Being ****

The writing in Little Tomato can be written like this. I think it is at least T0 level on this platform. Very good. Including the description of the baby and the emotions between the sisters towards the baby, including some small actions. These details are drawn very well. The content of this novel is also relatively novel and a breath of fresh air. It is obviously not a fast food novel. This novel can be said to be the first serious novel I have read in Tomato. I read these 50 chapters for three hours. I really can't bear to skip a single word. If you use a knife later, use a lighter knife

It is not easy for the author to write a book, so I will give it five stars first. From the current point of view, this book is more of a male version of a female version. I don't think the male protagonist is too strong (guess). I would like to give a warning to readers who don't like this type of book, so don't come in. In addition, readers who like this type of genre can feel free to read it. I have also read the author's previous book, which is very interesting [laughter]

The male protagonist is so miserable, he has become the rbq of the two female protagonists [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Does this book have a single heroine or multiple heroines?

The taboo between the picked-up male protagonist and the two beautiful masters. Raised in a forbidden love since childhood, the male protagonist is like a caged bird. Being snatched back and forth by the sickly beautiful master and the little master aunt, I can only say take care of yourself, the car is going very fast.

It's really amazing. It always feels very gripping. The writing is really beautiful.

Alas, I became interested in the author's last novel because I read this novel. The plot and characters are all good. It would have been better if I hadn't read the last chapter. It would have been fine if the author didn't explain it. I could accept it if there was a foreshadowing. The two heroines in this novel just made up for my regret. It can be seen that a lot of effort was put into the plot. It is much more delicate than the previous one. At the same time, I also hope that the author will get better and better, have fewer and fewer worries, and live a smooth life.

Well, that sets up a lot of doubts. The characters of Master Lu Lin and Shi Yi are both cold and a little yandere. The character of the protagonist is weak and dependent. He relies on both his master and his aunt, but he is a little afraid of his aunt. I look forward to the following [please update]

My husband needs to be raised from an early age [laughing], the author will update it quickly [angry], I hope there will be no bloody plots. If there is any bullshit, the author will tell me in advance [laughing], this kind of plot is really unavoidable [angry]

Reading the author's article gives me the feeling of watching a trickling stream. It's very mysterious. All sugar and no knife. Good reviews. The last time I read a book of this type, the male protagonist practiced the Ha Pi Kung Fu and was called Taishang Wangqing, which was a bit unnatural.

Advantages: The writing style is delicate, without too many words. Compared with the previous book, the writing style has been significantly improved, and the ability to narrate the story is stronger. The male protagonist and the two female protagonists are well controlled, and I have the desire to read on. Disadvantages: Maybe the author has not been writing for a long time, and he cannot handle the selection of some words and characters with ease, which is quite out of character. For example, in the first chapter, the author used six returnees for Lu Lianyin, which felt awkward. Maybe the author wanted to express something more artistic, but the result was counterproductive, which is not good. In general, the work is fully worthy of five stars. The audience of Tomato is younger, so it is not highly recommended for this kind of slow-burning novel. With the author's writing style, you can consider Seven Points for the next book. The first 300,000 words of Seven Points are free to read. The author's last book only had more than 100 chapters, which is not enough to read. If the number of words is small, it will be a disadvantage. The author can exercise his writing and narrative skills to make the novel longer, but it seems to be lacking in numbers. I'm going too far. Come on, the author. I'm optimistic about you. You have great potential. I hope you can achieve better results.

No. Is this book still being written? I've only updated chapter 17 of the book I've saved for so long? I finally got through it when the male protagonist was a child, but now that he is an adult, I have begun to enjoy it. Is the author going to update? Or how many chapters a month?

Okay, the current version looks good, so let's treat it as a daily novel. No need for a knife. If it's a knife, just discard it. Well, I can accept the anime, but I can't accept the novel.

The writing is smooth and the content is not embarrassing. The description of the baby is very good in the front, and the behavior, language, and actions are all very good. However, the protagonist has some problems with his character. Until he gets married, he is still as ignorant and passive as a baby. Later, I hope to write about the protagonist's personality becoming mature and stable in a series of events after entering the world. Another shortcoming is that the plot is dragging. Anyone who reads this book can think about it. Basically, the whole book is about daily life. I originally thought that the protagonist entered the world and a series of events happened and gradually became stronger and stronger. Until dozens of chapters later, it was still daily life until marriage. Now there are some signs of a character named Yu Gongzi appearing. Daily life is warm, but if it continues to be daily, it makes the plot dull.

I still like the taste, but it's much better than the previous book. It doesn't feel so depressing in the early stage. It's great!

The writing is great. It's been a long time since I read a retro novel with fresh writing and delicate emotions. The last time was on another platform. Although Wu Dao is written in the introduction, under the emotional atmosphere of the whole article, I unconsciously thought that there would be a small sadistic plot later, because delicate and sincere emotions often go through many twists and turns and are tested. The novels I read with a similar writing style before were also written about no knife and pure sugar, but the author unconsciously wrote heart-wrenching plots. The more delicate the writing style, the more the author wanted to use the various pulls between the male and female protagonists in the early stage to set off the lingering pathos and love between each other in the later stage. I personally have half negative defense, why half? First of all, I don't really like sadistic plots, but I like pure and sweet plots where the male and female protagonists are not separated, accompany each other, and rely on each other. However, at the same time, I will also be very immersed in savoring the plot of first bitterness and then sweetness. The hint of sweetness overflowing from the bitterness is really refreshing. But life is already very hard, and it's really hard to endure the pain in the novel while having fun. I hope the author can come up with his own plot style, which is truly pure sugar without a knife.

The hands are like catkins, the skin is like condensed fat, the collar is like a cricket grub, the teeth are like gourds and rhinoceros, the head is like a moth and the eyebrows are moth-like, the smile is charming, and the beautiful eyes are looking forward to it. [Like] The breeze blows away the fatigue all over the body, the drizzle falls on the heart full of thoughts, the bell rings with sincere greetings, the message conveys deep care, the weather is ever-changing, blessings are always in my heart, the weather is cold, I send you a piece of warmth [Please update]

Afraid that there is a big knife hidden behind

It's very well written, but a little lacking.

I finally found a good book. It doesn't matter if the update is slow. I just hope it doesn't end and at least leaves an ending. Some good ones always disappear halfway through the update or the quality deteriorates seriously later on.

I've read more than 70 chapters and I feel pretty good, but I don't know why. The whole article seems a bit depressing (maybe it's my problem [crying]), and the presentation of the world view is a bit unsatisfactory, but overall, it's pretty good. If you like to be nurtured, you can read it [Note]

It's a very strange feeling, developed in favor of female videos. First time seeing this type. Personally I wish there were more in the early stages

The writing is good, will there be any bloody plot, like (Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu). @ Muyu

Is the author still updating? The full text really feels very comfortable.

The thinking is quite good, eh, but I personally feel that it is different from those books. Those things are very pure and have no physical desires. It is like meeting a beggar in trouble on the road. I have no intention of helping him, but my body does the opposite.

I thought about it again and again, and changed it again. I feel that reading novels online alone is sometimes quite helpless. I rarely use the term "newborn" to describe fairies. Real fairies are really born [face covering] The very good content makes my perversion spin.

I heard that reviews with less than 15 words are useless, so I came here to revise them. Please cheers for the author. The quality is really good and it will definitely become popular.

I like this style. Someone is with you. In addition, I have brothers to accompany you. I like it even if you have to accompany you for various reasons. It may be a bit selfish, but it is super reassuring to have someone with you all the time.

It's really good-looking, and the setting reminds me of "Family", but there are no knives. I personally hope that there will be more knives for more abuse, so that the whole story will have more charm.

[Crying] When will the male protagonist grow up, even if he is 14 years old?