Ode to Joy, I Became the Third Son of the Qu Family

The book is okay, but there are too many typos and some sentences are not smooth.

Don't write anything complicated if you don't have the writing skills. I didn't see anything interesting except for the embarrassing blowjob. There are also many typos. Even if it's not a typo, it's a misnomer.

What is written here is pretty good based on the introduction. I won't go into too many typos in your content. I'll give you some suggestions. Your writing style makes it difficult for readers to take on the role. I hope the author can correct it. It's still good. Come on.

The story content is pretty good

It's all typos and the paragraphs are unclear.

They are all typos. I can't read them. I can't understand them.

There are really many typos and names are confusing.

I can't understand, there are too many typos

What is this? It's all typos. I have to translate it myself. The paragraphs are not clear, so I have to sort it out myself.

What did you write? There are a lot of typos.

This typo is outrageous. I have never seen so many typos like yours in eight years of reading novels.

The concept of the story is good, but it was written too fast. It should be said that I can't write it, and there is no sense of immersion at all.