Ye Yuhuai × Ye Miaomiao: "In my name, I will give you your surname."
[The young master of the demon tribe who is as gentle as jade × the strange doctor woman with two souls]
[Amazing talent and stunning beauty of the palace master × arrogant and stubborn princess of the whole country]
[The Supreme Snake Tribe Demon Lord × The Perfect Goddess Made in Heaven and Earth]
[Bitter and humble paper man × cool and noble creator]
The male and female protagonists fight monsters and upgrade along the way, creating a growing protagonist group.
Along the way, you will experience different identities and different personalities that will change.
——The paper man will grow blood and flesh crazily if he is loved.
"Going to see you is what I want to do most right now."
——Having been shaken for half a life, I looked back in shock, and in a flash, I was disappointed with Qingqiu.
"He is not a cold code, his heartbeat is deafening. He is the person I love most."
Once I accidentally walked into the mirror, I thought it was God's mercy, which made Miaomiao think that I had regained my life. But who knew that the encounter was a mistake, every detail was a mistake, and all the past were all false. Three thousand dreams, the origin and the end.
A chance encounter and mutual understanding, an inevitable conspiracy. You and I are both in the game.
——Conception: Believe in love, broken mirrors will be reunited.
Dressed in plain clothes, it is hard to hide one's elegance
Acacia grows snow, and the bright moon wraps around the mountains.
The coffin of thousands of years of spring, the remnant monument of the snow feast.
In the end, Ye Yuhuai guarded the tombstone for thousands of years, and the four seasons passed, just waiting for one person to come and return. When the winter snow fell quietly on the tombstone, he knew that another year had passed...
A lonely tombstone with only one person for company.
A ray of soul gathered from the tomb and transformed into a beautiful girl, with ice muscles and jade bones, carved with pink jade, but her figure was ethereal. The woman looked at the man in white longingly, and the man stared at the tombstone...
Reader comments
The beginning is very good, and the reader should be attracted by the desire to read on! The explanations that unfolded later also kept up with it, and I didn't leave any holes for too long. Thumbs up! Let me ask quietly, Miaomiao and Yuhuai are a couple, right? Well, it should be, after all, "it's so small that I'm pregnant with it".
Give my sister a big hug~
Okay, the boasting is over, now, I'm going to start giving random instructions~
Woohoo, my sister's writing is really good (it's not as good as I can achieve), emm… I don't mix female videos, maybe I've read too many male videos, and I'm used to straightforward descriptions. I always feel that although my sister's words are good, the details of the scenery are too detailed and a bit complicated (for reference only)
You can add the character's expression (don't just write about smiles and sadness, write details like "brows are frowning tightly", or write sideways, like "lightly covering the corners of the lips", ps. It's not that you don't have this in your article, it's just that there are less of it, there are more smiles and straightforwardness, or maybe I didn't pay attention when I read it)
And actions (be concise, like... Forget it, I don't know how to say it. Furthermore, try not to describe the scenery objectively, use the character's eyes to see it, use the character's hands to touch it, use the character's mentality to describe the feelings, and write what kind of scenery it looks like in his or her eyes.)
As for the background, I guess my sister wanted to write a deviant love story where a storm is about to come, most monsters are in opposition to the human race, the monster prince and the human saint spies (the time-travel version, it seems not the previous one), the story probably wants to write a part of conspiracy, fierce calculations and scheming (but it doesn't seem to be very It's profound, let's see how it unfolds later. The beginning of the writing is a bit vague, you can strengthen the psychological description, but don't be too thorough - the memory of the past is a bit long, in fact, just keep the general idea, so that there is room for imagination and enhance the sense of layering) (Suggestion: leave appropriate blank space) [You may not want to write this, I will talk about it]
I am looking forward to Fu Jingze's plot. Who is the male protagonist?
The beginning is very good, and the reader should be attracted by the desire to read on! The explanations that unfolded later also kept up with it, and I didn't leave any holes for too long. Thumbs up! Let me ask quietly, Miaomiao and Yuhuai are a couple, right? Well, it should be, after all, "it's so small that I'm pregnant with it". Give my sister a big hug~ Okay, the boasting is over, now, I'm going to start giving random instructions~ Woohoo, my sister's writing is really good (it's not as good as I can achieve), emm… I don't mix female videos, maybe I've read too many male videos, and I'm used to straightforward descriptions. I always feel that although my sister's words are good, the details of the scenery are too detailed and a bit complicated (for reference only) You can add the character's expression (don't just write about smiles and sadness, write details like "brows are frowning tightly", or write sideways, like "lightly covering the corners of the lips", ps. It's not that you don't have this in your article, it's just that there are less of it, there are more smiles and straightforwardness, or maybe I didn't pay attention when I read it) And actions (be concise, like... Forget it, I don't know how to say it. Furthermore, try not to describe the scenery objectively, use the character's eyes to see it, use the character's hands to touch it, use the character's mentality to describe the feelings, and write what kind of scenery it looks like in his or her eyes.) As for the background, I guess my sister wanted to write a deviant love story where a storm is about to come, most monsters are in opposition to the human race, the monster prince and the human saint spies (the time-travel version, it seems not the previous one), the story probably wants to write a part of conspiracy, fierce calculations and scheming (but it doesn't seem to be very It's profound, let's see how it unfolds later. The beginning of the writing is a bit vague, you can strengthen the psychological description, but don't be too thorough - the memory of the past is a bit long, in fact, just keep the general idea, so that there is room for imagination and enhance the sense of layering) (Suggestion: leave appropriate blank space) [You may not want to write this, I will talk about it]
I am looking forward to Fu Jingze's plot. Who is the male protagonist?