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It's really wonderful, but the author keeps updating every day [crying][crying][crying]

Personal comment: The beginning and name of the novel are very special. It was the first time I saw it written like this. Then the heroine's name is very luoli, and her body is also luoli [face covering] However, there is a problem with the name of the computer accessories in the novel. Gt and gtx are different. It is not clear whether the author missed it or is unclear (but he also knows about RTX2060, clam) At present, except for the typo problem, it looks okay. I will wait and see for the time being. Personal evaluation (based on first review and second revision): 1. The beginning and name of the novel are very special. It's written like this for the first time. Then the heroine's name is very luoli, and her body is also luoli. The author knows names. 2. Some computer accessories naming errors in the first comment have been corrected by the author, and other places need to be confirmed. 3. It looks okay, but I choose to wait and see for the time being, because there are too many new books that are good at the front but awkward at the back, so this five-star is for the previous chapter.

It's pretty good. It was quite depressing at first, but it feels like the plot has started to take a turn? Also, it's too short [laughs evilly]

I don't mean anything else, in short, loli is the best (✧∇✧) Loli is a girl's most beautiful years, as delicate and charming as a newly bloomed flower. Everything about her is so beautiful. Just seeing her smile can wipe away the fatigue of the day. Gently hugging her petite and exquisite body is like holding the most precious treasure in the world. Her slightly shy pretty face is the most beautiful in the world to me. A good gift. To me, her young voice is the most beautiful voice in the world. Her smooth and flawless skin is like the best glass in the world. She is the cleanest and most beautiful flower in the world. People want to touch it but are afraid that it will be polluted by themselves. Everything about her is so attractive to me that people can't help but fall deeply into it.

Hehe, I also have Loli classmates. They also coaxed us to play together often

After searching for a long time, I finally found another book. I hope the author can continue writing.

Come on, author, please don't read this book. Otherwise, I will cry to death. This is the first time I have read a book like this on Tomato. It's a novel feeling. There are really few articles about one-way redemption. In fact, I think the writing is not very good on the aspect of secret love. I don't express the feeling of having a secret love for six years. If you have a true crush on someone for six years, you can't help but want to laugh when you see him, and you will think about countless things about him in your heart. I personally think that the part where Luo Li gave the computer was a little bit poisonous. After all, it looked like the male protagonist had fallen in love with this computer. After all, the male and female protagonists had no emotional basis in the past (it was a very novel subject that they had not become familiar with each other for six years), but it was just a little bit poisonous. If you don't like it, there's no need to continue watching it, so as not to criticize the author. After all, it's impossible for an author to cater to the tastes of all readers, and it's not easy for an author. The last personal evaluation is for reference only (the author is going to update soon!)

It can be seen that the author has run out of inspiration. My suggestion is to read some Japanese romances. There will be something different from domestic romances in it, so you can add more things into it. In the romance category, there is only romance, which can get boring very quickly, and there isn't much to write about, so many romances are quite short. To be honest, you can read more books like Haruhi Suzumiya. Novels are more important than imagination.

It's good, the heroine has already begun to show signs of illness [laughs evilly]. However, those computer things are quite uncomfortable to look at. I hope there are less descriptions of computer accessories, because it is a bit unfriendly to people who don't understand it [thoughts]

It's good, but it's too depressing and sad to watch. The bad guy who drove the car was not brought to justice and was compromised by life. The male protagonist kept complaining to himself and doubting when it would be sweet and the bad guys would get the punishment they deserve (I don't think 3 million can buy the life of a happy family). The writing is very good, so hurry up and sweeten it╰(‵□′)╯

Five-star General MacArthur once said that living in the world without this book would be like chewing wax.

I don't know what to say, the author please be sure to post more pictures! Not too many, just put one at the end of each one!

Yes, but if the author just uses the template of normal life, it is easy to have no subject matter or the writing will be too monotonous. So it is not difficult to think that it is difficult for the author to update, but the author writes very well, support it.

This is my first time to write a book review. I feel that the book is quite good, and I personally think it is non-toxic, and the transformation of the characters is gentle. However, if I give you a little bit of hope, I hope that the character creation can maintain the current level. And I personally think that the nodes that support the transformation of the characters are not prominent enough? (I can relate to both the male and female protagonists. It's purely a personal opinion. The author is really awesome. My personality is biased toward the female protagonist's transformation, so my expectations are too high.) Finally, to sum up: the growth of the work itself is clearly visible, and the author is also willing to interact. There is currently no element of dissuasion, and the plot may not be exciting enough, but it is worth watching~

When it is the brightest, it is always the most confused; when it is the most prosperous, it is also the saddest.

Yes, I finally rated this book. After reading it for so long, I think it's okay. However, I think the bigger problem is the parents of the protagonist. The author needs to work more on character creation to make it more realistic (although reality is more magical than fiction). I just started showing off. Just scold me. I don't care. But before I leave, I want to feel refreshed. (I happened to see this when I was playing in the dark zone and was robbed by my teammates. Because of the kicking cat effect, I want to do it before I leave.)

Damn, give it to grandpa faster. Overall, it's not bad. It's just that I'm too weak to sit down. I was sick before. I don't blame you. What the fuck is the reason for this time? If it's not a big deal, be careful if grandpa sends you a razor blade.

Do you want a five-star review? If you want, please give me updates. One chapter a day is not enough to read, not enough at all. Quick updates, and take out the saved manuscripts. Quick updates [angry] [angry] [angry]

I personally like this book very much. It intersperses strange plots with the busy main story, which makes people not only enjoy the main story but also relax. There is also a great description of the character's psychology. All in all, it is very good.

Looks good! I like it! Xiao Xianyu likes cute little lolita the most! As long as the plot does not collapse, the popularity will definitely grow @ Remote Sky Come on! (ง •̀_•́)งXianyu is optimistic about you

It's been two months. Do you know how I got here in these two months? [Smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty, but! The heroine is not yandere at all now!

What is the author's group number? Why didn't I see it in the book?

Without this book, I can't think of what the meaning of my life is... I love this book! ! !

Come on, author. I support you. You wrote it in my heart [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The only book that has been sitting on the bookshelf for half a year and can still be read.

Emmm I originally thought it was a green, fresh and sweet love story, but it turned out to be a passionate battle between the author and Shen He! At present, the author is slightly better [smile][smile][smile]

Very, very good luoli article, great! [Blows a kiss] The only drawback is! Updates are too slow! I hope the author realizes this! [Smile]

It's very well written, but all I can say is that it's too short.

First of all, I'm really not a lolita person. Secondly, I really don't like lolita But she is so cute