The Maid's Strategy in Red Mansions

To be honest, the writing style is really good. It has the feeling of Red Mansion, but it is not complicated and lengthy. I was only halfway through watching it, and I was confused by the heroine's sudden emotional line. What's going on? ? ? Especially after I recovered from my illness, I went to the [male protagonist]'s house and looked at [the male protagonist] and "I couldn't help but make my eyes turn red." I only watched half of it and wasn't sure if it was true. Not sisters! Why are you suddenly in love? Oh my god! ! I'm really confused! Before time travel➕After time travel, we must be in our 30s. You and a teenage boy (from a modern perspective) looked at each other and smiled, and you suddenly fell in love so much that you paid for it out of your own pocket. You really made me cry to death. You've only met a few times, and you're telling me that love comes so fast, like a tornado? ? ? ! ! (I know some people will say: This is a red mansion background, and most teenagers fall in love with each other. Why do they like each other? Why are you so nosy? If you don't like it, just leave! I want to say: I can accept seeing each other as teenagers and getting married, and I can also accept liking each other. But at least your emotional line should be more natural! ! ! In the first few chapters, I talked about being self-reliant, self-sufficient, and grooming myself to be a nanny. Then I immediately blushed, my heart skipped a beat, and I smiled shyly, "Hey, I seem to have singled out [smile]"? ? ! When I look at these pictures, I always feel that the heroine is like a blood package for the hero. As for the heroine in the front, I am ready for the heroine to become more and more awesome. There's a bit of um in the back... It's hard to comment, I want to give men tools, I want to become a little wife) I have never written such a long review before, mainly because the previous one was really good. Suddenly, it flashed into my mind. Now it is crying and begging me not to read it, for fear of being in a big trap later [rolls eyes] I made a mistake in grading. I'll come back and correct it.

It's so good. There are too few articles about Chuan Red Mansions that I can read carefully. It would be great if the author wrote more. It would be great if he wrote a second part about married life and Daiyu [Thoughts]

The story is written very smoothly, and I read it in one sitting. It felt very satisfying. I like this kind of red mansion story where Sister Lin has a good ending, but why does she have to hide her identity for Xue Yan? Wouldn't it be nice to be self-sufficient and redeem yourself and find a good home?

Among all the red houses, it is quite good. It is very in line with the sense of the times. It is about romance but is sensible and disciplined. Unlike others, it is talking about girls who are not allowed to sit at the table when they are seven years old, and at the same time they are giving and receiving in private. And the whole article is very coherent. It is one of the few novels that I can finish.

Very well written! Having brains does not mean being blindly reckless based on knowing the plot. Without Bailian or the heart of a holy mother, you must have a clear conscience within your ability. If others are good to me, I will be good to others! A more real human heart. It may not be comparable to other novels, but among Red Mansions fanfics, it's pretty good.

I have read it all, and I have to say that it is very well written, the characters are deeply portrayed, and the character is nice and generous. I really like what I say and do. The ending of "The Butterfly Effect" is very good, but I didn't write the endings of the other Twelve Beauties. It would be nice to explain them.

I've finished watching it, and it's not bad. The heroine is perfect as a maid, with a delicate mind, a calm temperament, and outstanding skills. The plot of the entire maid stage is also well written, with rigorous details and clear descriptions. However, the ending is too hasty. It feels like it just ended as the maid and started to feel proud, and it ended with many foreshadowings going nowhere. The prince and princess lived happily ever after. It's very uncomfortable.

It's really great and very clever, but the status given in the extra chapter is a bit high. It's not like a little person's counterattack, but the reason why the ugly duckling became the white swan is because the ugly duckling was originally the white swan. This can also be said to be a failure, but some readers will like it, so you can refer to it yourself

The writing is very good, and the writing style is also good, it is worth reading! Personally, I think it is very good for Xue Yan to marry as the adopted daughter of Mrs. Later, even if the male protagonist is in high school, Mrs. Xing's identity as the adopted daughter is enough.

It's not a bad idea to stay up late and watch [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]. The plot of the whole text is compact and I held my breath several times when Xue Yan cursed people. [Laughing and crying] The heroine is sober and works hard. Whether it is embroidery or cooking, she has gained proficiency through a little hard work and is not a so-called gold finger. I am very proud of this. The time-travel companion Mrs. Xing's efforts to change the fate of those close to her are not the traditional business of having nothing to do with herself, hanging high and watching your tall building collapse. The characters are vivid. Worth watching.

The front part is good, but the emotional scenes are not good to watch, and the behavior of the male and female protagonists before they get together is a bit out of character. Moreover, Daiyu and the others didn't explain the ending clearly. However, the plot is compact and not procrastinating. Except for the emotional scenes, it is written delicately and smoothly, making people want to keep watching. Like

Very nice. It's just that the male and female protagonists don't have a sense of CP. The emotional scenes were awkward. The rest of the writing is pretty good. Maybe it's because women had to get married under the ancient system, so maybe the heroine can only look for one man, which is considered normal.

Generally speaking, the writing is good. The female protagonist has no golden fingers, and the male protagonist can only be considered average. I read in the comment section that the male protagonist is not good or anything, but I don't think so. When the male protagonist heard that the female protagonist was made a princess and was the child of a princess, he said: If I had known, I would have married him home earlier. He was worried that the heroine's elders would not approve of this marriage. They had originally agreed to get married, but the heroine was suddenly granted the title of princess, and it was normal for the hero to be worried. After all, it's wrong to be a good match! As for the male protagonist not being happy to find his lost family for the female protagonist, that's because the author didn't write it down in detail and didn't express it.

The characterization and description of details are both good [Send Heart]. The emotional line feels a bit stiff, maybe it's because I'm used to watching non-CP or brainless heartthrobs [face covering]

The whole book is concise and short, and the angle is also well chosen. Starting from the minor character affects the entire plot. I hope the author can write a good book from Mrs. Xing's point of view. It is the best among the Red Mansion novels.

Every detail is perfect. The main line of Lin Daiyu has overcome all the pitfalls of Daiyu in The Red Mansion. In the later stage, Snow Goose is a bit too powerful, but it doesn't have any special golden fingers. It's just that it's a bit hasty to put the final ending directly into the extra chapter. If I write slowly, I won't say 80 chapters.

A very different adaptation of The Red Mansion. The Jia Mu here is an old feudal lord who truly cares for her juniors and understands the importance. It was really not easy to be a maid in that feudal dynasty world, and you had to live cautiously every day. Very true.

Overall, it's pretty good. The emotional line is a little abrupt, the male protagonist's previous behavior was not very likable, and the male and female protagonists were caught off guard. But apart from the emotional aspect, the heroine is still very good, overall it's good [cool]

[Like] Beautiful! I can't stop listening and watching~~ Five stars, five stars! ! ! A very good "Traveling Through the Red Mansion", it is refreshing~~ I have always believed that the meaning of time travel is to punish evil and promote good in different time and space. The heroine did it, and I like it very much~~ Plain and simple is the real thing~~ Tomato friends, come and watch [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Except for the emotional line between the male and female protagonists, which is a bit abrupt, everything else is very good. It is a rare Red Mansion novel and is worth a read.

The overall plot is not bad, but the ending is a bit rushed. The sisterly relationship between Lin Daiyu and Xue Yan is still very good, and it could be exaggerated a little more. There is also no additional information about Lin Daiyu's marriage. Although it is rushed, it is still acceptable.

The writing has a very ancient charm and does not skip the drama. I like girls who are independent and self-reliant. Make yourself a skill by learning calligraphy and improving your embroidery skills. Moreover, Jia She and his wife who traveled through time in the article also liked it very much. It's just that the ending was a bit rushed.

Overall, the writing is quite good, but the cp assigned to the heroine is not very good. Sometimes the description is a bit embarrassing and a bit greasy, but this is all personal feeling. Others may think it is not bad. Anyway, there are relatively few emotional lines, which does not affect the overall reading experience.

Among the Red Mansions novels I have read, this one was more to my liking. Perhaps I felt too sorry for the tragic fate of the characters in the original work and hoped that they would have a better life, so I chose to read a few Red Mansions books. Most of them abandoned the books midway. Although the story was changed a bit, it was the ending I wanted to see, and it could calm down the depression I felt after reading the original novel. Thanks to the author for his hard work!

Not bad👍A Dream of Red Mansions is the first chapter-backward novel I read. I'm very impressed. It's very acceptable for the lovely author to connect such a plot with the theme of time travel. It's fresh and good-looking. I will look at other works about Dream of Red Mansions.

It's a good read. I'm just in the tired period of reading. This novel immediately lifted my spirit. It's well written. The time traveler changes everything she can change as a maid, but it's not the kind of forceful one. The ending is too hasty, and Xue Yan's life experience is only revealed at the end.

Very good looking is HE and one on one. Moreover, the protagonist really gained recognition from others based on his own abilities and was eventually recognized by his family. He also relied on his own abilities to have a good relationship with his future mother-in-law and made his husband respect her. Moreover, the portrayal of Daiyu and other characters was also very good.

Very well written. The characters and relationships in it are all handled very well, but I still skipped a long section without reading it [laughing and crying] But this article is a bit too focused on the heroine, especially when the heroine doesn't have a golden finger yet, [laughing and crying]

Xue Yan is really a good girl, loyal and astute as a slave. She did not settle for wealth in the Jia family, but kept learning and practicing cooking and embroidery. She is a girl with a big chest. If you have a talent that is popular everywhere, you have a heart that keeps learning.

The Red Mansion fanfic I've read is pretty good.