The Path of the Discarded Pawn

The writing is very good and the plot is very new. The only disadvantage is that sentences appear in paragraphs. Most people read novels on their mobile phones. When a page full of words suddenly comes to them, the first reaction is usually to quit. If the author wants to write a novel again, he can read a few books in Tomato and learn how to break a large paragraph into small paragraphs. (I took a class before when I wanted to write a novel. One very important thing is segmentation. Of course, the class is free, and I have never written a novel.) In fact, it feels like a pity. Everything is good, but the segmentation is not good. Really, poor segmentation can ruin a good book. For example, the same book has different sections There are not many segments in one section, and it looks like there are too many words, and there is no suspicion of moisture. Not to mention whether anyone likes this kind of thing, the eyes will hurt after a long time, and it looks too tired, so I don't recommend it (I feel like my eyes are not working well when I read it now, and I am confused when I look at it. My eyes are too tired) The other section is a little more detailed, such as one sentence into a paragraph, or a few sentences into a paragraph. This kind of thing seems effortless, and some may even say that the author is very diligent (this kind of person will not feel very tired after reading hundreds of chapters a day, but his eyes will be sore when he is not reading) Another suggestion is that when writing a long novel, only a few thousand words per chapter will be enough. If the length is more than four to five thousand words, people will feel tired. If it is too little, people will not be able to read enough. Just control it to about two thousand to four to five thousand words. In addition, I would like to support the author. I really wanted to be an author in the past. Although I didn't do it, it was so good that I realized the difficulty of writing and the sadness of not having readers. A brief ending, the author must take a look ~ 😳 I've finished reading. After reading it, I saw that each paragraph written by the author is not very long. I sincerely suggest that you can start each paragraph with a short paragraph, otherwise it will scare readers away. However, I am very glad that I was lucky enough to see it. The author is really amazing 😳

It turns out that I can write book reviews myself. I would like to see everyone at the end help me write a book review. It doesn't matter if I feel that my writing is not good enough. After all, I still want to see the ratings when writing a novel.

This book is still somewhat interesting. Although it is not long, there are no pitfalls to fill in after reading it. There are some highlights. Please encourage me.