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It's good to write about the navy, but there are too many messy things that don't make sense, such as some messy skills, and how is she okay if she still doesn't know Mootu? After dozens of chapters, she's still dawdling in the navy, and the protagonist doesn't even know what to do. When writing about the navy, she wants to become stronger and fight pirates, and there shouldn't be too much romance.

Although reading a book requires no brain. But what kind of skills or boxings did you come up with? Even if you are an editor, you don't have to be so good at it, okay? You are the worst One Piece fanfic I have ever read. You can't beat the worst one. Really sucks.

I feel it too. Not great. Good subject matter. It's written. Campus dog blood sentence

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Using a martial arts fantasy plot to write about pirates, it's nondescript

Two chapters of persuading people to quit is really awesome.

Thin🐶So short

Not that good, I might as well write about Jin Yong

The navy is a mess and has no rules at all.

Do you like innovation so much? Just write another book, why should I write about One Piece and sell dog meat to others?

Disgusting🤢🤢🤢🤢

The most trashy novel in history

Are you sure it's about pirates? Wolong, the elixir has come out. Might as well just say that he ate a devil fruit.

It feels like selling a sheep's head to a dog. Is this the world of cultivating immortals and practicing martial arts? Is there any original work on all martial arts?

Scrap this book

The author has never seen One Piece? ? ? ?

I don't understand, too many are unreasonable

It's better to write about the fantasy of cultivating immortals than to write about pirates [vomit][vomit][vomit]

At first glance, it seems that I didn't spend money to buy people to gain stars.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author💪