I Walk Between Honkai and Reality

Four stars are all given for the theme and setting, and I can only give one star for the plot. How is the character of the protagonist set? Why is the plot arrangement so wonderful? In fact, some places can be omitted, and some places can be written more. The plot can not be advanced entirely around the protagonist. Write about other behind-the-scenes roles in more detail. The real-life plot I saw was the one that took off. Let's just say that the core of Herrscher shouldn't have a queen. The protagonist is connected to Honkai. It's not too much to have a Honkai protagonist. Isn't it awkward to have a male body and a female character? Let's just say, isn't it awkward when you write it? The description of the protagonist's sister is good. It can be seen that the author can write a character well, and it is an original character, which makes readers feel more comfortable. In the early stages of the book, try to avoid some strange plots as much as possible. You can bring the perspective into the reader's perspective, think about it from another person's perspective, and review the content you have written. Of course, there are not many words at the moment, otherwise I would just skip ahead. In short, when writing a book on Tomato, I am just a subjective personal opinion. Generally speaking, I hope the author can write better. After all, there are a lot of books, and there are no good books. The subject matter is not bad, and the setting is also good. I really hope that the writing can be better. Come on, author.

I hope that the protagonist will be corrupted and only protect his loved ones. What does the life and death of other people have to do with the protagonist? Hahahahahahaha Honkai Honkai destroys it.

The work is very good, come on, it is a book with great potential. Come on, author, this book will definitely become popular. It feels uncomfortable to look at me. I felt very comfortable watching his sister, but the protagonist was too restrained.

It's not as unbearable as the reviews say, it's just that the protagonist has the mentality of an ordinary person. He has gained power and wants to save the world. The world is getting more and more chaotic and he doesn't know what to do. On a certain level, it is very real. It is true that some places are quite contradictory. The previous text does not match the following text and is self-contradictory, but it is not harmful. Overall, the logic is self-consistent and it is a good book.

I believe you can write better. You can write a lot on this subject.

What can I say about this book? The protagonist is too indecisive and has a strong sense of justice. Well, I have to say here that I don't know what special meaning the author intentionally emphasizes on the issue of 18 years old. In fact, in this era of information explosion, 18-year-olds may not necessarily have a strong sense of justice. The things on the Internet are really mixed, especially for people born two thousand years later. The desire to be recognized should be around 12 to 15 years old. In fact, regardless of these things, this book is still okay, but the ending seems quite rushed. I always feel that the author still has a lot of holes to fill in. My idea is that the author will never go for the ending of a big dream, at least not at the beginning. If I could, I would give this book 90 points, four and a half stars. I hope the author can work hard!

It's a very good book, but I think Honkai's combat power is a bit low. Theoretically, Honkai depends on the strength of civilization. The stronger the civilization, the stronger Honkai. The destiny of Star God can be seen as an energy system, so it can also be seen as a civilization. Moreover, Honkai was born between the Tree of Void and the Quantum Sea, and Star God is just at the top of the Tree of Void, so I personally think Honkai should be stronger than Star God.

I think if this continues, both sides will be destroyed. A little frustrated

It's not bad, it's just uncomfortable to watch for other people. Maybe you don't want to write cool articles per se Contradiction is portrayed, good

It's not particularly good-looking, and the protagonist's character is hard to describe in one sentence, but the subject matter the author writes about is quite good. It looks so frustrating