Rumble!!!
With muscles like coiling dragons, Luohu lifted the Daoist Palace all by himself. But its weight was like that of the entire Primordial World.
It took only moments for his flesh to split open all over. Demonic blood stained the sky as his torn muscles healed, only to split again, over and over.
“Arghhh! Lift!”
Rumble!!!
Another deafening crash rang out. The Western Lands beneath his feet shattered, and their spiritual ley lines were utterly destroyed.
Countless living beings were reduced to dust in this cataclysm, dissolving into clouds of blood before vanishing forever.
The earth-shaking battle immediately roused countless Ancestors, including Hongjun.
Everyone was stunned, horrified beyond words!
It's a mess. The first few pictures are well written, but what's written on the back?
The first six chapters were very enjoyable to read, but then the seventh chapter turned around and it was all a novel author's fantasy. I... To put it mildly... Can't comment. Hey, where's my comment?
What are you writing about? There is no reply at all in the beginning and the follow-up.
What did you write? The first few chapters are okay, but what is the end of the following chapters?