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Very good, too visible

Wonderful writing, characters, scenery, and plot are tightly connected. To seduce readers' interest, they make them forget to eat while holding the book. I hope to write more for interested readers! ! ! Sister Hong's daughter didn't even see the reunion, which was very disappointing. Should she wait for the next part? Looking forward to it! ! !

Well written, old work

Overall, it's pretty good, but there are some plot points that shouldn't appear that affect the overall effect of the book.

This book is very well written, I hope you will continue to work hard. Come on, I'm optimistic about you! The first half of the book is very well written, but the second half is very poorly written. Some places are incoherent, making it difficult for people to understand and a bit confusing. I hope to work harder in the future and write wonderful books. Therefore, this book can only give suggestions. I hope you can understand me more.