Star Dome Railway: My Previous Life Seems Not Simple?

Well written, keep up the good work After reading this book again, I realized that it seemed to be poorly written at the beginning... But it is still a five-star review, so cheers for the author!

It's great, the interaction with March 7 is so sweet, but why is Little March so unlucky? [Cover face]

The writing is really good, it's like writing a beautiful fantasy when playing a game. The emotional line is also good, not as abrupt as some books, and develops more naturally. At the same time, the protagonist is not sentimental. I don't reject harems, but I'm annoyed when I see them accepting one after another. Such general love lines are very confusing. The character design is also well established, and the character design is not forcibly destroyed for the sake of developing feelings. All in all, it was a very enjoyable book for me to read. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

I finished reading it in one go. It's a very interesting Star Vault fanfic. I just don't know why the popularity is so low. It's obviously very good compared to many other fanfics. Cheers, author [blowing kisses]

Yeah, it's pretty good to watch, and the emotional scenes are a little bit fast. But it's not harmful, but I think, it's me who thinks that my relationship with the male and female lead can go on smoothly, like that, a misunderstanding, ah, he doesn't like me, and then reconciles later or something. This kind of separation, especially like the script of a certain Yin, Bi Xin, I think, it can be less, or even unnecessary. Of course, the above is what I think, I am just expressing my opinion, well, that's it, anyway, the author wrote it very well, I recommend watching it

Very good, I'm very satisfied, but not enough

It's well written, but the rating is a bit low. The character creation is very good and restores the character's personality in the game to a great extent. I just hope that it doesn't collapse, doesn't eunuch, and doesn't end badly. Just write it steadily and don't worry about other nonsense.

This kind of love process is what we like! An unclear love relationship is worse than no heroine Although this book is a daily novel, it occasionally intersperses some battle plots to refresh our tired aesthetics. There are no shortcomings in this book. If I had to choose, it would only be that it updates too slowly and is too short. The subsequent plot felt too rushed, making the protagonist feel as if he had changed into a completely different person. He had transformed from a little puppy exclusive to March 7 to a capricious and unpredictable boss behind the scenes (a strange metaphor?

Needless to say, it's really good-looking, with moments of laughter and tears. There is only one shortcoming, the author needs to update more! Not enough!

The book is very interesting, follows the plot closely, and has its own innovations. Ten or even nine is good (appreciation)

Not to say it is the best among the Xingtie novels, but it is also the one that gives me the best sense. The character of the protagonist is also very well written. He usually feels disdainful and very reliable when it comes to business. The protagonist is not a loser who can't walk when he sees a girl. The characters in the train crew are also well portrayed, each with their own characteristics, and the relationship with March is very sweet (I hope there will be no knife) Finally, I hope that there will be a single heroine on March 7th. It will be difficult to end without marriage if she is so sweet [star]

This is the first game fanfic I have read. I thought the plot would be exactly the same as the original plot. Unexpectedly, the author also added his own plot in it, which blends well with the original plot. I just don't know how to fill in the latest relationship between Xier and Bronya. I am very much looking forward to it. This seems to be the author's first book. The writing is very good. It doesn't sound like a newbie. I'm very curious as to whether it is the trumpet account of some big boss. [Make a face] I also hope that this book will get better and better results. Finally, I'm curious about what will happen if Bengtie updates the plot one day and the author can't keep up with it quickly. Will a new map outside the plot be opened? Looking forward to it I don't know what the requirements are for a long review, emmmmm, maybe a thousand words.

It is definitely the March heroine novel that I have read that best meets my ideal. I don't know why other March heroine novels are either ridiculous or funny. There are basically very few people who fall in love. This may be the reason why Beng Tie originally trained Yue Qi as the heroine.

So sweet, oh my god. I would call it the strongest novel in which the heroine is March 7th.

The character descriptions are very delicate, and each character has a distinct personality. At the same time, the protagonist is also well controlled in a state where he dares to love and hate but is not frivolous. I still like this. Regarding the protagonist's power, I think the sudden increase in power caused by the previous life is a bit abrupt, and I can write a few more chapters to pave the way. Finally, in terms of plot advancement, the first part is very good, but after the protagonist is chased by the king, the plot becomes particularly abrupt and incoherent, and the ending is a bit far-fetched. I think it is due to the slow completion of the book. However, small flaws cannot hide the good parts of this book. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

It's so sweet at the front [Sending my heart] But the more I look at the back, the more and more something is wrong. When I take a closer look - Knife [shocked] [shocked] [shocked] Fortunately, the extra chapter is still sweet [smile] It's really the sweetest book I've read since I read Beng Tie Fans [Adored] [Admired] [Admired]

Not bad, it's quite interesting^V^[laughing]

Five-star praise, this book is really sweet and beautiful!

It is a very good book. Although it is a little short (my sister-in-law is definitely not bitter), it is definitely one of the books that made me smile the most. I thank the author for leaving me with wonderful memories. I hope this trip will reach the stars✧＼ ٩(눈౪눈)و //✧Come on hey

The emotional lines are well written, comfortable to watch, and rich in psychological activities. The ending of the plot felt a bit rushed, and some details were a bit uninteresting. When I watched it, my mood didn't change at all. One second at the end, my blood pressure was still soaring, and the next second, you suddenly felt like you were forced to calm down... Generally speaking, it's worth watching. The characters, plot, and emotional lines are all enjoyable to watch.

The writing is very sweet, the protagonist is not the kind of beast who only thinks with his lower body, and his view of love feels quite upright. I am also very concerned about Xiao Sanyue's feelings. It just felt like the ending of the last few chapters was a bit rushed. The love line is well drawn. The plot line may be slightly worse.

The plot is exciting, the content is pretty good, and it stands out among other fan fiction. Come on! Keep writing and you will definitely achieve something. I will keep following this book. As long as it keeps getting worse, I will see the end. [Learned] You must keep writing it! [Almost crying] You know, there aren't many high-quality fanfics like yours.

It's very beautiful, and it perfectly depicts the image of March 7th in my heart. The daily slapstick is quite interesting. However, the identity of the protagonist is quite mysterious, and it is quite interesting to slowly reveal the identity of the protagonist, so that there is room for imagination [Learned]

The heroine, March Wife, is really good-looking It's over…it's the feeling of emptiness that's causing trouble again

For fans of Star Railway, which has been completed so far, this book can be considered a book with a complete plot, well-characterized characters, and a very comfortable feel. It is definitely at the top of the books I have read so far. It is indeed quite good.

It briefly saved me from the world-destroying book shortage, and it was very appetizing.，，TM（），（）

I would like to give you five stars for this high-quality Bengtie fan. I hope more people will read this book. There are more and more Bengtie fandoms on Tomato, but there are fewer and fewer authors who are not afraid of backstabbing, and even fewer are those who dare to create original plots without crashing. The original plot in each fanfic is the author's own better interpretation and interpretation of Bengtie, and it is also a shining point apart from the main line of the game.

(Read the review) A very good quality Star Iron fanfic. Although the whole story is not long, it is also a wonderful story that is slightly different from the original plot. The story introduces nature at the beginning, and the whole plot has an appropriate rhythm. The only shortcoming is that the later part of revealing the protagonist's life experience and the battle with Nanook felt a bit rushed. The whole article is polysaccharide, and there is a knife at the back (but then it is alive). The characters are basically not OOC (do not match the original character's personality), and are portrayed in a nuanced and graphic way. Reading suggestions: In terms of combat power settings, there are not many details given in the game. The author's own settings will be slightly different (just ask if the plot requires it); don't go into too much detail about the logic and rationality later, so as not to affect the reading experience.

It's so beautiful, I'm addicted to watching it

It's well written. I really like the CP of the protagonist and March 7th. The only drawback is that the word count is too small and I lost interest as soon as I started it. Come on, author, please update quickly.