Crazy Criticism of the Broken-Winged Golden Bird of the Fallen Angel

It's very well written and has interesting ideas. I look forward to the follow-up development.

To be honest, this setting is really interesting, and then it lies in the terrifying state of the world. Let's start with the ocean. The ocean is really a dangerous place. It is written in a very scary and dark way, but the overall atmosphere feels so dark, giving people a depressing mood, but this is also normal. The character of the male protagonist is also quite interesting, with a Cruel element to it. I just happened to read a comic like this, and it was really good. It is the center of this world, leaving only the male protagonist and the female protagonist. For example, what people are very concerned about are the eggs in the stomach. What kind of setting is this? However, the author's descriptions of the creatures in the ocean and some mutations make people feel very fresh and exciting. I hope I can continue to write, come on, author. Finally, I will write more about the sweet daily life of young lovers, because I think the heroine is a little pushy, but I know it is normal in this situation (the heroine is independent), but I think most people will choose to rely on this strong relationship.

I really like this short article that doesn't drag on. It's concise and a bit sci-fi. This is my first impression after reading it. Divided into two short articles, I personally feel that there is nothing over-exaggerated or delayed, and the words are consistent to the end. Want to know if the story in the next new book is a companion piece? Will we finish writing the story of this "god" who did not appear? Will they be connected and become the development trend of the world written by the author? The current reading is okay. I hope that more and more readers who like this type of novel will also read this book. I will give it a five-star rating and hope that its rating will get higher and higher~[KISS][KISS] Come on! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's good-looking, and I feel like I have a sense of immersion throughout the whole process. The author also writes about human nature very thoroughly. I feel that the deeds in this novel are quite fantastic. The sea water pours in, and then the world turns into an ocean world or something. It feels really weird, and I really like the senseless love that gods have for people. But he also discusses the unequal relationship between gods and humans, and the heroine is also very rational in recognizing some of the bad aspects of human nature. Just understand that no one will love you unconditionally, and the heroine is also very wise, I think. Ah, I am really looking forward to the next development, and I hope the author will continue to update.

I feel like those OC people and those who draw will like it. . . The description is very touching on xp and touch points. . , It has a crazy feeling, it feels like a niche, I like this very much. . . Teacher, you are awesome. .

It's very beautiful. It's my favorite type. I hope the author can continue to update it and don't stop updating it. It's really good. I like [love] [love] [love] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [adoration] [love] [love] [love] [flying kiss] [adoration] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [love] [love] [love] [love]. I'm looking forward to it, and the theme is quite novel.

I can't understand Smecta, but I'm still attracted by the strange world view created by the author. I like this dull, grotesque, desperate dark green and gray feeling so much, just like the straight-to-me The disadvantage is that the heroine of each short story is different, so I don't agree with each other. This is my problem, but I still like it very much. I finally wish that more people will like the teacher's novels.

I looked in a daze and didn't understand anything, but I just wanted to watch [shy]

The content is very exciting, but I personally feel uncomfortable watching it. It depends on different people's values. Xuanwu is perverted, but I like it! [Shy] The heroine is pregnant, and I feel a little uncomfortable just looking at her. She is pregnant with six eggs, six eggs. It would be okay if they were all turtles. All of them are different. Also, the introduction to the book clearly states that the girl has a pet that is very human. What the hell? Obviously he picked it up, and knowing how he would be expected to use it to change his life after handing him over to the experimenter was a bit uncomfortable, but not much. Three seconds of silence for Xuanwu in front.

I read the book last month and I thought it was very well written. I was in a trance when I read it in the middle of the night. The story about the transformation of sea creatures and the plan to kill gods. After reading it, I felt that it was very different from other novels. It had a weird and grotesque aesthetic, and the heroines were not stupid and very sober. Then, the recent nuclear sewage discharge in Japan, the overwhelming panic on the Internet, and the possible change of marine life. The first thing I thought of was this novel. I felt that if the end came, it would not be like the novel said. The island will be destroyed and the city will be flooded. It will be a mental shock. I cry, the world is really scary (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)

The very novel feeling, the intertwining of emotions and the dreamy colors made me fall deeply into it. Forgive me for writing a book review for the first time, but I really can't describe the feeling. Overall, it's awesome!

Novels of this style are really rare, Tai Ku La [thoughts]

The writing style is better than many so-called good books on Tomato. If you read it quickly, you will not understand it. Many of them are in the details. Compared with that kind of white text, I directly point out the things on the surface for fear that you will not understand. I still prefer to use my brain. However, readers on Tomato may still read more non-fiction articles.

What an interesting setting! ! I like it very much

Logical/not brainless/reasonable plot/romance/apocalyptic/abnormal/outside

Really, he writes very well. That kind of weirdness, horror, that kind of level is very well grasped. It vividly describes the complex psychology of human beings in the apocalypse, and also describes the tit-for-tat confrontation between land animals, marine animals, and humans in the apocalypse, with the weak and the strong eating each other. It does not describe the goodness and light of human beings, nor their darkness and justice. It just uses some beautiful, daily, and real language to express people's fears in the apocalypse, the sense of faith hidden in people's bones to survive at all costs, and the darkness in which they can do anything in order to survive. I haven't read a novel like this for a long time. In other novels, darkness is darkness. Occasionally there is a little light in the heart, but it eventually disappears due to external reasons. The light is just stubborn light. Under the light lies decayed justice. The feeling of wanting to change but being powerless. I can only numbly obey the false justice from the top to protect people. In the end, it only brings people false justice and strong hatred and hatred. Finally, I hope the author can continue writing and finish this novel, instead of giving up and running away halfway through the novel like other authors. Thank you.

It's so beautiful, I really like this [shy] I love the author so much, this article is just jumping on my xp, Zundu likes it so much [shy]

It's very beautiful. You can tell that the author... Can't think of any words to express it. Anyway, he is very good at writing and his education is not low.

It is unusual and very fascinating. Some of the descriptions in the article are very beautiful, with a science fiction and suspense color. The only drawback is that it is not finished. I hope the author will update it soon. [Please update]

Now I have only read the first chapter, it is so good at twisting things, this book should be considered science fiction, it can be suspenseful directly, the ending is open-ended, it can be said to be Be, not bad, the story is bold and novel, in fact, apocalyptic literature, especially the main text, is not very popular on the platform, so this type of literature has a small audience, but it is really good-looking. This book is the book I have excerpted the most. If I remember correctly, I recommend it! ! ! !

It looks good, but although the first perspective is very immersive, it is too limited because it is described based on the female protagonist's perception, and a lot of information is unclear. I'm here again~

I got up early to work overtime. This writing is so wonderful and shocking. It feels very immersive, as if such a thing really happened, but it still didn't happen.

Very imaginative, with a bit of science fiction color

Author... You should consider publishing it in the future. It is really well written and a well-deserved masterpiece.

This is my first time reading a suspense novel. It feels very exciting, but I don't understand some of it. Also, I'm a little sad that the first chapter is over. I don't know what the real conflict between the male and female protagonists is.

The imagination is good and the writing is very good. Readers should try to open their minds, otherwise they will not be able to keep up. (The writing is good, so some descriptions are occasionally awkward, cough cough🌝)

This is something I have seen. It has a fantasy theme. It is very novel and the plot is also quite fantastic. I may not understand some aspects, but I understand that things can still be connected. It is really interesting and recommended.

It's really good-looking. It feels different from the mindless Mary Sue articles on most female videos. They are easy to understand. But this one is not so easy to understand. You always need to use your brain to think about things. The logical relationship is also relatively complicated. Compared with many articles, the writing style is quite delicate.

Good! ! ! There is a feeling of wandering in the end of the world

Looking forward to the author's next content (remember it's popular, I want a signed copy^ω^)