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Bingshang went from being rescued to savior, which is so cool. Because of the letter from her previous life, she made it clear that she had a definite preference for Xiao Lin that was not affected by love. She could live a new life and plan everything. She was neither a black man nor a virgin. The plot was very reasonable. Su Su's setting is also better than in the drama, and it fits the perception of the goddess. The goddess will not fall in love with Tantai Jin, who slaughters all the immortals, but she will not give up saving him. Su Su's rescue of Tantai Jin should be like Guanyin enlightening the red boy, restraining and persuading with patience and perseverance, and even self-sacrifice in exchange for the villain to put down the butcher's knife. A small personal love can make the devil repent, but it always feels too pale.

This book really appeals to my taste. Many of the characters' inappropriate behaviors have been changed to some extent. The fate of each character is very reasonable and fair. I highly recommend [sending my heart]

The layout is very beautiful. Ye Xiwu and Li Susu are completely different. Li Susu is more like a goddess. Ye Bingshang also counterattacked in her life and seized this opportunity. She did not have to attack Tantai Jin, the person who killed her. She was just more confident in her love for Xiao Lin and believed that Xiao Lin would be her only forever preference.

Finally found the article by Ye Bingshang and Xiao Lin, I love the author so much😭

The male and female protagonists and the male and female protagonists here are normal people. It would be great if TV series were shot like this. This drama will not be laughed at low

This time I saw the divinity of Li Susu, not for a man. In fact, I am quite curious. In the original work, when Li Susu merged with the evil spirit, did he ever apologize to Ye Xiwu? But there may be, but it's not like in the author's book. The author's writing is very good [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This book is a blast. Li Susu in it is a real goddess. The goddess loves the world. Ye Bingshang is also good. She got the freedom she really wanted. Tantai Jin also escaped from the fate of becoming a demon. The gods and demons also have a wonderful life. In the ending, the last two chapters have sublimated the idea. The author is so awesome. I like this kind of plot that is logical, righteous, and well-structured. Let me say it again, Li Susu in this book is the goddess, what kind of ghost character is she in the TV series.

Compared to Ye Bingshang, I want to see the cp of Yi Nu and Wu Wu Zi, and the author, you are so cute. Sometimes in the chapters that are about to be finished, you can add your own reflections, and I feel that you are so cute [laughing]

The author's writing is very good. The characters such as Ye Bingshang, Xiao Lin, Li Susu, and Dan Xijin are all well portrayed. The plot development is reasonable and the ending opens up the plot directly! I haven't watched the drama and only watched the clips. I feel that the Li Susu written here is what a god should be like. He loves the world and all things, and has the common people and righteousness in his heart; I like Ye Bingshang very much. There is nothing wrong with loving yourself. He lives his own way, has his own self and thoughts, and is not controlled by the big hands behind his back. He protects the people he wants to protect; Xiao Lin I think is a very beautiful and pure person, with a clear flow in his body, very kind and righteous to the world. , Has the responsibility to the people of the country, respect and care for the people he loves, and has the courtesy of a gentleman to take into account the feelings of others; Dan Yijin has an evil bone, which he could not choose from the beginning, and has never felt a trace of kindness, which makes his character particularly evil and extreme. Fortunately, after the evil bone is destroyed, Su Su takes him to experience the beauty of the world, letting him understand that the people of the country will be better under Xiao Lin's rule, and that emotions are two-way rather than one-way. Even though Xiao Lin died at the end of the article, I felt very sorry for it. I still hope that they can be more perfect and stay by each other's side! But Bingshang doesn't feel sorry, and Xiao Lin doesn't either, because they know that everyone is a member of all living beings, so they are willing to sacrifice for the righteousness, giving up small love for great love [crying]

The writing is a bit immature at the beginning, but the plot is exciting and the characters are more fleshed out. Li Susu is a true goddess in this book, and Bingshang and Xiao Lin are also happy in their first life. Tantai Jin also has a good ending and understands what love is

I like it. Will this book be updated? There has been no update for 19 days [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

Love this book! ! The Li Susu here is the goddess Li Susu! ! If it weren't for that drama and the original work, I would have wanted to drink Tai Jin and Sister Bing in this. Personally, I am crazy about the characters who imprison sick people (of course, only when I read the novel)

It's very beautiful, I like it very much. But can the author be faster? [Grieved] [Crying]

It's great that the author's wife wrote about what a real goddess should do, and also saw the growth of the original male protagonist. It describes the growth of Sister Bing, breaking free from the shackles of her written destiny, and blooming for freedom. She is confident and strong, lets go and is free and easy. Love is important to her but it is not the whole meaning of her life.

It's indeed better than the original [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] This is really much better than what Teng Luo Weizhi wrote. I am not criticizing, I am just talking about my feelings (I bought and read the original book, and also finished watching the drama). The portrayal of Tantai Jin Li Su Su Ye Bingshang is really better than both the original book and the drama.

I have read a lot of fanfics about Ye Bingshang, and this one is the best. Both the plot and the character settings are very good. I highly recommend [like]

It was well written, but the ending was really too rushed. Ye Bingshang did not turn back into a concubine, and Si Ying did not recognize her sister.

This is the best fanfic I've ever read.

Really well written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's so exciting, every character is so well written

I like this very much. I don't deliberately discredit anyone. Ye Bingshang, Li Susu, and Xiao Lin in this fanfic are all very good, and Tantai Jin is also pretty good. There is no treacherous character.

The concept is very good, the characters have obvious growth, and they do not focus on making the characters bad. There are no bad guys in the strict sense. In the end, the characters have a great ideological pattern.

After reading it, I can't bear to leave it

Looks good, you won't lose money if you invest in it

This is the life my sister Bing should have!

This book is really great

A goddess should have a son of a goddess!

Good-looking people will always change. I always remember this sentence.

It's really beautiful, the pattern opens up directly

Super, super good-looking, really recommended!