Fantasy: the Strong Man Who Emerged from the Tomb of the Gods

I don't pay attention to the details, and my writing is not good. The protagonist has been practicing the exercises for two days. He has reached the third level. He can use a bench to make a wooden sword and grind his hands to make blisters. It's really awesome. Then he teaches the exercises to the big guy. The exercises are all above the emperor level. The protagonist himself can only comprehend them after the system passes them on to him. How can he practice if he just passes them on to others like this? There are so many rewards in the system, but there is no such skill?

666. You are so awesome when you get such awesome skills and just pass them on to others casually.

I quite like it, so I won't watch it [laughing]

The writing was good at the beginning, but it was a complete mess at the end. Author, if you don't write well, don't waste the readers' time.

Still apprentice? I laughed

Rubbish stuff. Chapter 10 is useless. Rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish rubbish book.

Poison, too poisonous. A person in the third great realm cultivates both divine magic and law and body. As a result, he carved a wooden sword and his hands blistered. In the first chapter, he said that he should copy the inscriptions non-stop, but at the beginning of the fourth chapter, he said not to copy every few days, 666, what the hell is he writing?

I want to write about a three-person team that covers the sky and robs the tomb. , What the hell are you writing about? If you can't write well, don't write randomly.

I left after reading Chapter 22. Do you want to be an ancestor?

After reading Chapter 3, let's read the comments. The results are all negative? The reason why I don't watch it is the Bitter Sea Realm [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Can the next realm be written as Qian Lai Realm [laugh] [laugh] [laugh] Maybe only bitterness can bring sweetness. Let's go to a sweet realm [laugh]

No heroine, right?

Seriously poisonous

It's quite exaggerated, with fantasy skin and martial arts content. I used a kitchen knife to cut a wooden sword at the ninth level of the Tempered Body. My hands blistered. Oh, you are so stupid to treat me like a fool.

I advise the author to read more comments to see where the mistakes are, and then re-open a new book to avoid all kinds of mistakes. This book has been scrapped, and I advise you not to waste your time writing it.

There's always a feeling that I can't stand it

It sucks

Good in the front, bad in the back

The writing is good, but there are a lot of typos and it doesn't look smooth.

It would be great to just write about the vulgar tomb robbing genre, but it would be bad if you leave Huangling and go to apprentice again. . . Don't understand

Come on, good Tomato novel:

The author writes very well, I hope you will stick to it The protagonist's innocent heart and youthful character are really attractive. This is what I love and love. Just like the eternal protagonist in the universe, his qualifications, character, and opportunities are all the same.

Luli Basuo is obviously a system.

Too much nonsense, there aren't many good books on Tomato

Boring(┯_┯)

Still very good