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Very good. The plot is not a love-at-first-sight story. The main character is not liked because he is good-looking. Instead, he really has his own personality charm and a very clear outlook on life. I look forward to the author's next chapter [shy]

Wow, I feel it is written in big letters. The baby of Time Forgetting (Shou) has always been calm and rational, and he is particularly fond of the black tea baby (Gong); the black tea baby is cute and silly at the beginning of every small world, and his innocence makes people's hearts melt. Both of them are kind and gentle, and it's not too sweet to go both ways. The characters in each other small world also have distinct personalities and their own characteristics. The writing is very delicate, I hope there will be more and it won't end too quickly [Sending my heart]

So pretty! ! ! Sweet, sweet! Whether it is the main cp or the deputy cp, the ending is very satisfying. The first world amazed me, the two powers are so well matched! ! Chun Qing Gong is so cute! It's still about campus, I really like it, I hope the author will update it soon!

It's so beautiful but the rating is so low? ? ? ! The following is a personal evaluation, still objective. (Should) Emotions are clear and it's not love at first sight. It's a step-by-step guide. The thinking logic and plot development are also very easy and smooth. Why don't you come in and give me a try? ! The writing is good and completely readable, but it's not a particularly cool or compact style. (Forget it if you care too much about hydrology. It's a bit watery but not a big problem.) Moreover, it is very smoothly developed and there are no brainless characters. Each character has its own characteristics and rarely does OOC things. Shou is really a great guy, and he works very hard. He is neither a novice nor a stupid beauty. He is very purposeful and capable of action. Isn't it great? The first person in the ABO world to differentiate was beta! It is completely consistent with Little Transparent's counterattack. Even ordinary people (all over the world, all-powerful people) can attract alphas with their charisma, not pheromones! (I don't mean to say that love affairs are bad, it's just that I like unconventionality, so this relatively rare pairing is a plus for me.) Help sos, I really like it, my family members don't understand! On the first day I went out and opened Tomato, I came across this treasure article. (Polite joke) Although the update is a bit slow, it is stable for the time being. Five stars recommended.

It's good-looking, but there's just a little bit missing. The author would like to give you more (eyes drawn) (golden rose) (Thomas rotates 360 degrees) (kneeling down on one knee) (ogling) (golden rose) (I won't charm you if I don't do this)

Ahhh, it looks really good. The only drawback is that it is too short! ! ! (Twisted) (Crazy) (Crawling) (Chuangfei other readers) (Crawled in front of Da Da) (Hint) (Blink) (Blinking too fast and eye cramps) I also wish Da Da will write more and more smoothly, and the ratings will get better and better~! (Sigh) My first comment is dedicated to the big wow wow wow wow

Emotions are extremely sweet, just like being soaked in a sugar jar. It's super sweet. If you love sweet articles, come read it! Don't miss it! The writing is good, the plot development is also very smooth, and the emotions are smooth, from sweet to sweet! It was so sweet at the end that I just wanted to say: It made me cry, I loved it so much! I like the straight lines of sweet articles! Finally, I want to urge you to update as soon as possible! Good-looking (shy) (finger pointing)

The writing is very real and the emotions are very delicate. The author advances the plot from daily life. The author is really amazing. The plot is compact but the ideas are clear and easy to understand. All in all, the author's writing is very good and the story is also very good. I really like the emotional interactions between the protagonists and their personalities. Come on, the author [sending heartfelt messages] [blowing kisses]

I have finished reading Two Worlds. When I first read it, I felt it was just average, nothing special. But the more I read, the more I found that I really love the author's writing style. It's the kind of feeling that the more I read, the more amazing it becomes. I also like the character of Shi Wangzhi, the opponent, and the long flow is enough. I also like the character of Lao Gong, ah ah, that kind of very green and shy feeling, so shy, I really like it, I like to play straight. All in all, this book is really good to read. Sisters can read it. The update speed of Dada is okay, but I still hope that Dada will update a little bit more. Hehe, refill This book is very nice, it's that kind of... Small, fresh, and eye-catching. The two protagonists are well portrayed, and the small world is also very complete. As a result, I now have a soft spot for black tea, hahaha.

The author's style of writing is very smooth, relatively relaxed, and not exaggerated. Friends who like it can join it. I couldn't sleep last night and watched it for several hours I really like the part about the entertainment industry. Shi Wangzhi slowly increased his fans from a small entertainment blogger to a big blogger, just to protect the target of the mission, and it doesn't matter if he also rectifies the entertainment industry, he can do it anyway hahahaha. He also accidentally joined the men's team and participated in training. His unique style is worthy of him. Later he continued to return to being a full-time blogger, and I liked the change of vest. I feel very powerful and very happy. I won't chase after you [laughs]

The plot of this novel is natural and soothing, and the story is rippling and full of warmth. Wang Zhi is a high-achiever with high IQ and EQ (as can be seen from his series of actions later and knowing the origin of himself and Lao Gong). He is always well prepared and attentive before starting to protect his poor husband. His relationship with her husband is full of love and tenderness. The first three dimensions are all kind, lovely, innocent, inspiring and beautiful little pitiful people (in real life, I don't know how many people are the original Bai Yueguang [shy]). Most of the other characters in the plot are also very beautiful (especially the little animals in the third plane are so cute [blowing kisses]). In System 12, in the early stage, he is venomous and cold, and in the later stage, he acts like an old woman, which is also very fun. Sisters who like it, feel free to rush!

This book is quite good. The emotional lines are written more delicately, and they are not the kind where feelings appear out of nowhere. I like Shi Wangzhi's character, who is sober, not relying on cheats, but really improving himself in the mission world. I like him.

Wuwu is very beautiful, the characters are all vivid, the emotional scenes are also very sweet, and the plot is also very high-level. Unfortunately, the new text only has two and a half worlds, and the system says that you can only do about 5 missions. It's hard to give up. 😭Written more [Love]

The plot is super nice, the main character is not sick, he is in a normal relationship, there is no imprisonment, little dark room, forced love, etc. He really made me cry to death. I have been looking for this kind of writing for a long time, and finally I came across it. ‧⁺◟( ᵒ̴̶̥́ ·̫ ᵒ̴̶̣̥̀ )

It's so beautiful. Why are there only three worlds? Author, you have to work hard and work hard to code. I will keep chasing it! Shi Wangzhi and his husband are too good at eating! The characters of the protagonists are very nice, the plot is novel, and the pace is moderate. I love it so much! When I was little, I had a high sense of balance, sense of proportion, and seduction. I was gentle and handsome. I was so perfect. My emotional line was considered fresh and refined among Tomatoes. My attractions were very reasonable, and I also had a bit of a sapiosexual feeling. Moreover, the author has a very upright outlook on life. When he is on a mission to save the target, he will not immediately approach him. Instead, he strives to improve himself so that he has the strength to stand with the other person. After reading the first two stories, you will feel very fulfilled and full of positive energy in your heart. There is another point I would like to praise. Under the influence of the general environment, bad trends have emerged in various fields, including the Internet literary circle. Many authors deliberately cater to the public's tastes. When they write bad people, they write very bad things. Moreover, the final ending is either death or revenge by the protagonist, which is particularly tragic, as if they are releasing the malice in the readers' hearts. Or if the protagonist is a little nicer to other supporting characters, he will be called the Holy Mother. In fact, many people still like warmer plots. When I saw the first plane, Lu Jiazhu, Liu Sheng, finally found a good home, my eyes really lit up, and I thought that it was not a life-and-death plot, free from the law. Hey, I just finished reading Two Planes, and I'm a little excited. I'll say whatever comes to mind. Hey, there are actually many points that make me think this novel is [very good]!

In fact, both the plot and writing are pretty good on this platform, and many details are not cliche. Only the emotional line made me feel like I was on pins and needles. Maybe it's because the protagonist is too frank and straightforward, and his love for the attacker is more like pure appreciation from beginning to end. 0 Has rich inner activities and is shaped like a real living person. 1 Is a beautiful, strong and tragic character, and his performance is also a standard paper character. The two people feel that they are not in the same dimension. It gives me a sense of separation, as if I am watching the protagonist play a love game. As the plot progresses, he gains partners and attackers. In the later period, 1, who has full favorability, looks like he is in love towards the screen. If it were bg, I could still play a B game, but bl would be very uncomfortable to watch. I can only say that some people like it and some don't, so I'll stop there.

Now I see that this book is very suitable for me, I like this book very much! The content and plot are all well controlled. I personally like it! ! ! ! I hope the author will work hard to update! Happy Children's Day! ! !

The writing is very good, and the character setting is also very good. The only thing that stands out is the villain? Well, let's talk about the past and present life. In the past life, I ended up very miserable because I was selfish and for my own selfish desires. I couldn't do what I dreamed of all my life. I worked hard for it, but because of a potion, I was forced to become an o. He was exhausted, needed pheromones, and couldn't wash away the mark, but nothing happened to him. He got the person of his dreams. Even if his father killed Gong in the end, he, a helper, chose to break up with his father, but found that he couldn't live a hard life, and finally went back to continue his family. . In this life, due to the butterfly effect caused by changing the plot, he didn't have time to do what he did in his previous life. He chose to turn himself into O, and then tried to give the other party a medicine to force him to mark himself as responsible, but he failed. Although he must have known the bad things his own father did since he was a child, and he is the beneficiary and enjoys all the benefits, it doesn't matter anyway. It is his father who did it and he will be fine. But in this life, he drugged himself to get the attack and became an o. His body function was not good and had no use value. He became a "victim". He chose to kill his relatives for justice. [Like] It's really awesome. He will be happy and full of children for the rest of his life. I'm just a bitch who watched half of it late at night [face covering]

Help, I really like it. At that time, I was so destitute that I couldn't read two pages. I really love it. Who knows? Trust me, go read it and you will definitely fall in love. There is no bloody plot and the emotional line is natural. Go in both directions. Yyds. The author's writing is very good. I give the author a big shout out.

The plot is well written, and the emotional line is a little flat. The first story is overall good, but there are some frustrating points: in the original story, Gong was victimized and died, but in the end he was cleared without being punished and there was a cp who never left him and sincerely treated him, which is hard to accept! ! The second story is pretty good. Not so frustrated anymore

I really like the story in it. The emotional story between the protagonist Shou and the protagonist Gong is not a sloppy love at first sight. It is slow and long-lasting, which makes people feel comfortable to watch, but it is not too long. There are career and love in it, and the characters are also great. The story is really nice, especially the main line. I have never seen such a design before, so it is eye-catching (after all, the current version is almost the same sometimes ⊙▽⊙), very good! Very! ! Highly recommended! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

I finally found two normal people falling in love. Compared with those novels where both the attacker and the receiver have the same twisted and morbid personalities as Trisolarans, this novel brought me full of warmth, true two-way giving, an equal love relationship, innocence, consideration, and gentleness. He has the three views of a normal person, which makes people feel very refreshing among the greasy attacks that are popular nowadays among the yandere and crazy people who have no three views. Shou is very caring, gentle, has a sense of morality, is meticulous in doing things, and is decisive and not holy. One of the few CPs that I sincerely bless. I am a person who loves to listen to novels. I usually need to listen to novels to get involved in work and study, but these two days have been very painful. I feel like I am eating assembly line fast-food products full of industrial additives, which prevents me from absorbing a trace of true feelings. It is just some frivolous words that make my brain stiff. It has been almost a year since I felt the feeling of being excited by the plot of a novel. This novel is not the kind of rock music that makes the whole audience excited, but more like a comfortable stretch after finishing work, which makes me feel at peace. I would like to thank the author very much for writing such a gentle work in this impetuous era. I would like to make some suggestions: you can add more psychological descriptions, richer expressions, and emphasize the character of the protagonist. I think it can make the novel more blushing and heart-pounding (some amateur suggestions, please forgive me if there are any mistakes or inappropriate things). Thank you again to the author. This is my first time to write a book review. I hope the author can be happy every day, live a smooth life, and write works that bring joy to me [Love]

I think the writing is super nice, the writing style is not childish, there is no petty literature, the character creation is good, and the plot is not procrastinating. It is a pity that it is a serial, and the author only has this one work at the moment. I hope the author can update it quickly and try to finish it before I start school. Of course, if not, the writing is so good, then write more, and I can follow it slowly. Hehe. The first world is amazing!

Oh ↗ My God, what a good novel this is. It's really worth reading. It's very good. The characters are well described and not abusive. Every world is not abusive. During the second incident, some clues were discovered (that is, I started to suspect that Gong is a person). Gong is the incarnation of a puppy. It's very cute. It's a sweet story. They really love each other. It's very true. The final big boss is also very easy to overtake. No heart attack. Every world's IQ is online [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

He must be a god! How come you are so good at writing! First of all, this book is sweet. Babies who don't like abuse can read it with their eyes closed. Secondly, except for the unforgivable supporting characters who jump around and make people angry, the other supporting characters are all cute and three-dimensional. I like them very much! The author of Dada also has something to say. The small theater inside makes the characters more vivid and three-dimensional, and Dada himself is super cute! I really like her and her books! I really like the third world! Cultivation in the demon world, dogs 🐶 and foxes! Very soft, cute and Rua feeling. The Velvet Control makes a sharp crackling sound! Throughout the whole process, the two protagonists have both IQ and EQ online. They join forces to repair the world. System 12 plays the role of a comedian. Hahaha (bushi) This is my first time to write a long review. It was not well written [I almost cried]. Thank you for reading my nonsense, it is a waste of your time!

The name was stuck on the bookshelf but I never clicked on it. I thought it was some white text, but I didn't expect the writing to be explosive. It's super sweet and bursting with sweetness. In fact, I've never been too cold and prefer to read Nian Xia. But after reading this, I suddenly got the point of Nian Xia's innocent big dog. Shi Ye is really the Everest of IQ, strategizing and controlling the overall situation, grasping both love and career, sapiosexuals are blessed, the writing style is really solid, the logic is rigorous and the thinking is strong, there is no trace of nonsense in the whole text, and it will not give people the feeling of being brainless, I like it 😘

Thank you, I enjoyed it! I love puppies so much, and the black tea latte is a perfect match for you two! ! ! I'll lock it up! ! The novel is not long, but it is very interesting! The content of each world is very attractive, and the emotional lines and plots are really great! My favorite is the one about showbiz. The time and characters of the group members are really impressive! The characters in it all have distinctive personalities. 12 Is really like their baby, and it feels like a family of three! So warm~! Super sweet! There is no random bloody plot, there is just black tea and latte firmly following their hearts towards each other! Anyone who has not read this novel will be sad! Just jump in without thinking!

Ahhhh! It's super interesting. I've finished watching the first small world. Although it's a bit long, the storyline is very good. I haven't seen such a gentle, honest and lovely Gong in a long time. I've seen all the cool, yandere and cool ones before. How can I put it, after watching this Gong, I found my favorite type. Hehe😬Thank you so much to the author. And the feelings inside are not the kind of delicate ones, they are knowledgeable, courageous, and very good. And he didn't leave immediately after the mission was completed. This was not a deception, but a sincerity. (Some people may think that it would be better to leave quickly, but I can't accept it.) I can't bear to be abused😬. Really, I have to praise the author again, it's so great! ! ! I will really hit the wall and be happy!

It's really great. I've already watched it for the second time (even though I watched it once before and now I'm watching it again). The main thing is the delicateness, the feeling of long flowing water, I really love it! Well, there is actually another reason. I used to like to read this kind of novel: two male protagonists, fast time travel, and a relatively long world. I think the process of slowly conquering it is really exciting, not to mention the element of fast time travel that allows people to experience different happiness. This kind of happiness is difficult to express in other books. All I can say is that I may temporarily like other types of writing, but fast-traveling writing will always be yyds!

The baby forgot to comment on wuwuwu. . I read it a long time ago. I like the character of the protagonist very much. I feel that the author's rice is so delicious. I want to eat your food for the rest of my life. I will also read the other two books. The teacher is a super cute xql little theater. It's interesting and cute. It's intentional. The finishing touch is unexpected, the writing style is very clear and clear, the protagonists have different personalities but they are all sweet and reassuring. The first world is my favorite. It is really super invincible and awesome. I watched the first world three times [crying] [crying] No! ! Meeting! ! Greasy! ! ! Come on, author, you will definitely stop being a bastard. First of all, it's really good-looking. Secondly, it's more troublesome. [Love] [KISS]