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It looks good. In terms of completeness, although it ends hastily, it is still complete. The pace of the plot is very good. The author is worried about the problem of the collapse of combat power. In fact, many cultivators and Honkai classic Dragon Ball (whatever) have this problem. Moreover, even if the protagonist is set to be invincible, there is no problem in following the invincible style. Currency issues can be easily improved. Just make a comparison, and then set a currency name. As someone who has written Western fantasy novels, I have a suggestion about currency. Every time there is something new to buy, record the price. You can use a unified currency to facilitate comparison and prevent pricing errors.

The story is substantial and not procrastinating, the world view is clearly set, and the characters are interesting and vivid. Although for the author, the world collapsed and he did not finish the novel normally, which makes readers feel a bit regretful. However, the plot of this novel is interesting and the content is decent. It deserves 5 stars!

It's very nice. I found that the rating is a bit low. I've read 100 chapters. I'm going to give it a review. It's very good. I don't see any bad points. The characters are also very vivid and distinct [Note] Huh? How come the book is finished after just a few days?

What a great book. If it can be updated normally, it should become one of the top books on Tomato. After all, reading in Tomato is basically looking for good stuff among a bunch of bad books [Thinking]

I have to say that the writing is really good, and the plot is pretty good. The only shortcoming is that it is a little short, and the ending is a bit hasty. The rhythm of the first part is quite good, but towards the end, the author may have been a little confused, and the ending is a bit sloppy, but overall, as a new author, the writing is quite good. The above are all personal thoughts. I don't have much education. Just watch it for fun. If you don't like it, don't comment!

Why does the author write so much like a gay man? It's nice but Lily... If I re-write the story, it might fall apart. So later on, Mia should not be so innocent and naive. She is too much like that kind of defenseless little girl, so she fell in love with the protagonist so quickly. I don't even know that it should be a normal companionship. This is very consistent with my feelings towards Mia, because I don't know how to explain Mia's liking. The male supporting characters are quite good. I already thought it was a gay novel, but after reading the introduction, I realized that this one is actually Lily. I didn't expect that she was actually with Mia, because from the current point of view, Mia is very likely to be the heroine. I think the relationship between Mia and the protagonist is like the protagonist doing output in the front and Mia being the nanny in the back, and the protagonist has to come back to heal. But the relationship is very good, like They are close friends, the protagonist is like the kind of relationship that doesn't mind the other party using the equipment that he beats and explodes. But I saw that the male partner described by the author seems to have planned it for a long time. The relationship is very familiar and he is reborn. The kind of person who likes the protagonist. Because the protagonist is excellent and good-looking, he works hard for the protagonist, but he has low self-esteem, like a little wolfdog. It seems that there is no problem in turning it into a gay story, but the story will collapse. The relationship between Mia and the protagonist is really like a brother and sister [exploration] [exploration] [exploration]

It's beautiful and the writing is quite novel💐💐💐 The character creation of the protagonist is successful. He is positive, good, human and divine at the same time🎋🎋🎋 As for some of the feelings we get through other characters in the article, or the protagonist's own emotions, it's just fun for us, such as the protagonist turning from a boy into a girl😋😋😋 The protagonist himself is a god, but he just re-planned because of his own resistance⛰️⛰️⛰️ For future readers, please do not read the last chapter "Supreme Will", because after reading it, all suspense and feelings will be gone😭😭😭😭

It looks good, looks good, has the feel of a web novel, but does not have the unrealistic feeling of the boss in the web novel. There is no forced ridicule in any web novel. In fact, there is no such thing... This book gave me a sense of reality. Don't be a married woman! I don't like to see

Although there was a lot to write about, it was rushed and finished. But it's human nature to write a book that's not good enough. I have to say that the content is quite interesting, but it's a bit short. I'll give it five stars. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][cool]

Overall it's okay, and it deserves five stars on Tomato. It's a pity to end it so hastily. I quite like this book. It's not too toxic and can be eaten, but the author needs to work harder on some details and other issues! Be happy every day!

To be honest, I want to deduct one point for the bad ending. I also hope that the author will stop updating and slowly make up for it if he has a good idea in the future. The first half is really interesting, the supporting characters are all vivid, and the emotional lines are not as collapsed as the author thought. Most of them are interesting. I feel that the author is quite talented in writing emotional lines. In short, I hope the author has clear ideas and the new work can be a blockbuster. I still like the emotional lines written by the author.

I have also read several articles on gender reassignment, including but not all on Tomato, but this one is the one that suits my taste the most. As a bookworm with 2000+ Tomatoes, I quite like reading it and it feels very novel. There are no other shortcomings except that the frequency is a bit low.

It's a content that I yearn for, so I added 1 more star (why not 4 stars? Because he turned into a girl, so I added points!!!), Why did the level stop at 4 stars? That's what I'm going to say next This is a very good novel with a good subject matter, but it is a pity that the number of words is still too few, many plots are not unfolded, and the ending is hasty. This is a pity, but in the last chapter the author also explained the reasons and ending, and I was relieved. It's a pity that if the author writes well, this will be a very good novel about gradual changes and hundreds of changes. It is considered one of the better online game novels I have read. Well! This novel is very suitable to my taste, I like it very much [almost crying]

A very good book that can enrich the storyline while also giving a certain amount of room for imagination. Although it is slightly lacking in the emotional line, it is still very good overall. I hope the author can continue to work hard. A month later I saw this book on the bookshelf again, and I still felt it was a pity. This is one of the few books that I think is very good.

I personally think this book is very good-looking, better than the 9-ish books I usually read. There are exciting foreshadowings and exciting plots. It feels great when the protagonist reaches the top through his own efforts. Like, like, like, like, [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [love] [love] [love] Come on, come on, come on...

It feels like a very good book. At least Mia's portrayal made me feel comfortable. However, I felt that there were too few holes dug in the early stage and the map in the later stage was a bit difficult to open. Then the combat power began to collapse in the mid-term. But overall it's still ok.

In fact, it is very good. There is no need for the author to belittle himself. You can see from the score that you think you have so many shortcomings, but your novel has a high score of 9.1, Which is really high. Anything above 9 is considered a good book. In short, good luck, author! [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love]

Unlike other multiplayer time-travel protagonists, who either die or surrender when they meet others, just like they have never seen a woman, this protagonist is the best protagonist I have ever seen [Like]

It feels okay The story is quite novel The plot is quite complete But the ending is too hasty Also left some suspense Finally, the author himself admitted I can't write anymore Overall it's okay But the protagonist cheats all the way Looks very cool

It feels a bit pity. The ending is quite unique. It shows that the author has thought carefully and the logic is clear. It just gets faster as you get to the back, and it feels like a sloppy ending. There is also too little written about the emotional line with Mia. Overall it's pretty good, highly recommended. (This is just a personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏)

This book is very good to read. There are indeed many problems, but they do not affect this book. The main problem is that it is too slow to warm up, and it does not transform until the later stages. I can continue to read it all because of the reborn person. This master-disciple relationship has no results in the end. The last of the three protagonists thought he would appear later, and there was no mention of it later. , The protagonist's analysis of the man surnamed Ma was as fierce as a tiger. I thought there was going to be a big wave, but there is no more. In fact, most of the problems are in the back. The author's mentality has collapsed. I hope your new book (the one about the Holy Tree) will not have these problems. In addition, I strongly recommend that the protagonist be a female in his later incarnation. Moreover, the author, your writing style and ideas are all above the average level in Tomato. It is really rare for you to be like this now. I hope you will not be troubled by other people's words. I hope you can pay more attention to details. I hope you can make a fortune. A lot of your stuff is really good, but you haven't really written it out. I wish you happiness.

Overall, it's a very good novel, nyaΣΣ(,,ω,,) The only problem is that the ending comes too suddenly and is not enough to watch Meow! It seems from the article that the author originally wanted to write 1.5 Million+ words, because the gender change of the protagonist alone took 96 chapters. Generally speaking, this kind of change speed should correspond to a relatively long article. (As a result, the speed of light change accounts for more than 1/2 of the full text). Oh, there will be some classic plots in the early stage, but if you don't think about it from God's perspective, you will find that it feels quite reasonable. Some places are indeed... Very classic... And can easily make people squirm. But although the author rushed to finish, he still tried hard to fill in some pitfalls, and the plot of the ending was also handled reasonably (that is, you can clearly see the feeling of wanting to end it). The ending was not stated clearly at the end. The author only said that it was a happy ending plot, but there was no extra story at all. The readers had to figure it out for themselves. In terms of relationships, I feel that Zhu Ge's part is really well written. If I hadn't known that it was a change of marriage, I almost thought it was a change of marriage. The author's worry that the relationship was not well written is completely unfounded. At worst, it would be better to change Zhu Ge into Sister Zhu. Hehehe (˵¯͒¯͒˵) (There is still too little plot in the post, nya!) I don't feel anything about currency, and I don't write much, nya. It's not a big problem, nya. Fighting power and so on, as long as the fighting power of the invincible novel is not too powerful, then the protagonist is the standard for evaluating the fighting power. Basically, they will crush each other and kill each other. If they are really unbeatable, they can run away directly, and then directly encounter any opportunities. It is never too late for a gentleman to take revenge. It is normal to be deflated within a reasonable range. (Rather, it would be boring to be too invincible all the time.) When the author mentioned the problem at the end, he also mentioned meow. In fact, the previous problems are not the most important thing. The most important thing is that the author can't write to make meow angry. This is the main reason, meow~(~￣▽￣)~~ It ended too quickly, not enough to watch... It's a pity to offend Meow... Not enough to watch, not enough to watch meow!

Hurry, I can't wait. The author will update quickly. Come on, don't give up and don't listen to some people's nonsense. Use your own ideas to write the story of this world. We like it very much. Those who are willing to watch will continue to support it.

This is the second novel I've read with an ending that breaks through the dimensional wall. It's obvious that the author didn't write it well. The ending made my cerebellum shrink a bit. The shortcomings of the author's self-reflection in the last chapter are similar to my feelings after reading it. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I saw the author's sincere attitude. Please encourage me!

It's a very good work. The look and feel of the protagonist's setting is somewhat similar to a Dark Summoner I've read before. Has the author also read this "god" book that has half of the tag on JMcomic? [Laughing]

It's a very good book, but it ends too quickly, making the subsequent plot a bit too tight.

The book is a good and interesting book. It has many settings and the plot is very smooth, with causes and consequences. The world view is also very complete, and the characters are also full of characters. It's just... It's so boring that it feels like it's only entering the main plot (I won't say much about dead books)

You can read it in half a day. The text is short and the style is interesting. If you are not a book reader, you can read it. After all, it does not take up your time.

I really like this book, both the setting and the plot Sadly, I just turned around and recommended it to my friends, and then I turned around and found out that it has ended. But I don't think it's a bad ending. After all, the plot direction is reasonable and the characters haven't been ruined by the rush. There's nothing wrong with the completeness and logic of the characters. It can be considered a very good book with an open ending. The only problem is that it just feels rushed. But the protagonist may be the incarnation of the supreme consciousness. It's obviously the road to becoming a god, but it makes me feel a little sad for no reason.

It is my favorite adventure book. It has plot lines and emotional lines. The protagonist has a strong aura, good luck and strength coexist. What kind of fragrant and soft girl is the cutest?