how to write fighting, so I understood it and I liked it very much. Highly recommended.

The whole book says that the protagonist is invincible, but it is not the kind of invincibility that makes people think it is exaggerated. Moreover, the protagonist will not take the initiative to cause trouble. Although he is invincible, he behaves modestly and looks very comfortable. Except for the reincarnated sister Mingyue, all the main characters are well written. I feel sorry for my sister. When I became my younger sister, I thought it was a parasitic soul. But after I confirmed that I was reincarnated, I didn't have any further contact or compensation. I promised that I would come back and take him to the fairy world, but I didn't ask or take any action afterwards. Instead, I interacted more with my twin sister. Personally, I feel that this is the only bad thing.