LOL: We Have Our Own Idea King

It's not bad, the writing is okay, and the plot is understandable. I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 73. I feel like it's a bit poisonous to forcibly downgrade Abu in order to reduce the buff for the heroine. Although Chinese coaches are poor, they hit the bottom lane harder to contain the opposite jungler and give themselves room to perform in the upper and midfield. Isn't this obvious at a glance? Not to mention Abu, anyone with a slightly higher rank can see it. Not to mention that Abu has also been a coach. In addition, the stereotyped heroine also reduces the reader's desire to continue reading, giving people the impression that apart from the beautiful and big-breasted vase heroine, there seems to be no other particularly outstanding memory points except for these two points. It is not that I don't like beautiful and big-breasted heroines, but there are too many such heroines, which can easily make the audience tired. Continuing to feed such a plot after fatigue is a bit disgusting. At least it makes me feel disgusted and has no desire to continue watching. I think it is better not to write a female protagonist.

I have read a lot of e-sports novels and started playing games very early on. I've watched a lot of games, and the club I hate the most is RNG. I'm very happy about the author's decision to dismantle the club, and I praise it directly! ! ! !

How can I put it, the competition and daily life are actually quite good. I wanted to try out what it would be like to have multiple female protagonists at the beginning. However, e-sports is indeed a relatively small and pure thing. It doesn't work well with multiple female protagonists. It is easy to overturn and the public opinion will be directly criticized. Unless the worldview allows for multiple female protagonists.

It's pretty good. 🤗 It's considered excellent among a bunch of novices.

Everyone was so happy watching it, I can only say that RNG is awesome!

I want to see pigs and dogs in the same frame, and the pigs help the dogs to catch them

The All-China Class once again fell into the hands of t1, so I read this book again, and I can only say that dreams are so beautiful. I'm back, faker, six-time champion, three consecutive champions, the goat in the gaming world, no Lu Chen can stop him in reality, he is the well-deserved God of the Alliance

Yes, it seems that there is nothing poisonous at present, and the heroine is not a flower pot. Can you drive faster [Adoration]

This author writes in great detail. I have been playing in the league for so long and I didn't even realize that the system article is not the kind of brainless and invincible kind. It is recommended that the system be more diverse. You can add status and give the host some material rewards (this item may or may not be present), but the system still needs to bubble up. Regarding updates, I can only say that the author first considers the health first. Don't stop updating. It would be better if you add updates during the holidays. Come on, come on.

The writing style is very good and the plot is quite interesting. I can read it to the end in one go. However, the updates are a bit sparse, but if you can keep a steady pace of two chapters a day, it is still very good. Come on, author!

Although I have read a lot of league topics, this book is still worth reading. At least it fulfills the dream of the Bird's Nest. Zhu Zi is also a great e-sports player, but time is not waiting for him, which is a pity.

The writing of the game is pretty good, and the system has no sense of existence. In the overall plot development, the relationship between the protagonist and the original RNG players is good. The original RNG players will not be affected. This is a world where only the RNG club is injured, so you can eat it with confidence. [Sinister smile]

This alliance article is very well written, much better than those abstract alliance articles that flash endlessly, but it is updated slowly. Although one chapter has many words, it is still not enough to read. This alliance article is excellent because it is not based on the cloud alliance. It is written based on finding the basis. I really read it one by one. . . Come on author.

It looks okay. Let's take a look at the four points first. I'll add or subtract later.

The author's writing is very enjoyable [laughing].

It's okay, the game is similar to other e-sports articles. There was originally a brilliant plot, but he was blackmailed and framed by the boss of RNG, and he took it to court. If it is well written, it will at least have a climax of more than ten chapters. It's a pity that the author skipped it in one stroke.

Overall, it is one of the better League of Legends fanfics I have seen on Tomato. However, I don't know why? Maybe the data is relatively poor. I've been saving for a long time, but I haven't updated much yet. Uncomfortable[laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

The writing is not bad, and it is indeed OK when looking at e-sports articles. However, I feel that the gap between the ratio of games and daily life is a bit too big. It doesn't seem to match the title of the book. I feel that daily life is dispensable and does not affect reading. I can add more daily life, such as live broadcasts and the like, and add some jokes. After all, it is too monotonous to be all about games.

Multiple heroines, Xiaoyu Xiaoyu, Yushuang Yushuang, Xiran Xiran

Guess when the heroine (chapter) will appear!

It's just a little short, come on. More

I think its existence is reasonable and looks good, but it's a little short.

The book is good and the details are very strong, but it is a bit too pursuit of reasonableness. If the ratio of competition and daily life is adjusted from 9:1 to 8:2, it will be more enjoyable and not a bit boring. In this case, it will be perfect. Come on! Please make more updates, cast the reminder talisman to prompt the update [sneaky laugh]

It's really good, the details are appropriate, and the male protagonist is not very personal and heroic. There are still very few e-sports articles with multiple female protagonists. The proportion of content is also very appropriate. It is a very good seasoning. Come on!

It's okay, the hook is not that big, the plot is okay, give it 5 stars.

The plot is good, the game length is a little long, but the problem is not big, the update speed is too slow

It's pretty good, but the introduction says there are multiple female protagonists, but I guess I didn't read it.

Very good. I know your chapter has 4,000 words, but it's too short and it's not enough to read.

What does this system do for glasses?

Thanks to the author for helping me realize my 17-year dream. Rather than liking RNG, I like them as the right people.