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Please allow me to be shameless and give my book a good review [laughing]

Author, is there no heroine in this book? [What] (But I don't care [note])

There are a few realistic Havens. The current Havens either forcefully blackmail Ron or forcefully clean up Malfoy. There is something wrong with the protagonist's character setting. He is a type who doesn't want to cause trouble but is a bit soft-hearted. It's not an annoying character. I also have a suggestion for the author. It's actually okay to hang out with Harry in the early stage. The protagonist's life experience is almost the same even if he doesn't find Harry. He is the adopted son of a descendant of a member of the Order of the Phoenix.

The writing is quite good. I suggest you also accept Hermione. Since you have already written about the signs of love with her, be more thorough and adopt her as your harem. Don't just accept people who have an affair with the protagonist just to keep the CP of the original novel from being accepted. Otherwise, you will be giving away girls, which is a big poison. It doesn't matter to Qiu Zhang, he doesn't have a deep relationship with the protagonist, and it doesn't matter whether he accepts or not. But Hermione now clearly has a crush on the protagonist. And I personally think that Ron and Hermione are not a particularly good match. If they are separated, they will be separated, and the impact will not be big. If you have a CP like Xia and Luo in League of Legends, Qiao Feng and A'Zhu in Jin Yong, or Sora and Bai in Game of Life, you don't need to dismantle it.

It's very interesting and the plot is quite innovative. There are just some shortcomings (from my personal perspective): Most of the character attributes have superpowers, such as water, fire and grass, which add difficulties to human wizards. This may hinder the selection of skills (of course, the author has better ideas and ignores this article). Lao Fu's attributes must be evil [eat melon], I look forward to the mist exploding with his hand. By the way, it would be better to be more accurate about attribute restraint to avoid publishing errors. Finally, I would like to say that it would be better to update it sooner. There are too few chapters. Otherwise, the score wouldn't be so low

It's quite interesting, I saw the appearance of the shit yellow button in one go. The protagonist's golden finger is quite interesting, but I'll probably have to wait and see what happens next. The author has already laid out the emotional drama between the protagonist and his adoptive sister, and the only thing left is for the protagonist to become an adult and receive the certificate. The protagonist and Qiu Zhang are now friends, and Hermione seems to have fallen in love with the protagonist after being rescued by the protagonist. Although the protagonist means not to break up the CP, the author still left some usable foreshadowing in the article. In addition, I saw in the comment area that the author said that the CP is yet to be determined. I'd better just let it go. Personally, I can't accept changing the heroine or starting a harem. Thank you to the author, the plot is quite interesting.

Nice fanfic

The writing style is very good, the plot connection is also very smooth, the character characteristics are well written, and love and hate are clearly defined. Especially the brother and sister's desire to protect each other and the emotion of seeing each other hurt is very well written. It is obvious that the relationship between the brother and sister is gradually deteriorating. Hehehehehe~

Extreme love and extreme hate? Uchiha, who is born evil, I will do it with my own hands... [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Not bad! But I don't want the heroine to feel like her sister is weird. Maybe it's because I don't like watching Nian Shang? Ah, I feel that the degeneration of love and family ties is too obvious, and some people may like it, so I hope it can be written in a more subtle way so that both parties can be taken care of! (The feeling that the missing one star is my sister is too obvious)

This book is very good, just a bit short, but it is well worth reading.

Very good, but can you add a copy plug-in to the system and use other Chinese, American, Japanese and Korean movies as parallel worlds for the protagonist to complete tasks and experience? Movies like Seoul Weird, Silent Hill, etc. The main character Pokémon's skills should not be changed as much as possible. If it is completely different, it will not feel like a Pokémon. Also, the protagonist is a humanoid Pokémon. The fighting method should also be based on the fact that the Pokémon is not an orthodox wizard. The physical and various attributes must be improved. At least it must be able to fight a giant dragon in hand-to-hand combat without relying on skills.

--🌿 🍍 🍦 🍉 🌿—- ᵀᴴᴱ ᴮᴱˢᵀ ᴵˢ ᶠᴼᴿ ᵞᴼᵁ The summer wind rises from the fields and falls for the first time, allowing all things to grow.

Let me guess what the author is writing about is a relationship between brother and sister.

It shouldn't be bad, at least it's pretty good so far... I hope the author doesn't suck. So far, it's been pretty good. Come on, author.

The name is not great, but the content is good

Okay, there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with it so far. (Whisper, I want a single sister)

It's really good. It's not poisonous. Don't worry.

Keep up the good work, author, keep writing, it will definitely become popular [love] [love] [love]

It's very well written, but it's just not enough.

Very good Harry Potter fanfic

I just watched the beginning, it's very interesting

Come on, it's not suitable for me, who can direct others to use strange skills.

Support the author, the book is very interesting

Mrs. Cool Balcony

Good looking, I like my sister

Not bad, not bad, not bad

Not bad, but not enough flavor

Come on, author Sang The author has gone from two updates before, to occasionally three updates, to three updates all the time, and now occasionally adds four updates. I just want to say, the author is awesome!

Come on, it's very good