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It's not bad. The author will continue to update. The character of the teacher is a bit bad. The character of the teacher is not good. If the character of this teacher continues to be the protagonist, the protagonist will definitely die, so I hate this character very much (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

It's okay, but I don't really like the character of the eldest lady of the Tian family who is too unruly and willful. I ask the author to find a way to temper her character in the future.

It can be seen from the writing style that he is a newcomer. From the first chapter, it can be seen that the writing style has improved. The performance of the first book does not mean everything. In addition to writing books every day, you can also read and read the books of the big guys. The protagonist's ability is to develop telekinesis to a very high level. Don't be limited to swords. Of course, this is the early stage, and the appearance rate of the protagonist group in the recent chapters of Beast Tide is a bit low, and the descriptions are also a little short. Of course, this is a minor problem that does not affect the viewing. No more can be said. Come on, little writer, waiting for you to come ashore.

It's okay, I hope the author keeps updating and doesn't end up being unfinished [eating melon]

Well, the book is quite good. The plot is good, except for the description of combat. The author needs to learn more.

Not bad, very suitable for my taste

It's not bad. The author should update it quickly. It's just that the characters of Tian Mengxian and Shen Shuxuan are not good enough. Come on.

Come on, come on, come on

Isn't it because of self-conception? What a pity! What a pity!