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The author is very careful. There are obviously many girls to contact, but the arrangements are clear and not messy at all. The plot advances reasonably, the third and first person intersect, and the psychological activities are delicate. The plot design is also good, it is not an emotionless free gift and a harem, it is flesh and blood, and the characters are not formulaic and templated. A very good scripted novel. But I personally feel that the author's battle-related details need to be dealt with, such as relying on external power and leapfrogging battles. (After all, every leapfrog kill cannot rely on treasures obtained by chance. The character of the protagonist will be a good tipping point and make the novel more touching. Writing about people is about writing from the heart.) In general, if the author can make slight changes like my little suggestion next time, then,,,,,, Thai pants are hot!

After reading just a few chapters, I was hooked! Not bad! Looking forward to more updates from the author! It's really good, funny, humorous, compact, dangerous and fascinating!

The content of this book is relatively exciting. It is a multi-female protagonist type so far, but the most important thing is that the protagonist in the original plot of the book is not as brainless as other books - he is always on the road of bullying the villain, making the protagonist as the villain seem to have a brother, making the plot more natural.

In fact, I like the way the protagonist takes advantage of himself, but then turns around and becomes an upright gentleman in the eyes of all the main characters [smile] Moreover, a lot of ink was spent on the portrayal of Destiny's Child. Su Chen's character was made into a serious supporting role, and his personality was quite likable. Unlike other villain stories, Destiny's Child was given a protagonist's name but was described according to the villain's image.

The writing is very good, and the text is also very good [smile][smile] Where are you, author? I will send you some souvenirs.

It's beautiful, even better than the last book, but it's too short. The author updates quickly. I read the last book in one day. This book is longer and needs more writing! I feel like some details in the last book were not written well, but I can't be too wordy. Anyway, the author, please do your best [Blow a kiss]

I am following this from the last book, so cheers for the author. The last book brought back the hero's own world with very few genres, which makes people feel fresh. I also hope that the author can drive a little car. I hope that this book will also be exciting and give me a surprising reading feeling [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]. I also hope that the author can also incorporate some things from the previous book to open up his imagination and add some little easter eggs@What Characters

I'm reading it now, but I liked the previous one, so I'll give it five stars first. I can't get enough of it. It's so beautiful. I really want to watch it for a while, but I can't help it.

Very good-looking, it feels like an older brother taking care of his younger brother. And what he said is consistent with the Dao. I haven't seen such a comforting novel in a long time. It not only robbed the opportunity, but also shouldered the corresponding cause and effect. The cycle of cause and effect is endless. The road is impermanent and changes are constant. Destined people have their own destiny. The growth of the protagonist also corresponds to corresponding challenges. When the righteous path is not prosperous and the evil path covers the sky, it means that Yin is prosperous and Yang is declining. Yin and Yang cannot be balanced, and the world order is upside down. The balance of yin and yang is destiny. As the Yang Dao grows stronger day by day, the evil path becomes difficult to cover, difficult to reconcile, and extremely destroyed. The world is in chaos and order is reborn. While the protagonist is powerful, he also shoulders more responsibilities. The three views are also very positive. First, the experience of growing up insipidly, and then growing up step by step into an upright person. There is a lot of expectation, as well as expectations for the subsequent plot. Thank you to the author for your hard work!

This. . It's okay to turn the villain into the protagonist. It looks very good and the style is very unique. There is no need to kill the Son of Destiny. It is very interesting to weaken and hollow out the Dihua. I wonder if the handsome man who likes it can travel through the past. Hahahaha Jie Jie Jie.

Come on, author, I really liked the last work, but there were a lot of logic errors. I didn't understand how several of the female protagonists fell in love with the male protagonist in the previous work. I hope you can sort out the logic in this work. The plot of the male and female protagonists will be more perfect, and the relationship will gradually develop. In the end, you can return to the real world and link it with the previous work. Hehe, the number of real-life heroines will increase by half.

Really, this book is amazing I was amused by various imaginary plots in the middle of the night Jin Deok Thai pants are hot! ! !

This book is wonderful, and its logic is very rigorous. It is a great improvement over the previous book and deserves praise. It also describes the characters' actions, details, emotions, etc. Very well. But I still want to read the follow-up to the previous book. I hope the author can publish a sequel or a second book to the previous book. I really want to know the subsequent development of Mr. Gu and his son @. I hope that the author's future books will be discovered by more and more people. The author will make a lot of money, write the book quickly, and update five chapters a day.

It was a pleasure to watch, very much to my liking, five stars for my support. I don't know what will happen to this Su Chen in the future. I think it can be written that he is a woman from the beginning [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]. It depends on how the author makes things right later.

A rare mechanical system. Strategies for the heroine one by one. I think it looks pretty [blowing kiss]

How to say it? It's good to watch, although the plot is cliche. But there's nothing we can do about it. After all, fantasy villain stories all have plots like this. But I think the character's personality is pretty well written. The author's writing style is also okay. There are no poisonous points in this book, so readers can read it with confidence.

It mainly writes about a dozen female protagonists with high luck, and summarizes the process in two words: "Double Cultivation". There is no killing, no arrogance, and no good or villain. It goes further and further down the road paved by a gentleman. Most of the time it is the heroine who designs this person. Human description is greater than emotional description. The property panel of the system is only used to express other people's opportunities and plans.

The writing is childish, but the plot is good. Goldfinger is good. The back doesn't look like it was written by a human being

It is very logical, very symmetrical, and very exciting. This is the best novel I have ever read on Tomato. If you weren't short of money, you would definitely give me a reward or two.

I have read two novels by this author, and I have to say that the writing is still very good. Advantages: I believe you have read a lot of articles like this, but there are still several aspects of this novel that attracted me and made me feel bright. First of all, unlike other villain slap-in-the-face stories, this work aims to plunder the destiny of the children of destiny in advance and even make them grateful, which I did not expect, such as Su Chen or Yang Jin in the end. There are not many children of luck in the work, but the entire story line is complete and full of laughs, with many deceptions. Secondly, there is a slight touch of the soul traveling back to reality, which is linked with the author's previous novel, which is very novel. Finally, my favorite part is that this novel is only in one dimension and will not develop to a higher level, because I personally prefer to be myself. Of course, I definitely hope to be in my own world and accompany the people around me. Disadvantages: There is no such thing as a perfect work. Compared with the previous one, the latter part is a little faster-paced, especially in terms of improving the realm. Of course, I understand that even if a new place is changed every time, the routine is still the same. The final episode can be considered to have a relatively good ending, which is a pretty good work.

This book is very interesting, I really like it. However, the author probably just started writing, and many details were not shown. For example, the sword he picked up at the beginning was not described later, or the identity of Hua Manlou was not discussed later after what happened between the two masters. Also, what I have seen so far, Su Chen killed the senior brother, there must be good things in the sect's senior brother Najie. These can also be discussed in detail. After filling in the details, it really feels like a great book. So far, the plot and subject matter are only good.

Good-looking and interesting author, please update quickly [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart] It's boring later, I feel like I'm playing a matryoshka doll. It's really disgusting to keep repeating the part about Miss Qin's family. It's getting worse and worse. It doesn't look good.

Very good, lots of laughs [face covering] I used to love watching martial arts cultivating immortals and the like. Ever since I read the author's book Waiting for Me, I started to like routine palace battles. I work the night shift and I didn't feel sleepy at all just watching it all night. It's so cool [Admiration] It sublimates from time to time. All I can say is The author's writing style is still very good. You know what the next chapter is going to do, but the feeling of the author's writing is different. And it is normal and not surprising that there are no poisonous points in the book. If you like it, you can read it and abandon it. There is no need to judge randomly. I like the author's book very much. @What a person. Publish a book soon! None of the donkeys in the production team could rest like this [hit hard]! ! !

After reading it, let me talk about my feelings. It is a classic villain novel, but to me it feels different from other villain novels. Other villain novels always feel boring, but the rhythm of this one is indeed very compact, and I like it very much. However, there are still some shortcomings. For example, according to the thinking of ordinary novels, the foundation of cultivation obtained by dual cultivation should be unstable. Also, the protagonist has poor talent to begin with. Later, when he goes out to dual cultivation to break through the cultivation level, he will also break through it a bit quickly. But I don't think it's bad. The main thing is that I feel like I haven't seen enough [laughs]

The outstanding characters in the early stage are very detailed. The son of fortune's admiration for the protagonist and the gift of green plums are very interesting. The name of robbery is also vividly displayed. I like the harem type but don't like the similar stallions. As a result, there are too many harems in the later period. Some heroines basically have no plot. In order to improve their strength, they all do dual cultivation, and I don't know where the robbery is. You can feel the author's efforts, but unfortunately some of the foreshadowings are a bit hasty. I put the ascension thing in the back of my mind, but I don't mind giving up the ascension plot. It's just a pointless change to the map. I hope the author can keep up his good work. It is completely sufficient as a good article, but it would be a good thing if it can also become a good article [Love]

It's so good to watch😄All kinds of jealousy + conspiracy + coincidence + comedy, it deserves 5 stars! It would be fun to plunder the destiny of the child of destiny. It would be better if it could be better. It would be interesting to look at other people's futures and find more opportunities.

The opening and middle sections are very intact. I also like the dual cultivation method. Many heroines also like it. Well, a very good novel. Overall the ending was a bit sloppy. Well, you can let the system automatically upgrade. There is no need to talk about multiple time travellers.

It's a bit awesome, the part about forming an alliance with the Qin family 6. It's very interesting. There are few stories with multiple female protagonists and villains that are so interesting. It's absolutely cool. The male protagonist is in control of the overall situation. The only drawback is that the combat power is a bit abnormal, but it's a trivial matter to comfort yourself.

It's nice to read, and the characters are well written. It's not like other books where the characters start out rigidly and end like that. The plot advancement is also very reasonable, and the foreshadowing is also well done. But the author's update speed is too slow to read! Finished but not enough.

The writing is good, and the detailed psychological description is very intelligent. It is an excellent work, refreshing and enjoyable!