Star Dome Railway: Dreaming About the Stars and Rivers

The writing is very good, the logic is online, and it does not violate the plot too much. However, it may be due to the slow pace and slow promotion that there are fewer people reading it. Em... It should be better if the number of words increases. Congratulations in advance to the author for his data to take off. When I saw the 99+ red dots, I almost thought I had been bullied by the Internet. After clicking in, I found that the author's comment area was full of hunting, and there were a lot of Ah Ha Lezi people.

1. The most important thing about fanfiction is not to be OOC. 2. The writing style is delicate, the structure is clear, and the description is detailed, a level rarely seen in Star Iron fan fiction. 3. Don't stick to the main line, and have a full understanding of the world view. 4. The pace is slightly slower, suitable for watching and thinking. Very good piece. However, as of the first volume, my impression is that the pace is indeed a bit slow. My feeling is that after the boxing gym incident, there can be less description of characters and details, and less pen and ink, because I feel that the characters and the background of the lower area that I want to express are very full at that time, which can speed up the speed. My humble opinion, if necessary, I will change it, if not, I will encourage you. I hope that the more I write, the better it will be. Among the fanfics I have seen so far, it ranks first in my heart.

The plot is exciting. It does not use traditional rebirth and time travel, which adds some interest to the story. The protagonist does not know the personalities and status of the characters in it, nor does he know what achievements his friends in the underground area will have in the future. There is also no protagonist who is very powerful at the beginning and beats everything. Among the Bengtie fanfics I have read, this one is very interesting, but there are too few.

(If you don't want to read it, you can just read the last paragraph of the summary) This book is the best Beng Tie article I have ever seen. Compared with Bai Luo next door, Jiang Jiang from Azur Lane, and Poria from Beng San, they are all quite outstanding in fan fiction. The characters in this book are very strong, very vivid and addictive, and the author will have a good future. This book is really great. If I have to talk about shortcomings, there is nothing but a knife, which is unacceptable to Tai Dao. This kind of knife can deepen emotions, which is more like an advantage than a shortcoming. The feelings the protagonist gives me, I think of a collection of contradictions, calm and crazy, whether it is the emotions and personalities of Silver Wolf, Kafka, Brunia, Seele, Cocolia and other characters. Still some habits are very consistent with the settings. The earliest snow globe made the character of Brunia emotionally perfect, almost like herself. The plot of Belloberg fully demonstrates this dark law of survival. The Great Guardian must protect everyone, the nobles must be careful about the liquidation of the Great Guardian, the people in the upper class must be careful about the nobles, and the people in the lower class want to live in the upper class... In the game Bengtie, Belloberg did not give me much impression. This book can be said to have deepened the background of the game. I hope the author can complete or deepen this history in the 1.1 Beloberg museum event, or let the protagonist participate in this event (if it violates the main line, don't pay attention to my suggestion). If there is a main plot, I still hope that the pioneers and the protagonist will get to know each other. Can I choose the female protagonist (I simply think the female protagonist is good-looking). Finally, let me summarize this article. The recommended points are that the missions have strong characters and the writing is good. If you play the game, you can better understand the background and content of the game. There is no cliché to follow the plot, it is very thoughtful, and the plot is not long but concise. It is not suitable for those with a weak heart because there is a scene with a knife. The protagonist is very indifferent to himself and wants to see Young Master Pianpian go. My last words are just for reference. Please read the article for details before drawing a conclusion.

A good Bengtie fanfic, there is no invincible character at the beginning, and the male protagonist is well portrayed and very realistic. "When you are in darkness, your heart is toward the light." I have stocked up on more than 90 of them and finished them in one click. If I have nothing to do, go play some Cocolia.

Very good, everything about the characters has to be restored. Anyway, I can't find any faults. The game just came out, not long ago. I don't know how the author plans to write it. Should he create his own plot and wait for the main line to be connected, or wait for the main line directly? I originally thought it would suck because of the low income, but it didn't. The ending was really awesome.

Knives, not many, but fun! So cool! Author! More! Is this your strength? Family, friendship, painful parting, ah! What a wonderful story! The dusty feelings are waiting for his opener, who can only observe in secret! ! How! How! It's full of fun! Praise Aha!

The author's writing style is really good, and he has a good grasp of the characters of the original characters without destroying the original characters. The story is also well designed, with one kind, one kind... In short, I hope the author will work hard ↖(^ω^)↗ and continue to update This book is finally no longer restricted, and you can see it by searching for keywords, oh oh oh oh! [Cry][cry][laugh][laugh]

The writing is really good. I like it very much. Come on (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

The real book is really good to read, and the plot of Bengtieyuan is well handled. The foreshadowing is very deep, and it is not mindless. It is worth reading. The plot line of Bengtieyuan has not been fully revealed yet, and the server has only been launched for less than a month. How can the author write such a good-looking novel? , The writing is very powerful, and it really shows how difficult life is for children in Xiacheng District. After all, Bengtie is still a game for the public. It is impossible to tell us the cruelty of the lower district, and the lower district cannot be like in the game, with only a few villains. , In a situation where life is difficult, not only will wanderers be the villains, but this book truly explains what the lower class should be like, and the protagonist depicted is also quite mature. Children in the orphanage are all precocious, and Bronya's bond as the protagonist is even more It gives the protagonist the feeling of family, enriches the character's emotional lines, and gives people a sense of reality. The description of the plot characters is also quite perfect. It is really worth watching, but it may not be so friendly to people who have not played Bengtie because the terminology in some places may not be understood.

Beng Tie is the best fanfic, bar none. The characters are vivid, Kama plays a stable role, Silver Wolf Black Tower has more scenes and is more interesting than other stories, it's just Blade [face covering]. Chu Mu's experience is reasonable and exciting, and closely follows the world line. Must have five stars [blowing kiss]

The best fanfic I have ever read. I have been very moved by many Genshin Impact fanfics before, but this is the only one that made me cry three times with less than 100 pages. Although a large part of it is because of my rich emotions, it is also a very good book for me. It feels great that the main character is a local, rather than a time-travelling scheming boy. The life of Yalilo No. 6 Is also very well depicted, very real, and very appropriate. What's even more awesome is that the author actually added light cones to many plots! The only ones I know are "We Are Earth Fire" and "The Old Man and the Sea", which are amazing.

I think this is Tomato's best Star Iron fanfic so far, I hope the author can stick to it

It is one of the best fan novels. I regard him as the second Charles IX and the second My Neighbor Totoro. It is science fiction and suspense, and the graphics are realistic. Even if I have played Bengtie, I still feel that he is inconsistent with the game. It can be said that I usually stop reading novels after reading a few chapters, but now that I have read it to the end. . . . I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs. Thanks. [Thinking][thinking]

This book is quite beautiful. The author's emotional rendering is very good and the writing style is good. But if you like reading sweet articles... Why don't you wait a little longer? Maybe it will be sweeter in the future. Anyway, now I don't see a sugary old dean, Swarovski, salted duck, and a bunch of knives. I am a tearful person, but I feel a little uncomfortable. I rarely post long-word book reviews, so I don't know how to describe him. This is a new book, and the score is low because there are few people. Don't worry if you are pursuing high scores. The author's writing style completely matches the high scores. Successor of the classic Mi family knife technique

How to put it this way, overall, it's pretty good. The characters and emotional descriptions are pretty good, but when I saw the back part, I felt it wasn't that interesting. It's not a bad thing, it's just my personal opinion. In short, I hope that the author can continue to work hard and do better on the original basis [smile][smile][smile][smile] I watched it again. The reason why I didn't think it was good at first may be because the previous writing was so good, but the quality was not that good for a while and I felt a little uncomfortable. In short, I still prefer to read the author's original plot. I hope the author will update more original plots. Always support the author [laughs]

It is very consistent with the character and image of the characters in the game, and a few NPCs are also vivid. The plot of the story has ups and downs, and the twists and turns make people unable to extricate themselves. Well, I think it is the best among all the Bengtie fans.

Very good, the writing is very good, the plot may be because the server has just been launched, so there are many details that cannot be perfected, but it is still above average for the newly launched server, but the update is very slow. Reminiscing about the past, there are still a few months left, and this book is already two years old. Time flies so fast. This book should be the number one among fans, right? Anyway, no matter which Tomato list it is on, scroll down and the top 100 will all have it, except for gifts. . . The best of the best, we have also eaten the fine chaff

This is the best Beng Tie novel so far, both in terms of writing style and storyline. It feels depressing when reading the whole article, which shows that the author has a good control over the details and atmosphere creation. It is also the highest rated among the Beng Tie novels. Finally, as a digression, this book seems to have been restricted. Search the Star Dome Railway Points for high scores. The top one is the Fu Xuan Routine with a score of 9.3. I scrolled down until it was not rated yet and did not see the book. "The rating of this book is 9.5. Logically speaking, it should be above the Fu Xuan Routine. However, I couldn't find this book after searching through the entire Star Dome fanfic. I could only find it by searching the title of this book."

The characters are well drawn and the plot is very attractive. It can be seen that the author has carefully studied the world view and story of Star Iron, and his imagination of the parts that are not in the game is also very reasonable. It is quite interesting [laughs] If it could be faster, changing the title of the book would be more attractive [Thinking]

Very good. This is one of the Bengtie fanfics that is very successful in character creation and portrayal. The life-threatening cruelty the male protagonist developed in Xiacheng District is very real, and it is also full of humanity and rationality. I hope the author will continue to work [Please update][Please update]

It is a very good fanfic, not a cool one. The plot is well-organized and the characters are very realistic. There are a lot of knives and you can skip it and go directly to the plot of Kafka's adoption without affecting the viewing. Anyway, it is a strong recommendation!

I like the character creation, especially Kama. Other novels write Kama as a silly bad woman. Kama in this novel really likes it, and the story is very novel. I like this original story very much, and the various tasks are also very good. The images of Silver Wolf and Black Tower are also very similar to those in the game, at least I imagined it to be similar to this book. After reading this book, I feel that the other books behind it are not as good. It is not as good as this one. I always feel that something is missing. I hope there will be more updates from the author at 11 o'clock every day 😂

It's a very good book. As a Bengtie player who started with UID 118, I admire it very much. I read it at first because of Kafka, but what really attracted me was the plot in it. I think it is quite good for the shaping of the characters. I haven't read the novel properly in a year. It took me five or six hours and I read about 100 chapters. I hope the author can continue to work hard and make the subsequent plots better.

It's very exciting. The writing style is one of the best among the many Genshin Impact novels I've read. The characters are very well drawn and the characters are not broken. This is very good. Especially the protagonist is very vivid. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Also, uh, stop playing with old jokes. High-quality novels should be created by yourself. The jokes are right, like ice cream, sundown fruit, etc. In the Genshin Impact fanfic. Well, I don't know if two and a half years is a coincidence or intentional. The last sentence is that I hope the author will continue to work hard. I haven't seen such high-quality novels for a long time. It can be considered a high productivity, but recently it has become three chapters a day, which is not enough.

The writing is very good [like] [like], and the characters are very well-drawn, such as Lu Wan from Deep Blue Star, the old dean of Yaliluo No. 6, And Chu Mu. It makes people feel that they are not reading a cold text, but observing a living person with flesh and blood. The plot is compact and organized, all the holes dug are filled in, and it's interesting and relatable. The disadvantage is that there are a lot of knives, so those with low tears should be careful. [Hold face][Hold face][Hold face] It is recommended to start from the beginning and don't skip chapters, otherwise you will miss a lot of plot Overall, I highly recommend everyone to read this book [Like]

It took me two days to read the world you created in more than two hundred days. Maybe these two days are too short, but in the world of Xingtie, I will always remember Chu Mu! The best Star Iron fanfic I've seen so far. I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars!

Very good, very good. Novels of this quality should not even appear on Tomato. This kind of character creation is simply like going to Tomato to fry the fish pond. I unilaterally declare that this novel is the best Star Dome Railway fanfic on Tomato (the premise is that you must have the patience to read it. Character creation is a long process. If you only want to read cool stories about random killings, then this novel is not suitable)

This is one of the best Mi family fanfics I have ever seen. Let's talk about the plot first. The author has definitely carefully studied the plot of Star Iron. There are certain details in the article that you would never know if you hadn't read books everywhere. Secondly, the writing style, needless to say, is really good. The characters are described very delicately and the emotions are very rich. It touches people's hearts. I stayed up late at night and cried three times while watching it. The writing is very good. I hope I won't be as eunuch as the zero-seat executive next door.

It's really beautiful [crying] [crying] The emotions are well executed! It's easy to get yourself involved in the plot... There are knives... But there's also happiness. The author writes the plot very well! The writing is superb! There are also foreshadowings, and the pits have been filled! It's simply a masterpiece among Beng Tie fans! Refuse to refute! If I had to praise this book, I wouldn't have enough words to praise it! Also, can the CP of the protagonist of this book be a pharmacist? [Crying] [Crying] A character who carries out his past and present lives! In the previous life, he betrayed the pharmacist... He forgave the protagonist before his death, and later became the Star God of Fertility, and would save the protagonist... Even though it was out of selfless character... The protagonist did not compensate the pharmacist in this life, which is really hard for me [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] The novel has been updated to more than 130 chapters. I don't know the plot behind it. If the author sees this comment, he must pay more attention to the protagonist when assigning CP to the protagonist (preferably he is the pharmacist!). [Cry][cry]