When I Traveled Through Time and Became a Player, I Just Wanted to Commit Suicide

It looks good. The plot, the transformation of the characters, and the logical thinking of the time travellers all seem very comfortable. They won't tear off other people's heads after scolding you, nor will they kill people easily. I have read many time-travel novels. They are aloof and have a natural sense of superiority. This kind of protagonist has no sense of substitution. It feels like the author and the protagonist are two separate people. What should I say about this protagonist? His behavior and thoughts are closer to our normal thinking. He will not look down on others because he suddenly has the power. It is like bringing yourself into this scene. How will you choose? In my opinion, it is more like a time traveler.

The storyline is pretty good. It's just too frustrating. It feels like the main text is semi-torture, but the reality is miserable enough. I have come to Tomato to read free novels. Still hope it feels better. Especially for finding a master for the protagonist, I hope to add a status refresh mechanism. Brush it off.

The book is quite good. I realized that I haven't reviewed it for a while after reading it, so I came here to review it. Some people have criticized the early part of this book. To be honest, I think it doesn't matter, because the so-called joy does not lie in the protagonist's superficial gains and losses, but in the protagonist's essential gains and losses. As long as such gains and losses are based on logic, then it is acceptable, such as the protagonist's slave mark. In fact, the protagonist has not lost anything because of this, so it is Regardless of the feeling of suffocation and the behavior of the protagonist in the process of begging in the early stage, I think that in the different world set by the author, it is indeed possible for ordinary people in modern society to travel to the past. However, the reason I personally read this book is because I am a fan of the Ring. There is nothing wrong with the part about the Ring in this book, although it does not take up a lot of space.

This book is very well written. Since the protagonist can save the blind girl, it means that the reality is much more maneuverable than the game. I think we can save Topps (in the game, after Topps enters the academy, we will only find his body and the Topps force field, the crystallization of his wisdom, when we go to find him. Although he is dead, his will will last forever) Topps is a great human magician. Tops' force field is a miracle that can distort the junction (although this thing is not easy to use in the game, it feels very powerful in the plot). Ten dollars and an extra key allowed us to discover the meteorite hidden in the rubble. The light emitted at the end could even bounce off the destined death ring [cry]. Almost all the stories in it are legends of alien species. Except for the Storm King, there are no other human stories. If Topps can be saved, I believe he will become the next legend. An era belonging to mankind will come to the junction [cry][cry]

Although the writing needs to be polished, it is not bad. I hope you can keep writing. You have talent, you just need a little brainstorming. Don't think too much because of the downturn at this time. After all, you are creating a world. I hope your book is as famous as Harry Potter.

The game, anime and other world hodgepodge borrows some settings and integrates them into the world view of another world. The writing is not bad, and the protagonist is not brainless and cool. He knows everything beforehand. Currently available are FF7, Assassin's Creed, The Ring, The Witcher, From Scratch, Bonelord, and A Plague Tale. But at present, the protagonist is only familiar with the old ring and the wizard, and the others are basically just characters and settings of the same name. I forgot to mention that the protagonist Goldfinger is Old Touhuan, so the two lines go back and forth. The protagonist's personality is of a growth type. He will not adapt quickly as soon as he comes on, and he will have goals and ambitions. Instead, he will have no sense of belonging at the beginning, and then he will passively become entangled with the world after forming a little bond.

To be honest, if you are an old bookworm, most of you can accept this novel. The author has a conscience, but not much. The novel he wrote is absolutely excellent, with a kind of beauty like myocardial infarction. Because it is too close to my life and state of mind, I suspect that I have been knocked out. Stick, I have listened to Chapter 44 for the time being, and I feel that he wrote it very carefully. Although this is a bit disturbing, it is very exciting. Hey, it's 11 o'clock, it's time to go to bed, oh, I can't sleep, I'm really speechless [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

Overall it looks pretty good. I recommend everyone to just read the first three chapters. Then jump directly to Chapter 15 and read later. Because I don't know what happened to the author before, I have to torture the protagonist first. Will your teammates die if you hiccup?

Tomato is one of the few clean books. It has no system. You can clearly see the growth of the protagonist, from weak and fearful to confident and cautious. The group portraits are also well portrayed. Although the length is short, it can be accepted by the author even if he is not a full-timer. The only shortcoming is that the pace of the later period is too fast and the author's original rhythm guide is lost. The plot is hazy, but again, the author is not a full-time author, so I can accept it. I hope the author can continue to produce such high-quality content. If one day the author will become a full-time author and the book will be on the shelves, please be sure to like me and I will definitely buy your book chapters through genuine channels.

It's quite good-looking, not frivolous. The protagonist is quite serious and has a clear growth line. Most of the time, it respects the original work and can even be used as a guide. The world you set is also quite reasonable. Although it is a hodgepodge, it does not conflict with each other.

I've finished watching it all now, it's quite good, I just want this kind of [cry][cry][admiration][admiration] It's really good-looking. I don't have any good words to say. I can only say that the protagonist will not be restricted by anything, because he can refresh any status after dying once, so don't be dissuaded by the front. The strength of the protagonist has caught up later, plus the summons of the old head ring and Wu Chan. The magic has really begun to become stronger, and the plot is also attractive. I am very much looking forward to the following plots. Unfortunately, the only flaw is that the update is too slow. The author of Qiuqiu has focused a little more on this. I don't ask for more, just one picture a day [crying] [crying] [crying]

Personally speaking, the changes in the characters' personalities and the general direction of the plot are very good, but there are two reasons to persuade them to quit. One is the title of the book and the other is the introduction. The second is that it is a bit unfriendly to people who have never played the old ring, but generally it does not affect it. It is a slow-burning type and the protagonist is not easy. He is not as crazy as other immortals, but he cherishes every step. His ability is a gift from God or a toy from a high latitude. I can only say that the male protagonist is more like every ordinary person who has traveled through the past. He is afraid and timid and wants to live and cherish the people around him. He also wants to steal chickens or something, which is pretty good.

Nowadays, there are very few genres in the direction of comprehensive comics, and it is even more difficult to pick out high-quality ones in the fast-paced era where no-brainers and cool articles are everywhere. Personally, I think this book is a rare good work. The whole book has the same feeling as when I was studying the Xiling Empire. If there are no big problems in the later period, it is handled properly, and the innovation on the basis of the Magic Circle is eye-catching enough, it will definitely become a high-quality masterpiece. Looking forward to it, author, come on!

Alas, it's actually pretty good-looking. The main thing is that Tomato is the world of cool writing. Not many people can calm down and read it. I was born at the wrong time.

It's very comfortable to watch. The protagonist is closer to ordinary people, real ordinary people, like me. (I think I'm worse than the protagonist [face covering]) The main character in this book's journey to power is not very smooth, but the rest is fine. (I also read The Age of Dark Blood with great interest, and this one is no problem~) Great support from the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's a very imaginative novel, but it's a pity that the author can't make a lot of money. In the later stage, I can only speed through the plot. As a reminder to the brothers who will come later, the plot in the first 40 or so pictures is a bit toxic, but in the later stage, it feels okay. It's a good book about food and grass. You can read it when you are short of books.

I don't quite understand why this book has such a low score. I feel that this book is the best work by a folk novelist (?) I have ever read, or it is a fan work of light novels. It is really well written. At least I don't feel like I've read it to a toxic point so far, and the plot really poked me.

It's such a pity that the last time I read a slow-burning story with this kind of plot was Lord of Mysteries, which I read two years ago. Reviews all say that the protagonist is aggrieved, but I actually think it's okay. After reading other stories about mortals who are constantly injured and struggling to thrive, this one can already be called a refreshing novel. (After all, everyone has a golden finger)

This book is very good-looking, but you need to read the back. The front is particularly cowardly, like a first-class angel or a dog-head. It needs development, but the protagonist becomes stronger in the back. It is quite good. It depends on the person. Take a look at your Dream of Snakes, and then taste the flavor of this book at the end. Anyway, it is very good-looking and that's it. And then there is this book. It can continue to be updated. I thought the author was a eunuch. He actually updated it for seven days in a row. I don't know how many days it will last. He cares about you so much. Just read it and it's over.

I think the author could consider giving a good description of Fa Huan's road to becoming a king. Starting from Xiao Ge, I remembered the initial passion. The bumps and tumbles on the road to becoming a king made me miss it very much. Then there is the Western Fantasy World. In fact, according to the protagonist's current situation, he doesn't need to be so aggrieved. There is no problem with a slightly faster pace. It can be written in a more cautious and brisk pace. Then write the content of other subsequent animations, and you can also mix them in. In fact, it can take a long time to write at a fast pace. After all, the author has created a very large world view. Even a fast-paced article will take a long time to write (constantly updated). It looks good now, but it can be better. The protagonist is already a little stronger now. If you don't want to make too cool content and worry about getting tired of it, you can make it into a "farming" style to slowly develop and advance. Overall, it's a pity to read it. It's just too short. I hope it can be updated a little faster. That's pretty good. It was a typo.

A novel like (A Different World Starting from Zero) can be resurrected, but just because I came in and took one more look, I couldn't get out. I read it for him. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] is considered a treasure novel. Although there are some parts that I feel can be done better, I feel that this is in line with the feeling of ordinary people traveling through the past. If you read it carefully, you will feel a different flavor. It is not the kind of cool novel that is mindless at the beginning. The protagonist will gradually grow up later, which looks quite comfortable [like]

Nice. Even though the quantity is small, there are currently many classic characters in game animations. The heroine has not been decided yet at least? Anyway, I've enjoyed watching it these past two days, so I'd like to give it a five-star support. I recommend the author to add some private goods from other games or movies, such as Warhammer, special photography, etc. [Thinking]

After listening to the first 8 chapters, I felt like I was in a different world. As a young man who has received education and has a normal mind, I haven't seen a book like this for a long time. The plot in the first few chapters is very smooth and comfortable. In some cases, some explanations are given appropriately, which makes people understand the plot better and makes people want to continue reading. Let me see again😋

I have seen more than 100 chapters, and so far, it is mainly about Lao Touhuan, with other anime and game characters making guest appearances. The writing is good, and it is quite comfortable to read. I just hope that some characters just have similar names, otherwise some characters are really a dimensionality reduction blow.

Not bad, at least it feels interesting so far. I look forward to the follow-up development.

I personally like this book very much. It's so rare to find a book in Tomato that has the writing, plot, and character of the protagonist that all fit my taste. But the world of the Ring of Law is a bit boring. I sincerely hope that the author can keep writing and don't stop updating. I will continue to support it!

It's so good to watch, don't stop [crying] Although it's a bit aggrieved in the early stage, it also reflects the normal plot of an ordinary person's time travel. The subsequent plot is also very good and the plot is also very fascinating. Come on, author

Although it is not a good novel, the protagonist is still a bit too mediocre, so I deducted one star. Having said the bad things, here are the good things. The fighting is exciting, the character descriptions are vivid and three-dimensional, it's a hodgepodge, and you can see many characters from games and anime, which is also a good feeling.

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that it ended quickly because of unsatisfactory results. The logic is very clear, and everyone feels that they are truly alive, rather than simply writing a little more powerfully like some chat group books, where the original appearance of the person cannot be seen.

There is no problem with the description, and the unreasonable parts have been explained and supplemented in advance. The world view and world are just too small. It feels like it will be finished after cutting off more than half. It does not mean that there are a few planets or something, and the country has not been released after going around. Otherwise it's pretty good