Legend of Sword and Wind, Total War of the Noble Second Son

Not bad, not bad, it tastes great. Because a woman offends a powerful person, and that woman also takes advantage of you.

It looks okay so far, and this is the first time I've seen a fanfic from Legend of the Sword and Wind, I hope it won't be a eunuch 😂

If it's about Medieval War for Hegemony, then this book is really well written. If you like this genre, you can read it. However, there aren't that many plots related to Sword Style, and it doesn't feel like a fan. If you come here for this reason, you may be disappointed, but you can also read it. The quality of the plot itself is great.

Okay, okay, let the natives experience the shock of the war hammer. Four supreme vendors are watching from above, not afraid of anything happening, and there is also a big guy from the empire holding a hammer.

The writing is still very good. The only flaw is the plot about the original anime characters, which is a bit annoying. I didn't expect that in a fanfic, the original characters turned out to be the rat shit that ruined the pot of porridge [facepalm] If the embarrassing plot of the characters in the original plot were removed, it would be a very good western fantasy novel [facepalm] ，，，，，…，，..

There is logic and content, and the background is well introduced. I hope Warhammer can be obtained soon. The protagonist no longer appears, and the main plot is not advanced.

A fan created based on the Legend of Sword and Wind. The protagonist begins to develop more than ten years before the plot begins. The plot before the protagonist founded the country is still very interesting. However, after it is basically stable, in addition to the initial protagonist, there is still some sense of existence. Maybe it is to overly describe some things. , The protagonist began to be downplayed, and there were too many state affairs and chores written about. I have been chasing it for a long time, and the Warhammer system has not yet come out. It is a bit suspected of overpowering. If you have to wait until the plot starts, and then the system comes out, it will be a bit poisonous, but overall it is a very good riding and slashing novel.

It's a good read. If you like it, you can stop reading it if you come to see it. It's probably about 200 chapters later, but if you are interested in riding and slashing, you can read it. It's really good. Although there are sometimes missing words, you can still understand the meaning.

The fun part of this book is that the protagonist's troops are crushed, but I feel that it would be better if the protagonist's own combat power can be strengthened. It is best to combine Guts and the Skeleton Knight after Eclipse in the later stage, because if the protagonist's army wants to kill Griffith, the original Eagle Regiment will definitely stop it. Stop, maybe if you scare him, he will play Sacrifice. I feel that the best place for a fan of Jianfeng is to let the dragon-slaying sword stand on Griffith's head. The world can move towards a new life under the rule of the protagonist. From the current point of view, this novel is still very good.

Generally speaking, according to this sword style, it is still very good. It is the big iron can of the empire. I don't know when I can see it [laughing evilly]. I feel that the overall score can be raised to about 8.8 To 9.2. It is not impossible to even go down to 9.7. It depends on the author's future. I have written it. For now, the emotional scenes are all natural and okay. I feel like the narrative is slow and the main focus is on slow pace. Anyway, there is passion, but it is not that empathetic. According to the story, the overall story is still a relatively good one and it is worth watching [like]. As for the emotional drama, after all, the author is not omnipotent, right? Just write a little bit. If you really want to watch an emotional drama, I suggest you watch other dramas. However, the emotional drama he wrote, although the transition is more natural, is not as unforgettable as the normal ones, so many of them seem less likeable, but I feel that this one focuses on the farming system and the main story line, right? In fact, overall it's not bad. After all, the main focus is fighting for hegemony, and emotions are hard to deal with. Hey, understand [smile].

It's okay to intersperse the love story between Wang Mo and Prince Water in the story of Zheng Hegemony. "Human girl, bloody skin" "Your purple eyes are so special" "Prince Water, you are a good person, you must help us" "Mr. Governor, you are a good man, you must help me." "Ye Luoli's magic is as passionate as flames! Prince Water, are you okay?" Load the bullet, pull the bolt, load the gun, and pull the trigger. In two and a half minutes of preparation, I successfully saved the hero from the assassin at the last moment (he knew there was an assassin but didn't wear armor, and he still got close to the assassin, which is amazing).

The writing is okay, I've read Chapter 155, but unfortunately I don't like reading novels with female protagonists (I've seen too many novels where the quality of novels with female protagonists seriously deteriorates, and I don't dare to gamble anymore)

Okay, there are so many books so far, I think this book is still very good. It has some themes of total war, plus a world like this, plus the medieval warhammer in the later period, which I am actually looking forward to. At present, it depends on how many words the author can write. I hope the author can write more words, and not end up with the 100 or 200 words that end up being scrawled.

Jianfeng novels are too rare... The author of this novel actually used his brain to think about how to write it! In an era where shit novels are rampant, this book is really good.

It's a very well written book. IQ is online. This book is worth reading. @Briquettes author I have been following this book for a while. To me, the writing is very good, but in the end I don't know the development of the plot. In fact, I recommend that you start writing according to the main plot of the Legend of Jianfeng. This way you can gain a wave of popularity. The plot content can be enough for you to code hundreds of chapters without any problem.

It's a good book. I've seen more than 400 of them so far. One of the few flaws is that the line about the heroine in the middle became a bit messy because of what those people said. (The following are all personal complaints and have little to do with the content of this book) And the comment section is rated 10 or even 9 points, but this is normal. The Tomato Hammer kid is running around. The so-called darkness of Warhammer needs to be blown away (it's also a mess to brag about the chaotic plot of the left and right brains fighting each other in order to make money). And the bragging about combat power is also a small part of the hammer. One of the sources of the ghost's sense of superiority (the debate itself is a god-man thing, especially across works. For those who engage in debate, I just want to say that the paper is not recognized by major academic circles, the theoretical model has not passed, and there is no unified paradigm. A bunch of brats are making trouble)

The core joy of this kind of novel about summoning an army is that the protagonist summons an army to kill everyone. However, this book only summons a small number of troops in the early stage, and there are no high-level units in the middle and late stages.

The battle for hegemony is very well written, and the emotional line is poisoned to death, but because the battle for hegemony is long, overall I give it four stars [face covering]

The novel is quite good, the characters have depth, and so far I think the portrayal of Uncle Yule is quite successful, joyful and funny. Especially the protagonist's family is very warm [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The whole book presents a humorous style. In terms of genre, I feel it is farming + war. Even though this book has a female protagonist, it didn't make me feel the same disgust as other books. Finally, I wish the author's rating can rise day by day.

Immortal product! By the way, I can ask about the fifth volume. I read that the author said that the emotional line was deleted. Did he change the text after posting it or did he post it after he changed it? If it was changed after it was released, then I will look for the original version. I really want to see it aaaaa After reading the commentary for Volume 5, I don't know whether it's because most of the people who read it are those who like female protagonists without heroines, or it's just like that, but it feels a bit too aggressive, and I feel like I'm looking for trouble [smile] In addition, I feel that there is no need to not participate in politics. It is right to build high walls and hoard food to strengthen oneself, but this is not a chaos in the world. There is also a king. You cannot waste the development of strength because of political games. But if you basically don't engage in politics, then you are not just looking for someone to scold you? You can be inactive, but basically if you don't, you just expose your weaknesses to the opponent. In fact, I feel that the author of the heroine issue also has some responsibility [facepalm] Either he doesn't listen to those people and writes a good love line, or simply deletes them all. Deleting some parts and leaving some parts not only makes the plot stiff and makes the heroine-less faction who don't like the heroine even more violent, but also makes those who want to see the loveline and want a heroine feel bad [facepalm] It's better to add it back.

The author's writing is very good, I hope to continue to do so [like] and these books can be said to be the best Jianfeng fanfics I have ever read. The plots are not enough to watch [face covering] I can only hope that the author can update it quickly [eating melon] I've watched a lot of it. How should I put it? I like the plot very much, but the protagonist's role in the latter part is a bit small, but it doesn't matter. It's a transitional period after all, so it's understandable. But I saw the World War I sub-module mentioned in one chapter, and I even objected to the idea of ​​adding it. The reason is also very simple. First of all, I think the style of painting is a bit inconsistent with the theme. The other is that this is a fantasy world instead of the trench crusaders, which conflicts with this style of painting. It is better to directly refer to some sub-modules in the medieval Warhammer community. I think it is quite suitable, such as steam knight, steam tauren, steam Gundam, steam tank stealth, magic airship, magic fighter and other modules. I think these things that are very suitable can be added.

It's very interesting, but the author only wrote a little bit about the emotional line due to some readers' reasons, not much, but it was well written. I've seen Chapter 406 so far, and it's basically a constant battle. If you don't like this kind of subject matter, you don't have to read it. The protagonist can only explode troops (units that are consistent with the local era) and cannot bring over the earth's technology to build modern weapons such as aircraft and tanks (if you want to see this, you can read the book by Maxim next door). As for how to fight the Terror Emperor (Emperor Kusha, the Apostle) and large-scale ghost monsters, I will talk about it later.

The comic has been updated to 384. Guts' origin is that a creature from the underworld was born from a corpse, and he awakened the essence of subspace from a lotus flower. Griffith is a demon who became a demon from a human body. Now he is really one and the same.

I don't know if the author will introduce Warhammer arms in the future. If so, I still hope that the author can only write about the Empire's arms, so that it feels more immersive. After all, the Empire in Warhammer belongs to the purely human camp against the forces of Chaos. Asking some questions, what is the reasonable explanation for inserting the soldiers in the whole station system into the active team? Whenever the combat effectiveness of a key battle is insufficient, a bunch of heavily armored soldiers or heavy armored cavalry will appear out of thin air. Although this feeling is known to be the function of the system, the sudden appearance of thousands of heavily armored soldiers on the battlefield still feels very abrupt. Thinking about it, after Eclipse is over, John will definitely use Warhammer's total battle system, and his recruitment will definitely be recruiting units with high morale and high combat effectiveness. How will he explain it then.

I have finished watching it intermittently, and now I hope that Hand of the Apostle God will come out soon. I want to watch the protagonist fight all the monsters and monsters in the system.

It's pretty good, not too toxic, and quite enjoyable to watch. I have almost forgotten the plot of the animation, and I only remember Guts and Griffith. If I haven't seen the animation, it won't affect my perception. It's almost all original story and plot. Anyway, even if the original plot mission appears, I don't recognize it, and it doesn't affect my reading of this book.

After reading some comments from authors and readers, I found out that the female lead's role had been deleted. Why do I think it looks so awkward?

Except for the heroine's plot, which is a bit deliberately forced, everything is pretty good.

I like this book quite a bit, and I hope the author can finish it. This update is too slow, and I am only a student. But I will definitely insist on reading this book. This is my first time writing a book review and I don't know what to do?