Ye Yuhuai × Ye Miaomiao: “In my name, let yours be written.”
[A gentle and refined young master of the demon clan × a strange healer with two souls]
[A brilliant imperial tutor × a proud and stubborn princess beloved by the whole nation]
[The supreme demon lord of the serpent clan × a perfect goddess who does as she pleases]
[A lowly, lovesick fictional character × a cold and elegant creator]
The leads fight monsters and grow stronger together, as does their ensemble cast.
They experience different identities along the way, and their personalities change with them.
When a fictional character is loved, flesh and blood grow upon them in a frenzy.
“Seeing you is what I want most right now.”
Adrift for half a lifetime, I turn in startled recognition. One fleeting thought, and autumn is already lost.
“He isn’t cold code. His heartbeat thunders in my ears. He is the person I love most.”
After accidentally appearing in a scene, Miaomiao thought Heaven had taken pity on her and given her a new lease on life. Who could have known that their meeting was a mistake, every little moment a mistake, and all that came before a delusion? Three thousand great dreams, fate beginning and ending.
A chance meeting and a growing bond, followed by an inevitable plot of schemes and calculations. You and I have both entered the game.
Theme: Believe in love. Even a broken mirror can be made whole again.
Dressed in plain white, yet her radiance cannot be concealed.
Longing sows snow, while the bright moon winds around the mountains.
A springtime coffin through ten thousand years, a snow banquet and a weathered stele.
Ye Yuhuai guarded the tombstone for thousands upon thousands of years. Seasons came and went as he waited for one person to return. When winter snow fell silently upon the tombstone, he knew another year had passed...
A lonely tombstone, with only one person beside it.
A wisp of soul gathered from the grave, taking the form of a lovely young woman, with skin as smooth as ice and features as delicate as a doll, though her figure was ethereal. She gazed at the man in white, who stared at the tombstone...
The opening chapter is very good, and it should attract readers if they want to read on! The explanations that unfolded later also kept up with it, and I didn't leave any holes for too long. Thumbs up! Let me ask quietly, Miaomiao and Yuhuai are a couple, right? Well, it should be, after all, "it's so small that I'm pregnant with it". I'm giving my sister a big hug~ Okay, the praise is over, now I'm going to start giving pointers~ Woo woo hoo, my sister's writing is really good (the kind that I can't achieve), emm… I don't mix female videos, maybe I've read too many male videos, and I'm used to straightforward descriptions. I always feel that although my sister's words are good, her description of the scenery is too detailed and a bit verbose (for reference only) You can add the character's expression (don't just write about laughter and sadness, write details such as "brows are frowning tightly", or write sideways, such as "lightly covering the corners of the lips", ps. It's not that you don't have this in your article, it's just that there are less of it, there are more smiles and straightforwardness, or maybe I didn't pay attention when I read it) And actions (be concise, like... Forget it, I don't know how to say it. Also, try not to describe the scenery objectively, use the character's eyes to see it, use the character's hands to touch it, use the character's mentality to describe the feelings, and write what kind of scenery it looks like in his or her eyes.) As for the background, I guess my sister wanted to write a deviant love story where a storm is about to come, most of the monsters are in opposition to the human race, the monster prince and the human saint spies (the time-travel version, it seems not the previous one), the story probably wants to write a part of conspiracy, fierce calculations and scheming (but it doesn't seem to be very It's profound. Let's see how it unfolds later. The beginning of the writing is a bit vague. You can strengthen the psychological description, but don't be too thorough - the memory of the past is a bit long. In fact, just keep the general idea, so that there is room for imagination and enhance the sense of layering) (Suggestion: leave appropriate blank space) [You may not want to write this, I will talk about it]
I am looking forward to Fu Jingze's plot. Who is the male protagonist?