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I read Chapter 14 and it felt really good. It is the best urban immortality novel I have ever read. It's okay if I don't see the beautiful woman. If I don't have a KTV party, the old man takes his granddaughter... They all have normal intelligence and brains online, good! I hope the author can stick to this style, but without the Virgin, he can punish the wicked and bad people who can't be controlled at ordinary times.

That's right, there are no other junk books that are hidden away all day long.

The plot is not cliche, the literary talent is also very good, and it is unique. Come on

Personally, I still think it's quite good-looking. The logic is clear and the ending is too sudden. It's a bit heart-burning and exhausting, and it makes me crazy. ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ I like it that is not wordy and has no ink. I recommend you to read it and it doesn't feel disgusting to you. It makes people want to abandon the article after reading half of it. They love their country and their wives and cherish their friends and kill their enemies. There is no mercy at all, but there are still many interesting things. There is no harem, villains, annoying trivial matters, and there is no indecisiveness like others. It is refreshing and less nonsense, and there are a lot of verbose things. Even the villains can turn into enemies and become followers. It makes people abandon the article. Overall, this book is not bad. I look forward to the author's follow-up works. Support it!

The previous book is very good (=^▽^=). This book is one of the most logical among all the books I have read. The logic includes human emotions and social reactions as well as simple physical quantities. Other books always lack something. It's just that I wrote it too hastily. But at least it can be seen that this book has an outline. The author thought about the ending in advance and may have been too busy in the end to omit the details later, but overall it is very good. It is definitely more difficult to write such a logical article than to write something that comes to mind. However, we still advocate this type of writing with strong logic and reasonable plots. Those writings that gain popularity by themselves and each chapter is very short and the number of words to piece together the plot are still too bad and we do not recommend them.

Yes, this person shows his holiness in front of others, without any whining or whining. It does not mean that he always shows his holiness to make himself look good. Let's see how to write the follow-up, faster, otherwise readers will run away.

I have only read thirty chapters so far, and I feel that it is quite good. He is a very human protagonist, and each character is drawn with flesh and blood, without any facial makeup. Some of the plots are a bit cliche, but acceptable. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development, but it seems a little short. What affects the viewing experience the most is the comment section, which is very violent. People who are suspected of being a liar respond patiently and are criticized for not killing anyone. They are misunderstood and taken away by the police and are criticized for not killing people. My wife is in danger and will feel panicked and criticized. I always feel that what many readers want is a ruthless immortal who kills decisively. The ancestors who do not eat beef are more in line with their appetite. I actually admire the more patient and humane protagonist in this novel, who is extremely powerful and never forgets his original intention. I blocked comments after reading the content. After reading it, I commented and expressed my feelings. I was really annoyed by the hostility in the comment area.

A seriously underrated book, so enjoyable. The male protagonist never hides his immortal strength. After the tribulation is overturned in public, the virtual image of Yuan Shen will be thousands of feet tall. After the tribulation has been stabilized for seven days, the virtual image will be displayed for everyone to see for seven days.

Looks good. My day. Finished reading. Chapter 58.

I feel that the logic of the characters' thinking is quite clear. The protagonist's three views are in line with those of normal humans, and the division of strength is also acceptable. It is considered an excellent book among similar books.

The most exciting novel I have ever read, it is really decisive in killing. This should be the turning point when I write it, and I'm afraid that a lot of people who write about cultivating the truth and cultivating immortals will appear, and the novel will probably be ruined. Later, you can try to arm-wrestle with foreigners until you don't recognize their breasts. It should be a fairy that controls the earth and all disasters are wiped out.

One of the few urban cultivation texts that can be read

Entering the Tao, practicing essence, practicing Qi, refining spirit and soul. The three difficulties of Yuan Shen are one, heaven and man. Nine-turn Flying Immortal, Immortal Five Disasters, the Realm of Three Heavens and Earth, Immortal Emperor. (Some Taoist friends don't understand how to cultivate immortality, so I explained a little bit. The system of cultivating immortality is derived from Qi training, foundation building, and golden elixir. Have you read it when you get home? The book "Westward Journey" written by Stephen Chow is like Tang Monk reciting sutras. I have the urge to hit someone.

The previous writing was very enjoyable. I hope it can slowly develop into a daily life in the later stages of the plot. It's like retreating to the city so that the city will not be in turmoil. Then there are people from other countries who are saints and steal the disciples of the male protagonist. There is a novel written like this. Westerners come to China to become apprentices, but they fail to learn the spells. After making simple changes and weakening them, they call themselves magic. Since they have never started, they keep sweeping the floor. After returning home, brooms become the standard equipment of magicians, and they fly on broomsticks every day.

This work is very humane, friends or relatives want to help them, I won't say more, follow up for more updates [Like]

This is what I saw x This type of novel is the best [thinking][thinking][thinking], looking forward to updates.

Overall, it's not bad. You can give it a look if you are in Shuhuang. The ending just wasn't ideal! Thanks to the author for his hard work.

The author is very good, I hope to maintain the standard and finish it off.

It's okay, you need to be patient to see it, it's very tasty! The three views are correct, and the emphasis on violence is not so strong. I like it. There are too many books nowadays that are not correct in the three views.

It's so beautiful. Come and see it, everyone. Don't let me feel uncomfortable alone.

The writing is still very good, much better than others who are all cultivators of immortality.

It's just that I wrote it too quickly in the end. The author himself said so. What a pity.

I just like the single female protagonist. Come on, I'll give you 5 stars

This is called real strength, and the earth is taken with it [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Not bad, come on, there are no grandfathers and granddaughters, there are no gangsters, just one person crushing them with strength, it's very cool.

The book is okay, although the ending is hasty, but it is just right for an old bookworm like me who is tired of all the themes and routines.

Very good. The structural logic is relatively clear.

What's funny is that there's also the Dragon King🐲, but luckily he's not crooked After reading it, I'll give you a cup of Bobo milk tea🥤I think it's a good write-up👍 Is there a next one?

I think this book is pretty good, except that it finished very quickly! Others, okay!

The writing is pretty good, but it's too short and not enough to read.