After the Villain of the Apocalypse Was Reborn, His Aura Revived!

How should I put it, although the subject matter is still relatively good, "Apocalypse" + "Revival of Spiritual Energy", but after writing these 31 chapters, I can only say that they are average. 1. The main background of your novel is the "apocalypse", but you have too few "apocalyptic" elements and too many "aura" elements. The writing style is not very good, making it very contradictory to read. 2. The settings of several "Children of Luck" and "Heroine" have gone beyond the two elements you set, and it makes people feel that they are postponing the "apocalypse" and first go through "ordinary cities" to "urban superpowers" and finally get to the "apocalyptic superpowers" 3. The settings are contradictory. It is clear that the time for the "end of the world" to come is inevitable, but some of the opportunities gained from "Children of Destiny" exceed the time of the "end of the world". 4. Regarding the "female protagonist" issue, you have realized from a "female protagonist" and a "supporting character" that "luck" can be increased in some ways, so you should pay more attention to it, especially the characters related to the "lucky son". The most recent role is the "female protagonist", even if it is a "passer-by" female protagonist, this is the fastest way to approach and obliterate. Unless you can kill 100% instantly with one move 5. The pace of the plot is too slow. Except for the beginning, Chapter 31 is all about "spiritual energy". If it weren't for the title, I would have forgotten that it was about the "apocalypse". It's better to write the opening system directly and give you a "spiritual energy" novice gift package, and then enter the "apocalypse"

Author, why do I feel that your writing is not like a villain, like a protagonist or a villain? When you see other people writing villains, they immediately become like eunuchs. Who gives him a chance? Just let him become a woman. Isn't he good? You also delay time. It's like eunuchs.

This is the rebirth of a villain, and I can't say enough about the Holy Mother.